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Re: From Shizune's Perspective
Posted: Wed Oct 31, 2012 11:03 pm
by griffon8
Goldilurks wrote:lol @ my fic and how far off it is after playing the Shizune route.
Too right. Just finished rereading this and that was the big thing that struck me with the Shizune/Misha conversation at the beginning of chapter 2.
Started going through the old stories that I liked. I'm compiling a list of stories that have my personal recommendation. They'll be split between stories that were written with only Act 1 to go on and Full Release. I helped edit this one, so how can it not be recommended by me?
And it ’ships my two favorite characters.
And it was also inspiration for me to write a story for another unlikely pairing.
Re: From Shizune's Perspective
Posted: Sat Dec 01, 2012 7:08 am
by ChrisTheCat
This is pretty damned good. I'll admit I was a tad skeptical about the whole affair, i.e. shipping Shizune with Emi, but it's turning out very well.
Re: From Shizune's Perspective
Posted: Sun Apr 12, 2015 9:20 am
by Oddball
It's always fun going back and reading the old stories just to see how different they are than what we actually ended up with.
I think Emi being a lesbian was a bit to convenient and Shizune changed her ways a touch too easily but otherwise it was a fun little romp.
I also want to congratulate you on the first part of your story. You managed to make a Shizune that came across as even MORE of a bitch and less likable than the actual game version was.
Re: From Shizune's Perspective
Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2018 1:11 pm
by sloth4
This was a good read. I'm not sure why, but making Shizune a bigger bitch has somehow made her a more likable character in my book.
Re: From Shizune's Perspective
Posted: Wed Apr 25, 2018 7:28 pm
by WorldlyWiseman
lol at basically everything in this fic being a near-complete reversal of what wound up in canon but still managing to land on many of the themes in Shizune's arc. Cons: could have used less swearing, and the signing 'voices' of Misha and Shiz wound up 'sounding' the same almost all the time.