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Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 1:29 pm
by Helbereth
Hoitash wrote:Well that was fun
. I'm a little concerned that Ayane's family didn't run away screaming in terror, but maybe the Hakamichi's are less insane than Hideaki thinks... Or not.
Either way, nice update, even if you do make me feel sorry for Misha.
Speaking of which, opossums are a New World marsupial (our only one, IIRC), did they sneak aboard an ironclad or something to infest the suburbs of Japan? As if the monkeys weren't bad enough...
You're the last person I'd expect to hear complaining about unusual animals in foreign lands.
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 1:55 pm
by Hoitash
Helbereth wrote:Hoitash wrote:Well that was fun
. I'm a little concerned that Ayane's family didn't run away screaming in terror, but maybe the Hakamichi's are less insane than Hideaki thinks... Or not.
Either way, nice update, even if you do make me feel sorry for Misha.
Speaking of which, opossums are a New World marsupial (our only one, IIRC), did they sneak aboard an ironclad or something to infest the suburbs of Japan? As if the monkeys weren't bad enough...
You're the last person I'd expect to hear complaining about unusual animals in foreign lands.
Hey, the macaque is native to Japan; I checked.
And the werewolf was an immigrant, so there. Although i don't think those aliens have a green card...
Anyway, of all the things going on in that fic, I
would be the guy who nitpicks the choice of vermin in the attic...
Still a great chapter, and I hope Misha is okay.
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:45 pm
by DanjaDoom
Helbereth wrote:Does Misha have rabies now?
She doesn't, unless I happen to run out of story ideas and decide to turn Misha into a Werepossum.
........
*writes on memo pad*
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:16 pm
by Helbereth
DanjaDoom wrote:Helbereth wrote:Does Misha have rabies now?
She doesn't, unless I happen to run out of story ideas and decide to turn Misha into a Werepossum.
........
*writes on memo pad*
I apologize in advance:
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:20 pm
by DanjaDoom
Hoitash wrote:Well that was fun
. I'm a little concerned that Ayane's family didn't run away screaming in terror, but maybe the Hakamichi's are less insane than Hideaki thinks... Or not.
Either way, nice update, even if you do make me feel sorry for Misha.
Speaking of which, opossums are a New World marsupial (our only one, IIRC), did they sneak aboard an ironclad or something to infest the suburbs of Japan? As if the monkeys weren't bad enough...
Of course not, it's the 21st century. Their frequent flyer miles meant that they could get to Japan at a fraction of the cost.
And don't worry about Misha, she suplexed at least three of those opossums before they managed to lay a claw on her.
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2013 6:51 pm
by DanjaDoom
Helbereth wrote:DanjaDoom wrote:Helbereth wrote:Does Misha have rabies now?
She doesn't, unless I happen to run out of story ideas and decide to turn Misha into a Werepossum.
........
*writes on memo pad*
I apologize in advance:
Truly I have laid my eyes on poetry today.
Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:44 am
by Oddball
Hilarious, great work. I think sometimes you tend to go a bit too far over the edge, but most of the time it works.
Except that two parter about stealing cable. That was horrible from the minute the military busted in until the end. It felt like a bad Simpsons episode. You over did it a bit with the ghost talking street too.