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Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:49 pm
by Homeless
I'm no expert, but I found the second set of stories hard to read. The characters didn't seem to flow. Some of the wording threw me off too.
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:20 am
by Oddball
I enjoyed it. It was nice and sweet, and even funny in parts. he characterization was a tad off in a few places, but overall it was a good one.
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:44 pm
by stanman237
I didn't want to put second story because of that reason but the first one recieved depressing reviews so i thought might as well throw it in. It makes up for the first one.
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:45 pm
by Homeless
Actually, once I got past the first chapter in the second set of stories you've posted, it got easier to read. And I did end up enjoying it, I didn't find it fluffy though, not like some of the other stories out there.
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:46 pm
by zanger
Kenji and Miki seem really out of character... -_-
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:40 pm
by God
Itsmrrda wrote:
It's still got one more part coming, as well!
Dat fluff, dat fluff
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:51 pm
by stanman237
Found a bad end continuation of Hanako
http://pastebin.com/VZ4U3jPy
However, it was written by a guest so no credit can be given. All I could say is that once again I did not write it and all credit goes to this anon
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:42 pm
by Brogurt
I think Bonertron69 wrote that, but I'm not sure and I CBA to ask him.
That's not a joke.
And by that I mean that he's set to Snooze right now and I doubt I'd be able to remember if it were to be later.
Re: Hanako Epilogue
Posted: Thu May 16, 2013 11:17 pm
by MoonShadow
Sorry for the necro, but the link on the first post is dead, and I would really like to read it. Anyone saved it by any chance?