Yeah, I want to draw Rin sleeped aganist Hisao, and when I finish draft I discovered......Damn, it's not Hisao but someone may another girl with Hisao's clothes.
But it's my first colorate,it seems not bad to me.
Well, the whole animeface.jpg thing you have going on is kind of...
I don't know how to put it. I'm really holding back, but the nicest way I can say it is that it looks like you took inspiration from Type-Moon sprites.