Hanako/Hisao post-Yamaku (Updated 1/2/14)

[forgetmenot]

As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

[Silentcook]

Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

[pandaphil]

Folks will be glad to know that I sat down and finally put some work into the next chapter last night. So it begins.

As I'm too lazy to backtrack and see who made the comments, I will reply that:

It states several times in the VN that Hisao is a coffee person. So I've maintained that. Hopefully all the exercise and healthy eating will counter any harm it might do.

Also, thanks for the kind words. I admit the stories a bit fluffy. "Cuddle Porn" as I like to call them. All of the characters have gone through a tough time. Especially Hanako. I don't want to burden them with still more drama, but show leading happy, healthy lives full of healing. They all deserve a happy ending.

As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

Oh don't be silly. Put down the knife.

Yeah,I'm a little embarrassed by those typos too. But I really dread having to dig through all that text to fix them. *sigh* I'll do it at some point.

[Hanako Nakai]

Folks will be glad to know that I sat down and finally put some work into the next chapter last night. So it begins.

As I'm too lazy to backtrack and see who made the comments, I will reply that:

It states several times in the VN that Hisao is a coffee person. So I've maintained that. Hopefully all the exercise and healthy eating will counter any harm it might do.

Also, thanks for the kind words. I admit the stories a bit fluffy. "Cuddle Porn" as I like to call them. All of the characters have gone through a tough time. Especially Hanako. I don't want to burden them with still more drama, but show leading happy, healthy lives full of healing. They all deserve a happy ending.

As the proofreader for this, I am now honor-bound to commit seppuku atop an English language style guide. Sorry for not catching those, Panda.

Oh don't be silly. Put down the knife.

Yeah,I'm a little embarrassed by those typos too. But I really dread having to dig through all that text to fix them. *sigh* I'll do it at some point.

may i help with proofreading?

[pandaphil]

may i help with proofreading?

Sure. I'd be honored to have your help.

[Hanako Nakai]

may i help with proofreading?

Sure. I'd be honored to have your help.

i'm just happy to help a fellow human XD

[LorSquirrel]

I would offer my help as well, but well... that would require me to actually be good at spelling.

[ewx]

Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

Real English? Wouldn't that just be plain old British English instead of the American English the CMOS uses?

jk jk, pls don't ban me

English is a weird language. If it were a person, it'd go to Yamaku... (because it's disabled)


I'd be happy to help with proofreading if you need it.

[pandaphil]

Feh. Real English proofreaders use .38 Saturday Night Specials for that - and favor the CMOS.

Real English? Wouldn't that just be plain old British English instead of the American English the CMOS uses?

jk jk, pls don't ban me

English is a weird language. If it were a person, it'd go to Yamaku... (because it's disabled)


I'd be happy to help with proofreading if you need it.

British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

[ewx]

British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

Yes, and I have to agree with you on that, they're of absolutely no u's

Man, I need to fire whoever's writing my jokes.

[Hoitash]

British English? That's the one with lots of unnecessary 'u's isn't it?

Yes, and I have to agree with you on that, they're of absolutely no u's

Wait, why doesn't American English use soap?

There, I made a worse joke, hope that helps

Anywho, glad to see you're still writing these fics, as they're fun to read.

[Sea]

All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

[Harrison]

All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

[Shail]

All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Plsno, I can barely read my own language, I certainly don't need to learn another just to read the fanfics. ;3;

[Sea]

All fics should be written in Cherokee. Much more understandable.

I completely agree.

Please, I can barely read my own language, I certainly don't need to learn another just to read the fanfics. ;3;

Meh, If I didn't have to learn English to go to college, I'm be frantically searching around the internet for KS fanfics in Français that just aren't there. On the up side, I could play KS now.