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Her legs are a little too thin, but other than that, I'm not seeing a problem.

I've only noticed one thing. You can see her fingers through the katana.

StudyOfWumbology wrote:I've only noticed one thing. You can see her fingers through the katana.

actually, it's the detail on the cover
i noticed it too but i just left it there

Why is she using the scope?

because my idea right now is that none of the girls are disability

That's a bad position to hold a sniper rifle...

also, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OdngW3qMMco

Sorry to be the bad guy, but what part of the picture is Lilly? All I see is an attempt to draw that well-known picture which I currently can't seem to find.

(It's a good attempt, though )

OtakuNinja wrote:Sorry to be the bad guy, but what part of the picture is Lilly? All I see is an attempt to draw that well-known picture which I currently can't seem to find.

(It's a good attempt, though )

Agreed. Same problem with your Hanako drawing. It looks nothing like Lilly. There's nothing there to indicate that it is Lilly.

I love the actual drawing though. It's very nicely designed. Just give her wavy hair and a black bow and she'll be Lilly!

Original
http://canitbesaturdaynow.com/images/fp ... 889%29.jpg

Yellow 13 wrote:Original
http://canitbesaturdaynow.com/images/fp ... 889%29.jpg

THANK YOU!

Yellow 13 wrote:Original
http://canitbesaturdaynow.com/images/fp ... 889%29.jpg

That would explain why it doesn't look much like Lilly.

Not bashing the artist, I'm just saying if you truly wanted it to be Lilly in your drawing, you could have at least attempted to alter the original picture and give the character physical aspects of Lilly. Like I said earlier, Lilly's wavy hair and bow. And most of all, her school uniform. I don't think it'd be to hard to draw the Yamaku uniform on the sipping girl.

It's still a good drawing nonetheless.

i'm working on an original
just stuck on how to express really
need some advices here

I love this. Very. Very. Much.
Not only is it helping me visualize her without the scars, but the confident pose isn't something we see in Hanako a lot, so it's kinda nice to see her a bit more out of her shell.
I approve. Excellent work.

KeiichiO wrote:Very nice. I know the picture you used, it's one of my favorites.

Still, it shows your abilities. Although, it's much harder to draw your own works, so that's why I don't think it's amazing. (Probably better than what I could do at this point though ) I still love the drawings nonetheless.

At first I was like "holy crap, this is amazing!" And I quickly shifted to "hey, this seems really familiar". Still, I'd be hard pressed to do so good of a job. Particularly if that's freehand. I don't think I could freehand that at all. My drawing abilities are nigh-nonexistant.