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As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

Folks will be glad to know that I sat down and finally put some work into the next chapter last night. So it begins.

As I'm too lazy to backtrack and see who made the comments, I will reply that:

It states several times in the VN that Hisao is a coffee person. So I've maintained that. Hopefully all the exercise and healthy eating will counter any harm it might do.

Also, thanks for the kind words. I admit the stories a bit fluffy. "Cuddle Porn" as I like to call them. All of the characters have gone through a tough time. Especially Hanako. I don't want to burden them with still more drama, but show leading happy, healthy lives full of healing. They all deserve a happy ending.

forgetmenot wrote:As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

Oh don't be silly. Put down the knife.

Yeah,I'm a little embarrassed by those typos too. But I really dread having to dig through all that text to fix them. *sigh* I'll do it at some point.

pandaphil wrote:Folks will be glad to know that I sat down and finally put some work into the next chapter last night. So it begins.

As I'm too lazy to backtrack and see who made the comments, I will reply that:

It states several times in the VN that Hisao is a coffee person. So I've maintained that. Hopefully all the exercise and healthy eating will counter any harm it might do.

Also, thanks for the kind words. I admit the stories a bit fluffy. "Cuddle Porn" as I like to call them. All of the characters have gone through a tough time. Especially Hanako. I don't want to burden them with still more drama, but show leading happy, healthy lives full of healing. They all deserve a happy ending.

forgetmenot wrote:As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

Oh don't be silly. Put down the knife.

Yeah,I'm a little embarrassed by those typos too. But I really dread having to dig through all that text to fix them. *sigh* I'll do it at some point.

may i help with proofreading?

Hanako Nakai wrote:
may i help with proofreading?

Sure. I'd be honored to have your help.

pandaphil wrote:

Hanako Nakai wrote:
may i help with proofreading?

Sure. I'd be honored to have your help.

i'm just happy to help a fellow human XD

I would offer my help as well, but well... that would require me to actually be good at spelling.

Silentcook wrote:Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

Real English? Wouldn't that just be plain old British English instead of the American English the CMOS uses?

jk jk, pls don't ban me

English is a weird language. If it were a person, it'd go to Yamaku... (because it's disabled)


I'd be happy to help with proofreading if you need it.

ewx wrote:

Silentcook wrote:Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

Real English? Wouldn't that just be plain old British English instead of the American English the CMOS uses?

jk jk, pls don't ban me

English is a weird language. If it were a person, it'd go to Yamaku... (because it's disabled)


I'd be happy to help with proofreading if you need it.

British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

pandaphil wrote:British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

Yes, and I have to agree with you on that, they're of absolutely no u's

Man, I need to fire whoever's writing my jokes.

ewx wrote:

pandaphil wrote:British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

Yes, and I have to agree with you on that, they're of absolutely no u's

Wait, why doesn't American English use soap?

There, I made a worse joke, hope that helps

Anywho, glad to see you're still writing these fics, as they're fun to read.

All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

Sea wrote:All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Harrison wrote:

Sea wrote:All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Plsno, I can barely read my own language, I certainly don't need to learn another just to read the fanfics. ;3;

Shail wrote:

Harrison wrote:

Sea wrote:All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Please, I can barely read my own language, I certainly don't need to learn another just to read the fanfics. ;3;

Meh, If I didn't have to learn English to go to college, I'm be frantically searching around the internet for KS fanfics in Français that just aren't there. On the up side, I could play KS now.