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Ha, I was wondering when the Looking-Glass would appear. It's an excellent psychological Rin I'm reading here. Good job. Although I do think she has a finer sense of colour, which is a minor quibble.

Yay, it's here! You already know what I think.

brythain wrote:Ha, I was wondering when the Looking-Glass would appear. It's an excellent psychological Rin I'm reading here. Good job. Although I do think she has a finer sense of colour, which is a minor quibble.

I realised that I completely forgot to reply.

I'm glad to hear I'm getting the characterisation right. Writing Rin makes me nervous, though I think I'm steadily getting a surer hand on her, especially after I played through the game again. I'll definitely take into account your comment about Rin's sense of colour and how it might play into her characterisation.

I'd also like to thank Alpacalypse, Blank Mage and Dewelar for proof-reading the last chapter and offering advice. Not only did you guys catch several mistakes and give valuable advice, you also made posting this a whole lot less nerve-wracking.