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Re: Turn to Stone

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:19 pm
by griffon8
OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right. ;)
How do you get the impression that isn't known?

Re: Turn to Stone

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 10:00 pm
by OtakuNinja
griffon8 wrote:
OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right. ;)
How do you get the impression that isn't known?
I think I saw some parts where the author implied it was the right hand that wasn't there. :3
But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong. :lol:

Re: Turn to Stone

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2012 10:33 pm
by Hoitash
OtakuNinja wrote: But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong. :lol:
Further proof that the only productive thing to occur after the bars close is regrets.

Re: Turn to Stone

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:44 am
by Total Destruction
OtakuNinja wrote:
griffon8 wrote:
OtakuNinja wrote:I just want to add a little thing to this masterpiece: Miki lost her left hand, not her right. ;)
How do you get the impression that isn't known?
I think I saw some parts where the author implied it was the right hand that wasn't there. :3
But it's 4:00 in the morning, I may be wrong. :lol:
It wouldn't surprise me. There's a whole mess of inconsistencies that need to be hammered out in this thing, and I thought I corrected the ONE screwup that I think no one else pointed out in regards to the missing hand. Another hiccup is pretty much par for the course, though I'm really bummed out about that one, because I write with my off-hand just to drive the point home for Chrissakes. Hahah.

I gotta give this thing and Touchdown Breakdown another sweep, though. Thanks for pointing that out.

Also... "Masterpiece"??? You are too damned kind, but I'LL TAKE IT.

Thank you.

Re: Turn to Stone

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:31 pm
by griffon8
Total Destruction wrote:It wouldn't surprise me. There's a whole mess of inconsistencies that need to be hammered out in this thing, and I thought I corrected the ONE screwup that I think no one else pointed out in regards to the missing hand. Another hiccup is pretty much par for the course, though I'm really bummed out about that one, because I write with my off-hand just to drive the point home for Chrissakes. Hahah.
I didn't find any. I carefully reread it before asking my question. There were plenty of references to her good hand, and one about it being her only hand, but the only times I noticed where the difference between a hand and a stump were important, you got it right.