Katawa Shoujo Forums

GG Crono wrote:I feel it should be pointed out as well that "Yea" is not a word. You want "yeah" or, y'know, "yes".

In any case, there's an interesting setup here. Enough for me to see how it pays off.

Well someone here's never read Shakespeare...

Out of curiosity, did the author ever continue it on another site?

There's an epilogue here. It doesn't really continue the story...merely ends it with a bang. (a gang bang to be precise)

Well, this is among my favourite KS stories that I've seen so far. Yeah, the resolution wasn't entirely unproblematic, but I still enjoyed the hell out of it.

Oh, wow. I decided to read the thread before posting and saw that thing about the ban. Real shame. So, I guess, no point posting specific feedback or sharing my proofreading notes if the author won't see it...

Markus Ramikin wrote:Oh, wow. I decided to read the thread before posting and saw that thing about the ban. Real shame. So, I guess, no point posting specific feedback or sharing my proofreading notes if the author won't see it...

Technically, the problem isn't that he can't see your notes, but that he can't log in to change the posts. He could change his pastebin, presumably. You can find a lot more of what I refer to as 'FluffandCrunch’s Lilly Good End Stories' here. Not everything there is in the same continuity, so be warned.

I love it. Good job.

Shamelessly necroposting to say how much I like this story. The ending was a bit rough (especially the very tragic post-birth of their surrogate daughter) but overall a great read. Pretty much as close as I've come to a "Lilly's version of Sisterhood".