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Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 1:44 pm
by Plague
katt wrote:For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading your little "story" and the numerous grammar errors didn't bother me at all., nor did the odd lay-out for that matter. Because it was irrelevant. The story, that's all I cared about, and I liked it.
I carefully read all the critisism.
The car crash, too much of a coincidence? Don't think so, considering its fiction. Besides, how much of a coincidence is it that all the disabled girls in the story are so attractive...
The ending I had no trouble understanding at all, I immediatelly understood they were both dead.
Bringing in the 2 corpses was unrealistic? No, in my opinion it was to make Hisao believe they were still alive and sleeping.
Maybe you could make some endings for other characters?
Because some of us, readers, do like it.
Umm, really? 1 post ever posted? Maybe I'm paranoid, but this is too strange ;)

Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 1:56 pm
by Mamen
Plague wrote:
katt wrote:For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading your little "story" and the numerous grammar errors didn't bother me at all., nor did the odd lay-out for that matter. Because it was irrelevant. The story, that's all I cared about, and I liked it.
I carefully read all the critisism.
The car crash, too much of a coincidence? Don't think so, considering its fiction. Besides, how much of a coincidence is it that all the disabled girls in the story are so attractive...
The ending I had no trouble understanding at all, I immediatelly understood they were both dead.
Bringing in the 2 corpses was unrealistic? No, in my opinion it was to make Hisao believe they were still alive and sleeping.
Maybe you could make some endings for other characters?
Because some of us, readers, do like it.
Umm, really? 1 post ever posted? Maybe I'm paranoid, but this is too strange ;)
Yeah, I just noticed how suspicious it looks xD, but I find I nice she/he made an account to voice his/her opinion.

Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:34 pm
by katt
I guess one post has to be my first one, and I thought my humble opinion was worth subscribing here :-) Does that look suspicious? Strange.

Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 11:20 pm
by griffon8
Just in case you're not clear on what the suspicion is about, the question is over whether or not you (katt) are a sock puppet for the OP.

Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 12:28 am
by Mamen
griffon8 wrote:Just in case you're not clear on what the suspicion is about, the question is over whether or not you (katt) are a sock puppet for the OP.
Why is it shocking I got good feedback? That hurts man.

Re: Epilogue (Lilly And Hisao Fan Fiction)

Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:54 am
by Mirage_GSM
While I don't agree with Katt, I don't think he and Mamen are the same person. (His post has way less mistakes than the OP's)
I'm out of here before this escalates even further.
The OP doesn't want advice, so there's not really any reason for me to post anything else here.