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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:40 pm
by dhws
Awesome so far! Can't wait for next one.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:05 pm
by Gilrond
Aw, man, I can't handle stories about cheating. Even Douglas Adams' Starship Titanic left me with a lump in my stomach for almost a week and now I will have a hard time sleeping tonight. Still, well written and I will keep reading. Because I'm an idiot...

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:45 pm
by God
Does Mendacium mean anything?

Great piece by the way

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:00 pm
by Brogurt
God wrote:Does Mendacium mean anything?
Yes.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:11 pm
by Guest
God wrote:Does Mendacium mean anything?

Great piece by the way
It means "A Lie".

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:50 pm
by Brogurt
Guest wrote:
It means "A Lie".
In Latin, yes. Among other things. All this will be part of the Post Scriptum.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 12:00 am
by griffon8
As a fan of Shizune, I always let the stories written before the full release that had her as the villain just role off my back. Most of them made her a caricature anyway. And now you write a story that makes fans of Hanako hate her? Duuuude… :lol:

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:01 am
by Mealforthree
Reminds me of all the trollful speculations in KSGs. Heh, this is great, but damn, Hanako, damn.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:39 am
by lblf
well crapshizzles, I take a month plus hiatus from this forum, I come back just to take a peek and there's all this good stories popping up. Looks like I'll be doing more reading again now...

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:28 pm
by Beoran
Brogurt wrote:I expected that this would crop up somewhere along the line.
The situation is going to be elaborated more on in the coming chapters, but that's all the assurance I can offer you.
Well, I do think it's in interesting alternative interpretation of Hanako, so I ask nothing more than to be convinced. Please elaborate well. :)

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:57 am
by nemz
Well that's a hell of a start. Not sure what I think of it so far, but it's going to be memorable regardless.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 1:46 pm
by scott1and
Haven't posted here for a while, but thought saying this was a good first chapter was worth while enough. I must admit it's good seeing different interpretations of characters for a change, and Hanako is a character who's been given more than a few fluffy stories. Don't get me wrong, I love fluffy stories, but a bit of angst and drama is always very welcome in my book. Looking forward to more.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:06 pm
by Brogurt
Part 2 is now up. Enjoy~

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:19 pm
by advicefrog
Brogurt wrote:Enjoy
Don't worry I did.

Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:20 pm
by Brogurt
advicefrog wrote:
Brogurt wrote:Enjoy
Don't worry I did.
But did you enjoy it with a tilde?