Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
Good change.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
PMs.BobBobberson wrote:Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
Not necessarily "raping", it was actually "won't take no for an answer". But yeah.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.
I loved this story way too much, I love how you did the scene changes it was disjointed but it still seemed to fit with the story in a very strange way. Like it was a story that wasn't supposed to flow
