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Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.

why are some things in parenthesis?

Posted all chapters.

Edit: Stuff in quotes is said. Stuff in parenthesis is thought.

Then what are the things that have neither parenthesis nor quotes? If those are thoughts as well, then from where cometh the idea to have some things in parenthesis and most things out of parenthesis.

Either way this is a shit ton of writing and I'll get back to it later. Can't say that the length is a huge turn-on or anything.

Stuff without parenthesis or quotes is simply narration. And yeah, it's pretty large. Or rather...I dislike episodic releases in both stories and games. So instead of posting one chapter, answering comments for a week, writing another one, retconning the half of the first one, writing two more, getting writers block and not finishing another one for two months etc, etc, I simply refrained from posting the whole thing until all chapters were completed. It's a personal preference.

Wait so a Hanako bad ending and a Lilly Good ending within a Hanako good ending?

ENDCEPTION!

That's not a bad way to put it.

...Jesus Christ, this is one of the best KS fanfictions I've ever read. I honestly don't see what other Hanako epilogues could top this one. This is good enough to be it's own route.

I was skeptical when you decided to post it all at once with no feedback, and it did take a LONG time to read, but it was worth it. I really hope you write more because you're an amazing writer.

I particularly liked the last chapter. SO MANY FEELS.

Just got finished reading. Incredibly great read, man. I kind of almost wish you hadn't ended it, but it ended it quite a reasonable way, so I shouldn't complain.

Great work.

Totally worth an hour in my life. Amazing.

...That was...I have no words...

Excellent read, thank you for posting it.

I agree that the formatting is troublesome, but the story itself is quite good. I'm not really a big fan of Hanako or Lilly, but it was a breath of fresh air to see them dealing so directly with their problems rather than immediately becoming mary sues as so often happens in fics featuring them. Your characterization of Hisao also managed the careful balance of clueless and well-intentioned that so often gets skewed to one side only.