Sometimes I just don't have any clever opening to use and I don't know what to do about it.
From Tokyo To Mumbai by Zerebos.
I've never said before how much I like Zerebo's avatar, but I do. Not so much the blue dogman, but Molly makes for a cute cheerleader. If you ever wonder if anybody appreciates your choice in avatars, just letting you know, I do.
... anyway, on to the story.
It's hard to talk about this one because it's more setup and mood than story. Sadly that setup never goes anywhere because the story never made it past one chapter. Moodwise, though, it hits it out of the park. There's a strong since of mystery and sterile oppression here.
Hisao is being held ... somewhere. It's some kind of medical facility and he doesn't appear to be there by choice. He can't remember fully why he's there, but there are hints and he keeps insisting that he's not crazy (not that anyone ever says he is.)
It's a pretty strong hook for a story.
