Re: A22's Blogpost
Posted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 5:20 am
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I agree.Synoptic wrote:And, she still holds the record for the best ending!Pimmy wrote:Meanwhile, yeah Shizune is written good.[...] She's [...] rewarding. And anyone who calls her tsundere doesn't know what that word means.
About that.Deimos wrote:"Are we (or rather some of us) treating Shizune unfairly?"
Synoptic wrote:Now, I saw people saying that Shizune ain't too nice... "picked a fight, scares hanako or scolds emi" but damn, from what I see she's taking the lead there, acting like a leader for everyone in a "war people tend to rach out for hope and a better future".
She is in fact the student council president and her class rep so she has to be prompt and decisive about things.
I for one didn't start labeling Shizune as a bitch at the start but instead I took a GOOD look at how other characters describe her, taking Lily's comment into consideration A LOT because from what I saw so far, Lily ain't the type to hold a grudge and her comment at "miss hakamichi" (as she calls her) rather gave me the impression that she's saying "she is indeed a bit stingy but she has to hold it together for the rest of the students too", you know like a more motherly way of saying things with a smile on her face.
Shizune is AWESOME! In all aspects!
Dat's why I like her the most.
Nice trolling today but in the end it payed off!
Looking forward to more dev-talk about chars on the blog and of course mostly for Shizune.
Don't think of your heroine less than other dev's work, you're doing a great job.
Keep up the good work!
Cheers,
Synoptic.
I think there's more to Shizune's character than creating conflict, so in my opinion, I don't think there always needs to be some in order to remain interesting. Out of all the girls, she definitely has a strong personality, so I was a bit disappointed to mostly only see the conflict side of her be used to drive the scenarios. (Join the club, join the club! compete compete! contest contest!) Though, they were all VERY character-driven, which was good. We got to see glimpses of more sides to Shizune throughout though, and that was the rewarding part.
I'm looking forward to the full path for a lot of reasons, not just because I've become more endeared to her and Misha, but I'm hoping to see more interactions with the other characters. She seems antagonistic in the first act, I tacked that down to the "class rep" archetype, since they tend scold just about everyone! I'd like to see her around others when she -doesn't- have a reason to tell them off. Though judging by the low attendance of the student council... we'll see! Poor girls.
A lot of people keep saying Misha will become a third-wheel. I think that's really silly. Those two are close, and Misha seems like a person who really goes well with Shizune. Hisao provides someone she can compete with, and Misha provides that peppy gal-pal. I don't think the introduction of a love interest for her will loosen a strong friendship so easily, especially since Hisao learning sign hardly discounts Misha as a useful and good friend. I feel a bit bad for Shizune in that respect, seems few people outside of miss pink can handle her fiery nature! (Not counting communication issues) I think Shizune definitely falls under "She's great once you get to know her!"
From what I can assume some reasons for disliking Shizune reveal al lot about what those people who post it endured in their own life or they can at least empathize with her "victims". I will not go into that - personal matters of unknwon people are a no-go for me.
I like Shizune as a person which in itself is not very difficult since all heroines so far have no conflict in their scenario but I do not like her path. To be honest, A22, I consider your part of the story to be quite hard to write (just like I think a character like Rin is hard to portray) and I can not find any remarkable flaws in Shizune's character.
She is consistent and her interactions are believable and I am very comfortable with people like her in my life.
My problem lies in what Hisao has to become in order to date Shizune. An English proverb says something along the lines:
"I do not only love you for what you are but also for what you let me become through your love."
Hisao just strikes me as the generic anime male lead who most of the times is the underdog in regards to his female counterpart in Shizune's part of Act 1.
And that is why I think you will have a hard job writing a story in which such a stereotype will hopefully be avoided.
With establishing Shizune you have proven yourself as a good author And I look forward to seeing your complete work when all the characters have grown from the first impression the demo has given us so far.
To be fair the same thing happens with Rin: Hisao clearly couldn't give a shit about art if he doesn't pursue her. Hanako and Lilly represent paths that so far don't require Hisao to show an interest in something he ordinarily wouldn't.Deimos wrote:My problem lies in what Hisao has to become in order to date Shizune.