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Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:27 am
by rook
FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!“
Is it bad that I got a bit jealous when I read that?
Great story. Though the fact that so many of the characters are still there 10 years laters kind of threw me off.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 3:38 am
by CarnivalNights
rook wrote:FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!“
Is it bad that I got a bit jealous when I read that?
Great story. Though the fact that so many of the characters are still there 10 years laters kind of threw me off.
That bothered me too for a split second...but the story was just tooooo much feel(s) good that I could ignore it.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:26 am
by Mirage_GSM
waynoinsano wrote:Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
worse yet Hanako X Kenji.
Hey, there's nothing wrong with Hanako X Kenji. I think they make a cute couple...
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:53 pm
by griffon8
FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:14 pm
by FluffandCrunch
griffon8 wrote:FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.
Ah, thank you. Always open to a little help.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 9:03 pm
by trekki859
awesome story. it was beautiful. .... but.... even IMPLIED. hanako x kenji....
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:03 pm
by advicefrog
OK i have to ask just for the sake of curiosity. Is this the first part of something bigger or is this a solitary story.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 3:16 am
by Mirage_GSM
I think this is supposed to be just sort of an epilogue, but you never know...
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 6:29 pm
by advicefrog
well that's helpful.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:38 pm
by Oddball
Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
Shrug.jpg
If it makes you feel better, just imagine that Lilly lets Hanako borrow him the first weekend of every month and Thursdays and threesome nights.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 7:38 pm
by FluffandCrunch
Oddball wrote:Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
Shrug.jpg
If it makes you feel better, just imagine that Lilly lets Hanako borrow him the first weekend of every month and Thursdays and threesome nights.
...I like you, Oddball.
We're on the same wave length here.
I find it ironic that Brogurt is not okay with Hisao marrying Lilly, but is perfectly fine with Hanako instead pulling an NTR on him.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:21 pm
by BlackRockHanako
FluffandCrunch wrote:I find it ironic that Brogurt is not okay with Hisao marrying Lilly, but is perfectly fine with Hanako instead pulling an NTR on him.
I'm sure he doesn't question how you get
your kicks
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 4:08 pm
by Chrono180
I really liked this! It was bit odd almost all the characters wound up becoming teachers, but considering how well written the story is, I don't mind it at all. You are one of my favorite writers, I must say. Loved Scar Tissue, cried my heart out at Regrets, and loved this one, so keep doing what you're doing.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:27 pm
by FluffandCrunch
Chrono180 wrote:I really liked this! It was bit odd almost all the characters wound up becoming teachers, but considering how well written the story is, I don't mind it at all. You are one of my favorite writers, I must say. Loved Scar Tissue, cried my heart out at Regrets, and loved this one, so keep doing what you're doing.
Everyone gets a happy ending!
EVERYONE!
Thanks for the compliment, Chrono. I'm glad I found this community so I can keep writing for you guys.
Re: Ten Summers Later
Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2012 10:39 pm
by Mealforthree
Nice.
Still, it's much more fun - when writing - to give the characters sad endings. Dunno why.