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themocaw wrote:A drabble is a story in one hundred words.

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[Did you know that Hideaki has a fan club at his high school?] Shizune signs.

[Don’t tell him about that!] Hideaki protests. [It’s embarrassing!]

[All of the girls in his high school sneak pictures of him while he’s out playing sports at PE. One of them even tried to steal some of his clothes out of his locker. Every time he opens up his shoe locker, there’s at least three love letters in there.]

[Disgraceful! You should be focusing on your studies, not allowing yourself to be distracted by young women with no morals! It makes me sick!]

[Relax, Dad. . .]

Well that's heartwarming Only, how many years have passed since the events of KS exactly? I tought Hideaki would be already at uni by this point, but personally I suppose he's 13 in the game, but he might be younger (is there a canon age for him?)

Kenji is so...

Zoram wrote:

themocaw wrote:A drabble is a story in one hundred words.

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[Did you know that Hideaki has a fan club at his high school?] Shizune signs.

[Don’t tell him about that!] Hideaki protests. [It’s embarrassing!]

[Girls in his high school sneak pictures of him while he’s playing sports at PE. One of them even tried to steal some of his clothes from his locker. Every time he opens up his shoe locker, there’s at least three love letters in there.]

[Disgraceful! You should be focusing on your studies, not allowing yourself to be distracted by young women with no morals! It makes me sick!]

[Relax, Dad. . .the letters are from boys.]

Well that's heartwarming Only, how many years have passed since the events of KS exactly? I tought Hideaki would be already at uni by this point, but personally I suppose he's 13 in the game, but he might be younger (is there a canon age for him?)

Fixed it for you. Sorry, couldn't resist.

Really enjoyed this story. And the wedding was great, even though I think I missed a lot of references when talking about Shizune's side of the wedding The drabble was good as always too, and for the love of god, don't stop writing

Wonderful, inspired me to do a little writing of my own probably just a WAFF one shot (proof reader welcome, please PM)

It's quite funny that what started as "Rated M for Manly" fic became such a heart-warming Shizu story. Definitely gets "Approved" stamp. And "Head-canon" stamp too

As for drabbles... All of them are so funny! (Misha's and Hideaki's ones FTW!) And you contained all that awesomeness in 100 words or less! What is your archiver by the way?

And the last thing: to describe my approvement of porn scenes in the fic...

tsunami_state wrote: What is your archiver by the way?[/img]

Ar. . . chiver? I have no idea what you mean by that.

themocaw wrote:

tsunami_state wrote: What is your archiver by the way?[/img]

Ar. . . chiver? I have no idea what you mean by that.

Feels like a computer joke to me, about how you compressed such great stories into less than 100 words for your drabbles. (Archiver is a word I've heard used in reference to file compression programs, such as 7zip or winRAR.)

Compressed or not, excellent writing. So glad I found this after you finished writing it, one of my biggest peeves is having to wait for new chapters in a great story. >.<

Heh... Didn't know that joke was so hard to catch up *sweat-drop*
Yup, I meant what program did you use to compress them. Don't answer, it's rhetorical

Just finished reading all the chapters.

T'was wonderful.

I'm another one of those people who made an account to come say that they enjoyed this. I felt that i understood Shizune's arc fairly well before this, but christ man, putting a cap on it like this makes me understand her so much better.

Every time I read something as good as this it makes me slightly sad as I've already 100%ed the game and am now just searching for more feels as I haven't had anything kick my teeth in like this in AGES.

Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.

YOTC wrote:Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.

Nope. All my stuff is on the forums or in pastebins.

I've compiled a list of FanFiction for Shizune's good ending. Please let me know what you think Themocaw, you're a genius
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Efj ... edit?pli=1

Edit: Is it all right if the google doc stays up also?

YOTC wrote:I'm another one of those people who made an account to come say that they enjoyed this. I felt that i understood Shizune's arc fairly well before this, but christ man, putting a cap on it like this makes me understand her so much better.

Every time I read something as good as this it makes me slightly sad as I've already 100%ed the game and am now just searching for more feels as I haven't had anything kick my teeth in like this in AGES.

Out of curiousity did you also write the Final reunion and Hazelnut Filling I've seen floating around in a google doc? As those were also pretty good.

Lol that's me xD

Could not help but notice, a few of the guests, Italian looking? with children huh? sounds like a reference to a certain manga/anime with assassins. Great story double thumbs up!