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Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 12:33 pm
by Oddball
Total Destruction wrote:
EVERYONE IS WRITING MY STORY BETTER THAN ME AND I LOVE IT 
Heh heh
Thanks, but your story is yours and mine is mine, they just share some characters and similarities between them. I'm not trying to show you up or anything.
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:22 am
by Total Destruction
Hahah, I kid, I kid.
I genuinely like this foursome (yuck, terrible word choice) of people, though. Lots of interesting dynamics, and like I said, it's strange enough to be believable. It's a pilot away from being a sitcom.
Hanako is Jerry, Lilly's George, and Miki, of course, is Kramer. Hisao's gonna have to suck it up and be Elaine.
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 12:44 am
by Helbereth
Total Destruction wrote:Hanako is Jerry, Lilly's George, and Miki, of course, is Kramer. Hisao's gonna have to suck it up and be Elaine.
Okay, if anything,
Hisao is Jerry(sarcastic, self-deprecating and he has far-away parents, and he's kinda the main character),
Hanako is George (neurotic, nerdy and sometimes unhinged),
Lilly is Elaine (quietly sardonic, moody and a bit of a lush), and, as you said,
Miki is Kramer (the kooky, never at home, always scheming, wild next-door neighbor).
Also;
Kenji is Newman (Hisao's pseudo-nemesis).
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2012 1:15 am
by Total Destruction
Helbereth wrote:Total Destruction wrote:Hanako is Jerry, Lilly's George, and Miki, of course, is Kramer. Hisao's gonna have to suck it up and be Elaine.
Okay, if anything,
Hisao is Jerry(sarcastic, self-deprecating and he has far-away parents, and he's kinda the main character),
Hanako is George (neurotic, nerdy and sometimes unhinged),
Lilly is Elaine (quietly sardonic, moody and a bit of a lush), and, as you said,
Miki is Kramer (the kooky, never at home, always scheming, wild next-door neighbor).
Also;
Kenji is Newman (Hisao's pseudo-nemesis).
Well, yeah, of course. It was just a matter of me
flipping the gender ratio because Hisao is a pansy and
being way too amused at a Hanako in my head saying "AIRLINE FOOD, WHAT IS UP WITH THAT".
ON TOPIC: THIS IS A VERY GOOD STORY ODDBALL
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 9:02 am
by Roamin12
I certainly enjoyed this, Miki and Lilly were priceless.
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:12 pm
by OtakuNinja
Oddball wrote:I lean over towards Hanako "I'm sure you're not going to object to him having a bit more staying power, are ya'?"
Lilly was taking a sip of her tea when I said this and she ends up choking and spitting the tea all over the table. If nothing else, coming here was worth it to see that alone.
That was priceless.
Re: Tea Time with Miki
Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:01 pm
by Mader Levap
Enjoyed it. Little, small fun one-shot.