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Thanks for the feedback you three.

By the way, that other project, I've been working on recently has progressed to the point that I'd like to pre-feed it to one or two people to smooth out the kinks. Focus being on stuff like pacing, mood etc.
The story is currently twelve pages and growing. It's not going to be as sentimental as the last one
So if you're interested, please drop me a PM.

A very nice read so far. But this last chapters title got me picturing misha singing the song with the same name from the little mermaid.

She'd have to sing a very deep alto voice then, but that song would set a nice mood for the scene. Not all the chapter titles do...

I'm pretty much a sucker for anything Rin centric. So needless to say I really enjoyed reading about an insight into how she thinks. I wish I had the skill to write about it myself but my own writing style isn't really fit for any type of KS fanfic. But as I was saying nice work I enjoyed reading it.

Dude, I don't generally like fanfiction, and I don't generally like sentimental stories, and I don't generally like unrequited love... that being said, a tip of the hat. A well written piece there

Thanks. I assume you're referring to "Catharsis".
I have to admit that story practically wrote itself, since it's almost word for word something I experienced myself - hence the double meaning of the title.
I don't usually like to write gloomy stories and my other stories should be more uplifting

My hat is off to you. There is no way on God's green Earth that I would attempt to get inside Rin's head the way you did. I love the parts where she's contemplating gifts for her mother. Nice job of showing how un-self-conscious she is about her disability. Reminds me of what Hisao says in the rooftop scene: "She gives off the impression of being entirely unaware that she's missing any limbs at all."

the initial quotation marks for "Catharsis" are actually commas

Actually they ARE quotation marks - just the German kind. Probably some weird from copying the text out of word.
"Were" now, anyway, because fixed.