That's one hell of a story, Seannie! Absolutely gripping and devastating in equal measure. The multiple perspectives, even in third person, worked very effectively!
Intentions [Completed]
Re: Intentions [Completed]
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Re: Intentions [Completed]
Thank you all, so, so much for your kind words! When I started out, I wasn't sure if there'd be an audience for such a bleak tale, but I'm very glad that you guys have enjoyed it!
Removing Rin from the story was definitely a really hard decision to make. I believe writing Rin well requires a certain level of skill I don't possess- all attempts on my end sounded like I was merely imitating Rin rather than actually writing as her, if that makes sense. I'd rather excise her part of the narrative completely than serve up something half-baked.
I write sad stories. Sometimes, I write an emotional one. Once in a blue moon, I write something happy.
Intentions [Completed] | Emi makes a mistake she can't take back
Subduction | The earth moves, and Yamaku moves with it
Seannie's Sanctum | A literary snack bar