
I also have some suggestions to make Rin's flowchart in Act 2 slightly less confusing:
-I think the single lines (the ones without the arrowheads) could be removed. It's understandable enough having the choice and then which choice it gives later on in the bubble (i.e. "You're amazing! *Big hit Art -1"). It doesn't need a line pointing from that bubble to the yellow bubble saying "You'd be a big hit or You should Aim High! Gives You Art -1".
-On that subject, I don't think the bubble that says "You're Amazing! Big Hit* Art -1" and the bubble that says "Like Emi Aim High* Art -1" need to have the "Art -1" in the bubble. It's clear enough in the yellow bubbles that choosing those options gives you Art -1. Having the "Art -1" in the previous mentioned bubbles makes it seem like choosing "You're Amazing" or "Like Emi" gives you Art -1.
-I think the scene "Things You Like" could have two arrows pointing to two bubbles (one to the left and one to the right) giving the choices "Refreshing Exciting*" in one bubble and "Makes Me Feel Stuck Once Chance*" in the other bubble and then have two arrows, one from each bubble pointing to "Underwater and A Maple With A Name".
- Maybe there could be a little yellow bubble on the side that simply explains that the choices you make in Act Two before the "In Her Own Image" scene affects which choices you can pick in the In Her Own Image scene. (After doing them all myself, there are 8 different combinations with 3 choices each, making it a total of 24 checkboxes that can be checked)
None of these suggestions are about things that are incorrect in the flowchart, just ideas that I think would make it much easier to understand for a first time player.
