The Ties that bind. LillyxHisao 18+ Chapter 5 up!

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Ar Grathnos
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Re: The Ties that bind. LillyxHisao 18+ Chapter 5 up!

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Love this story. So much. It has all the right things I'd want from a KS fanfic.

Especially the Shizune abuse. I hate her so damn much when she gets that "I KNOW NO ACCEPTABLE SOCIAL NUANCES SO FUCK YOU" mentality, it was even in Act 1. ~_~
My order of favorites; Hanako=Lilly>=Rin>=Emi>>>>Shizune
I'm crazy, what of it?
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Re: The Ties that bind. LillyxHisao 18+ Chapter 5 up!

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sorry for the delay on the last chapter. I have one written up, but I don't like it, so I'm in the process of a re-write. Bear with me, I promise it will be great.
My original play-through schedule: Hanako, Lilly, Emi, Shizune, Rin.
After playing through the game a second time, the revised list goes like this: Lilly, Hanako, Shizune, Emi, Rin.
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That was amazingly sweet. And the changing perspectives were done nicely.

I can't help but feel happy Misha's got a mind of her own. Silentcook expressed her mind nicely in Sweet Voice.
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