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Nicely done...
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...I need to find that mind bleach now...

I was thoroughly enjoying this story from Mutou's PoV. The way you occasionally drifted off on a tangent absolutely stank of Mutou and I loved it. He definitely seems to have some form of ADD.

The ending though. I don't know why, but it was the nipple clamps that got me.
Fucking lol'd
10/10

Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so... I didn't know Aura had ever taken such a hard left turn in a narrative - bravo!

Helbereth wrote:Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so...

Between shoving Mutou's junk in my face and keeping TD chapters in delay (don't think I don't know you finished the story in September) I'm almost 1/4 the way to considering removing the Aiko pic from my sig. Why.

LOL xDD
I just about died in those last few lines; as far from anything I'd have expected as it gets

Aura wrote:Pedagogy

Nice.
Throw Nomiya into the mix and that is when science meets art.
I wonder if Mutou can find the "Next Big Thing" that he's so interested.

No. Just no.

What has science done?

(Hisao's face. Hisao's face is what science has done.)

..whaaaat ttheeeeEEE FUUUCCKKK ??

It seemed serious. It seemed real.
Like a good short side story.

And then, like a slap in the face reality comes crashing down in the form of the last few sentences.

Miss Aura, I am dissapoint.
It was still funny, in its own creepy way.

I mean... okay. Yeah, definitely.

"Oh cool, Aura wrote something. Lemme check it out...hmm, this is really well written and JESUS CHRIST"

I lean back on my chair – it squeaks in protest – and ponder the essence of being a teacher.

was about to comment that the bit in the middle seemed to deliberately detract from the mood. then i read till the end and thought: never mind.

if a dev writes it it automatically becomes canon right?

Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.

Guest Poster wrote:Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.

Heresy!
A writer wrote it, so it must be true!

8 years out this thing is still cash-money