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Thanatos02 wrote:The car conversation was actually supposed to be something subtle, but it does serve its purpose either way.

I really, really enjoyed reading that little bit. Your story is enjoyable overall, Thanatos, but I find it really shines in the moments where you make Hisao immensely relatable (at least to me). Hisao's drunken confession was one of those moments, and this car scene was another. In fact, it really reminds me of conversations I had with the girl I'm dating now before we got together. I like to imagine that Hisao and Akira were playing it cool on the outside, but internally quite giddy about that little exchange

Anyways I really enjoyed it and will be looking forward to the next chapter

Thanatos02 wrote:

Triscuitable wrote:Train of thought:
More. I need more. IT FEEDS ME.

You must be starving between all these weeklong delays.

Starving? Ha. Hell no, I'm ravenous. I've been eating parts of my body for support.

Triscuitable wrote:

Thanatos02 wrote:

Triscuitable wrote:Train of thought:
More. I need more. IT FEEDS ME.

You must be starving between all these weeklong delays.

Starving? Ha. Hell no, I'm ravenous. I've been eating parts of my body for support.

Um, bro do you need help?

StudyOfWumbology wrote: Um, bro do you need help?

typing one key at a time as i ate my right hand
no need for punctuation waste of time
dont stop writing this please

Triscuitable wrote:

StudyOfWumbology wrote: Um, bro do you need help?

typing one key at a time as i ate my right hand

That doesn't sound very healthy.

Incredible, truly incredible.
We must have more.

Nice of you to join us, Shepherd, but…

No Requesting

Pretty much just made this account to comment on this. I've read a lot of fan fics but this is the first time I've felt compelled to comment. This is definitely one of the best things I've ever read. Ever.

StudyOfWumbology wrote:

Triscuitable wrote:

StudyOfWumbology wrote: Um, bro do you need help?

typing one key at a time as i ate my right hand

That doesn't sound very healthy.

i should probably find a therapist or something

griffon8 wrote:Nice of you to join us, Shepherd, but…

No Requesting

we all want more of the story
in my case i may very well eat the rest of my fingers if i cannot read another entry
but theres no need to rush
i mean im just waiting patiently
two fingers left

Triscuitable wrote:i mean im just waiting patiently
two fingers left

You are far more patient than I, for I have already moved to my toes.

Seriously though, take your time. Quality over quantity and what-not.

You type better with your toes than I do with my knuckles. I've never said it before but I like the titles you give your chapters, Thanatos.

CptSalsa wrote:You type better with your toes than I do with my knuckles. I've never said it before but I like the titles you give your chapters, Thanatos.

Seconded. I sometimes have trouble with titles, and can appreciate the thought and effort that can go into them, so good job .

Hoitash wrote:

CptSalsa wrote:You type better with your toes than I do with my knuckles. I've never said it before but I like the titles you give your chapters, Thanatos.

Seconded. I sometimes have trouble with titles, and can appreciate the thought and effort that can go into them, so good job .

Thirded(?) I usually use simple things for chapter titles (or song names XD)
But I've been skimming through this fic. Me likey

Exbando wrote:

Triscuitable wrote:i mean im just waiting patiently
two fingers left

You are far more patient than I, for I have already moved to my toes.

Seriously though, take your time. Quality over quantity and what-not.

you have made a false assumption
for i no longer have any semblance of a lower torso

i ate my own head
now youve seen everything