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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:33 pm
by Acerus
Demoneq wrote:Who's that girl in the picture?
(I'm not much into anime etc, so most of them goes sort of over my head)
Looks like North Maiden, from Star Driver: Kagayaki no Takuto.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:22 pm
by Mahorfeus
"Life goes on" sums it up quite nicely.
As much as I would have liked to see Hanako and Sho get together, I kind of feel that it would have been outside of the story's purpose. Whatever happens after this could just go without saying, because with that huge piece of emotional baggage off her back, Hanako could do pretty much anything at this point. Nothing wrong with leaving it to the imagination.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:10 pm
by CNB
Demoneq wrote:Who's that girl in the picture?
She's a character from
Star Driver. "...And the adventure of life continues," was kind of her catchphrase.
It was a very fun show, if you're down for super-robots-as-overt-metaphor-for-adolescent-sexuality.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:19 pm
by advicefrog
CNB wrote:It was a very fun show, if you're down for super-robots-as-overt-metaphor-for-adolescent-sexuality.
SOUNDS LIKE SHAKESPEARE HAS A NEW RIVAL
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:21 pm
by CNB
advicefrog wrote:SOUNDS LIKE SHAKESPEARE HAS A NEW RIVAL
You really need to get that capslock key fixed, man.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:45 pm
by andros414
CNB wrote:advicefrog wrote:SOUNDS LIKE SHAKESPEARE HAS A NEW RIVAL
You really need to get that capslock key fixed, man.
Tip: Holding the Shift key with Caps Lock on makes the letters lowercase.
Also,
REALLY would like to see an epilogue for this.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 7:55 pm
by Robnonymous
CNB wrote:Demoneq wrote:A good read for sure, but it feels like ending prematurely, now.
I'd expect at least one more chapter I guess, if you wouldn't say it's done and over with.
The adventure of life continues.
Exactly.
No epilogue and no bonus chapter. This particular story is finished. What happens next is up to each individual reader.
Right from the beginning, I'd planned to keep it open at the end. Lilly still has a lot of shit to go through, but there's hope for her. Hanako's future is also looking much brighter. Whether she and Sho end up together isn't for me to say. Everyone's more than free to speculate, of course.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:22 pm
by Bagheera
Robnonymous wrote:Exactly.
No epilogue and no bonus chapter. This particular story is finished. What happens next is up to each individual reader.
Right from the beginning, I'd planned to keep it open at the end. Lilly still has a lot of shit to go through, but there's hope for her. Hanako's future is also looking much brighter. Whether she and Sho end up together isn't for me to say. Everyone's more than free to speculate, of course.
Aw.
I don't care about Sho, I just wanna see more feels between Hanako and Lilly. I'd be cool to have the latter come visit and hang out with Hanako, in the process telling her about how Hisao spent the final chapter of his life. It'd be a nice little coda to both this story and the game.
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:43 pm
by advicefrog
andros414 wrote:CNB wrote:advicefrog wrote:SOUNDS LIKE SHAKESPEARE HAS A NEW RIVAL
You really need to get that capslock key fixed, man.
Tip: Holding the Shift key with Caps Lock on makes the letters lowercase.
IM SORRY ITS JUST SUCH A HASSLE TO TYPE HOPING SHIFT BUT WHEN I GET MY CAPS LOCK KEY FIXED I'LL WRITE A FANFIC JUST FOR THE PEOPLE WHO PUT UP WITH IT
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:21 pm
by Chronopolize
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:08 pm
by advicefrog
THAT DOESN'T WORK ON LINIUX. IM TRYING TO FIX IT BUT MY COMPUTER IS BEING A BITCH, IM SORRY. JUST HANG IN THERE AND TOUGH IT OUT FOR A WHILE. THE CAPS LOCK CANT HURT
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:11 pm
by Robnonymous
Not that I don't appreciate the constant bumps keeping the story at the top of the page, but can we please try to dial back the spam?
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:26 pm
by advicefrog
NOW EVERYONES MAD AT ME
BUT YES I WILL STOP THE SPAM
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:48 pm
by Otakumon
Enjoyed your story, good luck with the novel. Too bad you didn't get to show everybody the real Sho, though. I know he isn't meant to be like that but for some reason he reminds me of this old movie.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lSC2U2yYESw
Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:16 am
by Specter Von Baren
advicefrog wrote:NOW EVERYONES MAD AT ME
BUT YES I WILL STOP THE SPAM
Could you also stop the pointless images at the end of every single post? Typically those are reserved for special occasions, not for every single time you say something. It's kind of like when someone puts a smiley at the end of every sentence and it gets on your nerves because they do it even if they're arguing with you so it comes off as really condescending.