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Re: Wine (Chapter 2)
Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 3:10 pm
by swampie2
Ohh dear, this could go incredibly badly incredibly fast. Wonder how N&N will deal with this.
Re: Wine (Chapter 2)
Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 3:49 pm
by AntonSlavik020
Well this went a direction. It's pretty hilarious how Hanako took Nat's advice literally. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Re: Wine (Chapter 2)
Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 4:47 pm
by Sadako
That was great fun, thank you! We saw Hanako tipsy in KS, but to see her staggering about, absolutely haystacked is a special kind of wonderful.
I too think this will not end well. And I can’t wait.
Re: Wine (Chapter 2 - 26/8/15)
Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2015 6:53 pm
by d2r
Hilarious as always. I enjoy that you manage to center the story around fairly off-kilter humour without making the story suffer for it - it's one of your strengths as a writer. I look forward to your next installment.
Re: Wine (Chapter 2 - 26/8/15)
Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:15 am
by Skeeve
Time to buckle up. Drunk Hanako is love; drunk Hanako is life. And hey! There's still time to shoehorn in an ill advised yuri vomitorium scene.