What you WOULD have wanted to happen in the story

[qinop]

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[Panty Supervisor]

I want to see Shizune, Misha and Hisao getting drunk together and then waking up all together in Shizune's room the next morning, wondering what the fuck happened.

No wait, Lilly is too perfect, I want to see her drunk. And Hanako would be like "Jeez, not again, Lilly "

[Wrench Wench]

I want to see Shizune and Hisao fight. All as part of some insane "YOU GOTTA EARN IT HISAO!" decision by Shizune. I am talking a literal brawl here with both of them ending up broken, bloody and bruised for it. But much closer as a result.

[ContinualNaba]

I want to see Shizune and Hisao fight. All as part of some insane "YOU GOTTA EARN IT HISAO!" decision by Shizune. I am talking a literal brawl here with both of them ending up broken, bloody and bruised for it. But much closer as a result.

Possibly because Shizune gives Hisao an arrest due to the shock and damage he sustained through the fight?

I always thought that would happen anyway. Give Shizune development through learning to ease up. Besides, considering who's writing her path...

[Wan-wanniche]

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Yes!

[Warwick]

I want to see Shizune and Hisao fight. All as part of some insane "YOU GOTTA EARN IT HISAO!" decision by Shizune. I am talking a literal brawl here with both of them ending up broken, bloody and bruised for it. But much closer as a result.

Yamaku Fight Club. I like it.

[Sperance]

I would like to see more of Kenji. Not as a route, but as a supporting character that isn't just comic relief. I mean, I just can't believe his whole hatred for women came from the "sucks my life-force" thing. Some information about him, if you will. Okay, fine, I'm just curious about why is he so damn nuts. I just can't wrap my head around half the things he says!

[vaelant]

I would like to see more of Kenji. Not as a route, but as a supporting character that isn't just comic relief. I mean, I just can't believe his whole hatred for women came from the "sucks my life-force" thing. Some information about him, if you will. Okay, fine, I'm just curious about why is he so damn nuts. I just can't wrap my head around half the things he says!

Maybe....
Kenji is related to Rin

[neumanproductions]

I just can't wrap my head around half the things he says!

That right there is the sole meaning of his existance. Eventually you will get to understand Rin, but Kenji will be a big "I don't underastand what's wrong with you". Unless you want a yaoi scene in which case you're going to understand even less.

After reading Kosher's latest fic, I might actually want to see another side of Shizune. Maybe not the masochist that Kosher portrays, but something that contradicts the bossy, competativeness of her more that the first act attempts to accomplish already.
And strip chess. (maybe me saying it repeatedly will somehow make it appear spontaneously)

[griffon8]

After reading Kosher's latest fic, I might actually want to see another side of Shizune. Maybe not the masochist that Kosher portrays, but something that contradicts the bossy, competativeness of her more that the first act attempts to accomplish already.
And strip chess. (maybe me saying it repeatedly will somehow make it appear spontaneously)

Hmmmmmmm…

*Gets idea*

*Starts to take notes for new fanfic*

Muah-ha-ha-ha!

[Darlat]

I just can't wrap my head around half the things he says!

That right there is the sole meaning of his existance. Eventually you will get to understand Rin, but Kenji will be a big "I don't underastand what's wrong with you". Unless you want a yaoi scene in which case you're going to understand even less.

Or you could be insane and fully understand what he says.

[Wrench Wench]

I would like to see more of Kenji. Not as a route, but as a supporting character that isn't just comic relief. I mean, I just can't believe his whole hatred for women came from the "sucks my life-force" thing. Some information about him, if you will. Okay, fine, I'm just curious about why is he so damn nuts. I just can't wrap my head around half the things he says!

I can understand what Kenji is on about. His delusions are actually very consistent.

[bradpara]

Main thing I would like to see is conintued interaations with the girls other than the one you choose in Act 1 with option of devloping freindships with them. Like say, if you pick either the Lilly, Hanako or Shizune paths you could,if you play your cards right, facilitate those two learning to understand eachother and burying the hatchet at least somewhat. Also to have there be at least opprunity for at least, a Partial Tenchi Soloution in each arc.

[Verett]

I'd like to see Hisao's parents again or Iwanako, or maybe even just a mention. It seems like they just got pushed away during Act 1.

Character development would be cool too, like the girls change depending on how you act with them. Or something.

[Sheepdog87]

i dont really care too much about the sex if i wanted that I'd go to some other site. What I would really like would be a good romantic story, a well thought out and creative ending, an ability to choose and make those tough decisions that make you think and choose carefully, a little humor mixed in, and an epilouge that tells you the aftermath of all the decisions that you will have made. im not asking for originality, because I doubt anything is more original than this story in this day of age!