Hmmm, let's see now. Sorry if I'm not going to read everything that's been said up until now. Or, "tl;dr", as it may be.
I really, really like both Hanako and Rin.
Hanako is obvious. She's the epitome of
moe. Which could be considered kinda cheap, but the writers still managed to make her interesting beyond that. Appealing to protective instinct is nice and all, but once you get past that, there needs to be substance as well. You can't form a relationship on the basis of protecting someone. That... that kinda makes it sound more like a romantic mafia-relationship or something. Once she loses her crazy inhibitions around Hisao, what's left? Well, apparently a girl who can focus on reading and painting patterns, as well as a game with a knack for chess and.. playing the tile-game. Dammit, Hisao, how can you not know of that? I thought that sort of thing was normal! At least I thought so ever since I saw that comic on xkcd about skipping tiles of a certain color.
Point is, that's something to work with! With these qualifications, it seems like she might actually be an apt nerd to a degree! Maybe Hisao could play some tabletop RPGs with her. And Rin can come, too? Well, I hope the writers don't drop the ball here. There's something to be found behind the absurd levels of cuteness Hanako emenates, which should definitely be elaborated upon.
It should be considered to make her more fallible in some respects, but not too severely. Anxiety is one of those traits that are flaws, but are often perceived as perks by the target audience. That makes her seem like a possible Mary Sue. You'd risk alienating her fans if you broke her character to give her a flaw, but maybe there could be a moment where her anxiety acts up and Hisao actually ends up getting seriously annoyed at her. Doesn't have to be a big thing, just kind of a reminder that "hey, you know, being like a fragile little flower is not actually a good thing if you think about it".
Rin. Now Rin is the character who really got me hooked here. I really wonder about the way she was written. Like, by whom, with what intention, with what sort of characterization in mind. I feel like I can really identify with her. No, I don't think I'm KA-RAZY. I don't think she is, either. Though the stress really takes its toll on her. She just seems... detached. She doesn't care about social conventions. She just does things. She's observing the world from within her head. That includes observing people and their behaviour, what makes them tick and everything. A philosophical mind! All of these are things I can identify with. (Remember how I was wondering about the kind of person who wrote her? Yeah.)
That said, I'm wondering whether I'm just imagining that. Some of the things she says seem like they're trying too hard to sound crazy. Some of them could be explained by her trying to be witty or so, but, I don't know. Maybe she's just a random collection of space cadet behaviour.
But even in that case, the fact that I (and apparently several others!) can connect with her means something. Like her art, which she produced without thinking about it, but which nonetheless has a structure, just a structure not easily accessible consciously, her characterization is coherent.
Anyway, I'm really curious to see how she develops. She must have other hobbies. I can see her playing videogames, but then again that might just be because that's pretty much the only hobby I have besides drawing and
the internets.
please make her more easily accessible without ignoring everyone else in the full game, k ._.
EDIT: So today I pretty much facepalmed in public when I realized that I wrote that Rin could play videogames. WITH NO HANDS. But then again, doing the impossible (seeing the invisible, row row fighting da power) is pretty much the theme behind Team Extreme (Rin and Emi) anyway, so, hey. Maybe she could! I could picture her playing Mario Kart, for instance. Big controller, one foot on the stick, the other foot on the buttons. I must draw this!
Lilly is... pretty nifty! She's kinda similar to Hanako and Rin in certain ways: Like Hanako, she's basically modeled after an archetype, the
Yamato Nadeshiko. And like Rin, she's kind of detached, and cool because of that.
Unfortunately... I'm kind of at a loss as to what to say about her. She manages to be interesting despite the played out archetype thanks to her "coolness". And her lack of coolness. A Yamato Nadeshiko is supposed to always be calm and well-mannered, but she actually drops the highbrow-ness a couple of times, it's easy to talk to her about certain things... And on the other hand, when faced with Shizune, she did a pretty good job countering the onslaught. But you could see that she was hurt. Normally, the only time a character of that type will act differently is when they're all ANGRY and stuff, which can be played either for excessive drama or comedy. Mostly comedy. Lilly acts quite naturally, so while she corresponds to much of the archetype, she's still believable. But like Hanako, there needs to be some development to show what else there is to her. Hisao and Lilly don't really seem terribly compatible. When I try to think of what they talk about, all that comes to mind is small-talk, which isn't such a great basis for a love relationship.
Now, I have to defend Emi. I can see why she didn't make a big impression on people. Her arc kinda consists of one choice, and her ending is definitely the least satisfying one. ... Well, of the good endings anyway. But while she doesn't do a whole lot and she mostly just acts cute, I find it to be quite well-written cuteness. I can't put my finger on it, unfortunately. But still, she's a humorous character and very likeable. Somehow I keep remembering her "Whatchadoing?" line. Wasn't there also a tiny little pause before it as she leans closer to Hisao? That part really captures her spirit very well, I think.
But yeah. I like her, but she needs to be developed further in the future, as her general reception indicates.
Now, the Symbiont.
... Shizune/Misha.
I can see the appeal in them. Their dynamic is quite nice. They work like a comedy duo, but it doesn't seem forced. And there's definitely an appeal to such an aggressive girl. I'm not even going to call her out on being manipulative. In light of her playfulness and everything, it's a pretty charming trait, in a way. But by god, is she a jerk. I was already feeling pretty bad about having to choose between Rin and Hanako. But taking Shizune's route seems like it requires you to completely ignore everything else. Heck, it even
requires you to piss off Lilly.
Shizune might have noble motivations and everything, but in the end, she's still a jerk. Is what I think. ... And I'm not sure if I'd be happy about the implications if her path in the future included Hisao "taming" her.
Well, so much for my thoughts on the personalities.
Now for the appearances! ... Hmmm.
1. Hanako. Isn't it ironic how she's so beautiful despite the fact that at least a part of her mental condition is probably because she feels ugly? The burn scar makes it seem more like she has war paintings on her skin or something! Which is awesome, but. I was actually almost disappointed when the unlockable picture shows her scarred eye and it looks perfectly normal. I kept picturing what it would be like for her to show her horrible disfigured eye to Hisao for the first time! That eye... isn't disfigured at all. It kinda drains the drama out of the situation if that horrible scar is more of a minor blemish on a flawless body?
2. Rin. Okay, I admit, she doesn't actually look that awesome in most of the images. The 3/4 views of her face actually strike me as kind of... off. I don't know. But on the other hand, her front and semi-profile views are really cute, and on the unlockable picture, she's definitely the most strikingly beautiful to me. I loves me some tomboyish charms, I do. Those clothes benefit her greatly. It's kinda sad that they're always wearing those uniforms... I like how she wears a boys' uniform. Tomboy charm, and sets her apart from the others.
3. Lilly. She'd be higher on the list, but, you know, tastes. She seems kinda conventional and. Uh. Blonde. But anyway, she's still very pretty, obviously. I'm kinda confused about her actual appearance, though. From her 3/4 view, I got the distinct impression that she has kind of a long face with high cheekbones. I'll probably post some fanart at some point that shows how I picture her. Her picture in her epic sparkly duel with Shizune seems to contradict that...
4. Emi. Is... cute. Too cute, perhaps? I have trouble believing that she's about the same age as everyone else. But still, I like her expressions. I think they greatly contribute to making her likable. She just has an amazingly expressive face. Especially when she imitates Mishizune.
5. Shizune. ... Yeah, I dunno. Not a big fan of them glasses and the tidiness and everything. Rin head-shaking beats all.
6. Misha, though listing her last seems kinda unfair. I actually rather like her. As a character. I'm not fond of them drills. They make her unnecessarily wide, I think? Something like that. Funny thing, though. Since she's the first girl you encounter, I analyzed her image and thought that the artist needed to work on making the drawings look less flat, and on making the bodies curvier.
It took me amazingly long to realize that "HOLY CRAP SHE WAS ACTUALLY INTENDED TO BE A LITTLE BIT CHUBBY?!" Distinct builds in an anime style? Unheard of! So yeah, her appearance is a plus after all.