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Miki, Hisao, Miki again, Lily, Hanako.

YZQ wrote:Miki, Hisao, Miki again, Lily, Hanako.

This thread is effectively my brainstorm/draw from place for this story now.
Also, I'm going to be such an un-clever bastard and title most of the scenes after songs (well those songs)

More fodder for ya.

Hanako and Miki, after dark. Track.

"Say, Hanako, any particular reason why you want to meet me here at this hour? It's kinda late."
"I...I just want to ask: Why are you so... brave?"
"Brave? Nah. I'm pretty average in that category. In fact, I think you're braver tonight."
"Me?"
"Yeap. The Hanako I used to know will never ask to meet someone like this. You're tougher than you think you are."
"I..."
"Hanako, listen to me. There are people who want to be friends with you, and I mean REAL friends. Guys that share... what's the expression... "weal and woe" together. You saw it at the rooftop. Even the ever-bitchy Shizune could sit down to lunch with Lily. Anything can happen, as long as you want it to."

YZQ wrote:More fodder for ya.

Hanako and Miki, after dark. Track.

"Say, Hanako, any particular reason why you want to meet me here at this hour? It's kinda late."
"I...I just want to ask: Why are you so... brave?"
"Brave? Nah. I'm pretty average in that category. In fact, I think you're braver tonight."
"Me?"
"Yeap. The Hanako I used to know will never ask to meet someone like this. You're tougher than you think you are."
"I..."
"Hanako, listen to me. There are people who want to be friends with you, and I mean REAL friends. Guys that share... what's the expression... "weal and woe" together. You saw it at the rooftop. Even the ever-bitchy Shizune could sit down to lunch with Lily. Anything can happen, as long as you want it to."

Shit at the rate this is going this is going to be less of straight plot with porn, and instead porn with a plot

Steinherz wrote:Shit at the rate this is going this is going to be less of straight plot with porn, and instead porn with a plot

With some work, a Hanako-Miki fanfic would work, porn or no porn.

I just can't bear to read any fanfic after Misstep, though. That one gave me the creeps.

Umber wrote:

Steinherz wrote:Shit at the rate this is going this is going to be less of straight plot with porn, and instead porn with a plot

With some work, a Hanako-Miki fanfic would work, porn or no porn.

I just can't bear to read any fanfic after Misstep, though. That one gave me the creeps.

Can you believe I actually haven't read it? I only read the comments on it and not the actual fic's posts.

Steinherz wrote:

Umber wrote: I just can't bear to read any fanfic after Misstep, though. That one gave me the creeps.

Can you believe I actually haven't read it? I only read the comments on it and not the actual fic's posts.

I haven't read Sisterhood. It's popped up every now-and-then in threads and I really should pick up on it in my free time.

Misstep's first and second chapters, gosh. Stopped after that, I just couldn't handle the thought of what could happen to a kidnappedHanako.

OtakuNinja wrote: How about 3 hands, 2 feet, 1 love?

YZQ wrote: "Miki, I think we oughta do it on the floor."
"Why?"
"After those previous few rounds, I think my bed is creaking."
"Come to think of it, my bed's sounding funny too. We're tough enough, anyway."

Somehow, I can imagine a hypothetical dev team working on a script over the course of several months, never editing either of these two pieces of text because of how perfect it is. What's the word for when it feels inside your heart that everything in the world is all right?

Tang wrote: Somehow, I can imagine a hypothetical dev team working on a script over the course of several months, never editing either of these two pieces of text because of how perfect it is. What's the word for when it feels inside your heart that everything in the world is all right?

That got me thinking about if you could go through an arc as another character other than Hisao (ie. Misha->Shizune, Miki->Hanako, maybe even some of the main characters), but that's what fan-fictions are for. Those two quotes, though, someone needs to screenie them, they're nice fan-fic material.

Tang wrote:

YZQ wrote: "Miki, I think we oughta do it on the floor."
"Why?"
"After those previous few rounds, I think my bed is creaking."
"Come to think of it, my bed's sounding funny too. We're tough enough, anyway."

Somehow, I can imagine a hypothetical dev team working on a script over the course of several months, never editing either of these two pieces of text because of how perfect it is. What's the word for when it feels inside your heart that everything in the world is all right?

Oh I'm going to use the Miki and Emi dialogue there, definitely. It's too good to not be used

Tang wrote:

Umber wrote:Those two quotes, though, someone needs to screenie them, they're nice fan-fic material.

I have been inspired... I must forge screenshots of the following:
1) Extras -> Library -> Miki -> "3 Hands, 2 Feet, 1 Love" | Description: Emi learns the importance of good back support.
2) A series of scene screenshots:

• Emi_Rape_Face "Miki, I think we oughta do it on the floor."
  Miki "Why?"
  Emi pouting, looking up with that green shirt on "After those previous few rounds, I think my bed is creaking."
  Miki looking determined "Come to think of it, my bed's sounding funny too. We're tough enough, anyway."

The scene description needs work, but yeah...

-Edit- Tang, did you delete your post or something?

I think I've dragged too many people into this O_o (but thank you guys).
Speaking of which, a teaser:

Scene 1: A Proper Introduction

“Oh hey Hisao, long time no see!” Emi says in her usually cheery way “Haven’t seen you in a while, how have you been?”
“Pretty good, I’ve been hanging out with Lilly and Hanako a lot. So sorry that I haven’t kept up with the morning runs.”
“You should be sorry” she pouts “I don’t have anyone to run with in the morning.”
“Sorry, sorry. If you want I could see if I could find someone to run with you in the mornings.”
She gently punches his shoulder.
“That’s supposed to be you. But fine.” She gives him an venomous glare, which is somewhat lessened by her “cutesy” appearance.
“Don’t worry, besides maybe you’ll make a new friend.” Hisao smiles at her.

***

“Hey Hisao, what you working on?”
“Oh, hey Miki. I’m doing your most loved subject.”
“We aren’t outside doing gym.”
“That was sarcasm Miki, I’m doing math.”
“Ew. I hate math.”
A thought hits Hisao suddenly.
“Hey Miki, do you know Emi?” A dumb, but innocent, question.
“Is the grass green? Of course I know the only person who’s better at track than me. Why?”
“She’s been bugging me about the fact that I kind of ditched our morning run routine after I had a small heart attack while on our first run. I feel bad about it, but I don’t want to try that again. I was wondering, maybe-” Miki cuts him off.
“If I could join her instead?” she thinks about it for a few seconds, then nods. “Sure, why not? Emi and I haven’t actually hung out aside from track. It could be fun.”

aaaaaand that's all I've written in about 30 minutes of thinking.

Steinherz wrote:

Shit at the rate this is going this is going to be less of straight plot with porn, and instead porn with a plot

And a good thing too. Porn without a plot is boring as hell.

Umber wrote:

Steinherz wrote:

Umber wrote: I just can't bear to read any fanfic after Misstep, though. That one gave me the creeps.

Can you believe I actually haven't read it? I only read the comments on it and not the actual fic's posts.

I haven't read Sisterhood. It's popped up every now-and-then in threads and I really should pick up on it in my free time.

Misstep's first and second chapters, gosh. Stopped after that, I just couldn't handle the thought of what could happen to a kidnappedHanako.

Let me recommend Sisterhood. Although I've gotten about halfway through, I'm loving what I've seen so far. (The Feels man...the Feeels...)

Thanks for the warning on Misstep's.

Steinherz wrote:

Tang wrote:

Umber wrote:Those two quotes, though, someone needs to screenie them, they're nice fan-fic material.

I have been inspired... I must forge screenshots of the following:
1) Extras -> Library -> Miki -> "3 Hands, 2 Feet, 1 Love" | Description: Emi learns the importance of good back support.
2) A series of scene screenshots:

• Emi_Rape_Face "Miki, I think we oughta do it on the floor."
  Miki "Why?"
  Emi pouting, looking up with that green shirt on "After those previous few rounds, I think my bed is creaking."
  Miki looking determined "Come to think of it, my bed's sounding funny too. We're tough enough, anyway."

The scene description needs work, but yeah...

-Edit- Tang, did you delete your post or something?

Yes, I did, because I thought it was one of those boring ones that would make it feel weird to post after seeing in a thread, or whatever, you know what I mean.

I remain dedicated to this idea... perhaps I'll even use Ren'Py and make a Tezuka Shoujo parody or something, where Rin (the narrator) walks into Emi's room, following a cloud, and sees them on the floor or something. Just some early brainstorming.

Tang wrote:I remain dedicated to this idea... perhaps I'll even use Ren'Py and make a Tezuka Shoujo parody or something, where Rin (the narrator) walks into Emi's room, following a cloud, and sees them on the floor or something. Just some early brainstorming.

I'd be careful with that. You may be treading into dangerous waters there XD

pandaphil wrote:

Steinherz wrote:

Shit at the rate this is going this is going to be less of straight plot with porn, and instead porn with a plot

And a good thing too. Porn without a plot is boring as hell.

I was making a play on words. The visual novel itself is plot with some porn, I was joking saying the fic would be the inverse. In other words, the plot is told with the porn XD