Rin and ...... Someone...maybe Hisao

[suoan]

Yeah, I want to draw Rin sleeped aganist Hisao, and when I finish draft I discovered......Damn, it's not Hisao but someone may another girl with Hisao's clothes.

But it's my first colorate,it seems not bad to me.

[kosherbacon]

The feet look a little funny, like they're wearing clogs and yeah, Hisao does look a little odd but other than that it's a pretty good color job.

Hisao's hair is brown, btw.

[suoan]

Yeah, infact I don't know how to draw the shoes and even the clothes,maybe I should try some characters naked.

[bitpeg]

Well, the whole animeface.jpg thing you have going on is kind of...
I don't know how to put it. I'm really holding back, but the nicest way I can say it is that it looks like you took inspiration from Type-Moon sprites.

[Synoptic]

Am I the only one who sees Rin as a "strict and quiet type of Ojou" upon looking at her face?

She gives that kind of impression doesn't it?