Extremist and Kosher's Lilly/Shizune goodness

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Lemoney chapter/extended ending coming later tonight or tomorrow morning.. :p
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I have seen the lemony yuri goodness.

It is glorious.

Glorious.
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Extremist_Line wrote:I have seen the lemony yuri goodness.

It is glorious.

Glorious.
You are all in for a treat.
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Weeeeellll.....

Everyone who's read it so far is still alive so I guess it's okay.

Warning: If you object to the idea of disabled girls bumping clams, or if it is illegal for you to read pornographic literature, please do not read any further.stop playing eroges such as KS.

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-Common Language-


Shizune sat on Lilly's bed and held her by the hand, conversing with her. Through strokes of their fingers, they transmitted their thoughts to each other in the most basic, pure way possible. With Lilly's voice silenced and Shizune's eyes closed, they stepped down to equal footing, neither having an advantage.

With the intimacy inherent in tactile language, the girls found themselves being more honest to each other than with anyone else. Still, Shizune had a feeling that Lilly had been keeping something from her the whole evening.

”Shizune, how long have we been together?”

”It has been forty-eight days, ten hours, and twenty-seven minutes since you accepted my confession.”

Even with her eyes closed, Shizune could see that Lilly was smiling, amused at her girlfriend's precise record keeping.

”Say it to me again, Shizune.”

”I love you, Lilly Satou.”

”No, say it with your lips. Like you did before.”

“I love you, Lilly Satou.”

Lilly squealed with delight at hearing Shizune's voice again. She could tell that she had been practicing her speech, probably with Misha's help.

”Open your eyes, I have something to show you.”

With well practiced precision, Lilly recited the signs Misha taught her.

”I love you too, Shicchan.”

Shizune chuckled audibly at Lilly's use of Misha's “Shicchan” sign. Finally, Lilly declared that she loved Shizune back. Overjoyed, Shizune embraced Lilly and gave her a very expressive kiss, which was her and Lilly's other preferred form of communication. Even if seeing Lilly declare her love was all that happened during their sleepover, she'd be happy.

”Shizune, I want to ask you something.” Lilly said to Shizune's hand. Her question must have been serious if she actually said she was going to ask. To expedite things, they would normally ask things as soon as they came to mind instead of beating around the bush.

”What is it?”

”I want to see you.”

”I don't understand.”

Lilly momentarily paused the conversation and started unbuttoning Shizune's blouse.

”Now do you understand? And I want you to see me too.”

”Yes.” Shizune replied before finishing what Lilly started. After a few nervous pauses and hesitant moves, her clothes found their way to the floor.

”Okay, She said to Lilly's palm. I'm ready.”

Lilly ran her hand from Shizune's shoulder, down her breast, and to her navel. It was cold in Lilly's room, but what made Shizune shiver was her sudden state of vulnerability. She may have been nude in the presence of others before, but she was never exposed like this before.

“Are you cold?” She asked with her lips, noticing Shizune's goosebumps. “Here.”

Lilly stood up on her knees and pulled her shirt open, giggling when Shizune took the initiative and snapped open her bra's conveniently located front clasp. Once she was fully undressed, Shizune took a moment to soak in the view and then pulled Lilly close to her.

As they laid on the bed sharing warmth, Lilly took Shizune's hand to speak again.

”Better?”

”Much.”

Lilly flicked the table lamp off to fill the room with darkness, bringing the two back into equal terms. After a long moment of simmering in the dark, Lilly shared more of her desires with Shizune.

”Shizune, may I experience you?”

”Experience?” Shizune knew damned well what Lilly meant, she just wanted to tease her.

”I want to know everything there is to know about you, to become one with you.”

”From the day I realized that I loved you I considered you part of me. I will not stop you.”

Lilly ran her hand down Shizune's back and made her squirm. There was evidently much to be learned about her, such as her ticklish spots. She took her time, lovingly caressing every curve, surface, nook, and cranny on Shizune's body, from the supple perkiness of her breasts, to the crevices between her toes while saving the best for last. Slowly but surely, Lilly imprinted a full portrait of her girlfriend inside her head.

Starting just below Shizune's navel, Lilly traced her fingertips southward, taking a moment to run her fingers through the thin but even patch of pubic hair and squeezed her mound.

Lilly left a trail of wet kisses from the back of Shizune's ear down to her nipple, where she flicked her tongue around and sucked on it. Shizune's erect nipples were pointier and somewhat longer than her own, which was conducive to sucking. Satisfied that she covered the left side, she moved onto the right and repeated the process while Shizune undid Lilly's ponytail and ran her fingers through her hair.

After a few exploratory strokes around the edges, Lilly slid her middle and index finger down the middle and squeezed Shizune's clit in between before sliding her fingers inside to see how wet she'd gotten. Lilly pulled her hand out and licked her fingers clean.

”Come for me.” Lilly said before moving down. Shizune grabbed her legs up by the back of her thighs to make room for Lilly, who immediately went about tugging at her lips with her own.

“AH!” She squeaked when Lilly ran her tongue up from her just below her lips, went briefly inside, and flicked at her clit, then began sucking on it. Lilly sent up one hand to knead one of Shizune's nipples and penetrated her with two fingers from the other.

The dark world of Lilly's bedroom was becoming a distant memory. Even the sheets she was laying on ceased to exist. Shizune was floating around in a vacuous abyss alone with Lilly, linked to her through her mouth and hands. Soon, she lost track of her own extremities, then her senses. There was no room, no school, no world, not even Shizune. All that she was aware of was Lilly's fingers rhythmically grinding against the front of her insides.

She just couldn't take it anymore. Bolts of ecstasy shot through her body, loosening the grip she had on her thighs. As her toes curled up and dragged on Lilly's back, Shizune grabbed at Lilly's hair, holding onto her as if her life depended on it. Even her throat was shaking; if Shizune was making noises, Lilly was too occupied to inform her. When the worst of the quaking was over with, Lilly emerged from between Shizune's legs and kissed her.

At first, she recoiled away from the kiss, not because she disliked tasting herself, but because she was suddenly hypersensitive to touch. Even the gentle sensation of Lilly's lips on her own sent her into convulsions. For the moment, Shizune backed off into a corner of the bed, holding Lilly only by the hand.

When she was ready, Shizune crawled over on top of Lilly. Even with her eyes closed and the room dark, she knew where Lilly was and where her limbs were oriented. As long as they were touching, she just knew.

Shizune set about trying to see Lilly the way Lilly saw her. The two used their hands in opposite ways. Lilly saw with hers while Shizune used hers to speak. Shizune considered herself fortunate in being able to see, but maybe there was something to Lilly's method. Shizune would have never fully appreciated Lilly's curves with her eyes alone, nor the soft, unweathered smoothness of her skin.

No, hands weren't going to be enough either. She had two more underutilized senses at her command. Starting with Lilly's toes, Shizune decided not to leave a single spot untasted. Slowly, her tongue traveled upwards, making an extended stop between Lilly's legs to relish in her flavor and to enjoy the feel of freshly shaved skin against her cheeks.

”I've always wanted to do that to you.” Shizune said to Lilly's palm after pressing her face between her ample breasts and exhaling. Apparently the desire to “motorboat” was a genetic trait common to all humans, regardless of sensory disability.

After the brief mood derailment, Shizune resumed “scanning” Lilly, ending at her mouth, where their juices combined in a fiercely passionate kiss. Lilly locked her legs around Shizune and guided her hand towards her crotch. No translation was needed to know what she wanted; Shizune wondered how someone as classy as Lilly would word such a proposition if she had to.

While Shizune rubbed and stroked away, Lilly groped wildly at her partner, pressing every possible square centimeter of skin against Shizune as if her whole body was an erogenous zone. Eventually, it dawned on Shizune why Lilly wanted to hold her like that when they had sex. She wasn't joking when she said she wanted to become one with her. Instead of touching at only certain points, she wanted to completely wrap herself around Shizune and blur the lines between them until they ceased to exist.

Shizune felt sudden shallow, rapid breathing from Lilly's mouth, then a pause, signaling the start of an orgasm. Lilly clamped on tighter and reached around to hook two fingertips inside Shizune. For an extended moment, they really did become one. Shizune felt someone moaning. Was it Lilly? Or was it herself? She could no longer tell anymore.

After Lilly's body fell slack and relaxed, Shizune rolled over and laid next to her. While Lilly caught her breath, Shizune cradled her head in her arms, filling her nose with the scent of Lilly's hair, completing her sensory experience. She pensively ran her fingers through the sweat that accumulated between their bodies and linked them together into a complete person, their advantages making up for each other's shortcomings.

Their bliss was interrupted by banging on Lilly's door. Shizune didn't need to be told of the sound; the knocking was shaking the whole room. In spite of the urgent tempo of the banging on the door, Shizune lazily rolled out of bed and put a night shirt on in no hurry. After at least a couple minutes of shambling across the room, Shizune opened the door.

Misha was at the entrance, sternly holding her hands to her waist. She was dressed in a house robe and bunny slippers. Her face was coated in a green emulsion that was probably wasabi paste that some shady salesman sold to her as “a rejuvenating organic face mask.” Huge, unwieldy curlers sat in her hair, setting her drills.

”YOU.” Misha shouted with her hands at Shizune. ”NEED. TO. LEARN. VOLUME. CONTROL.”

”Did my declarations of love wake you up?” Shizune replied with a smirk.

”YOU CALL THOSE GRUNTS AND MOANS DECLARATIONS OF LOVE? YOU WOKE UP THE WHOLE DAMNED FLOOR!”

”Sorry, sorry. If the dorm mom asks you, just tell her I was having a nightmare.”

”No, I was the one having a nightmare. Go to sleep, you two!”

Misha stormed off and Shizune returned to bed. Lilly was visibly amused by the scandal they just ignited, having heard Misha whisper the conversation out loud for her to hear.

”Wanna do it again?” Shizune asked Lilly.

“Shhh.” She replied with a finger to Shizune's lips, nodding.

-End-
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kosherbacon wrote: ”YOU.” Misha shouted with her hands at Shizune. ”NEED. TO. LEARN. VOLUME. CONTROL.”
Oh, the irony!
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:O
Awesome pronz at that.
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Okay, trying my best to be mature about this.

That was a very well-written sex scene. A very unusual one, to be sure, considering the nature of the participants, but I'd say you captured it very well. There's a real sense of sensuality conveyed here, not just mindless smut, and likewise, it reads like a very realistic, down-to-earth experience. You'd never see someone in trashy romance novel motorboating. ;)

So, yeah. Good job.
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yes, yes, I didn't mean to downgrade the work if anyone got such a thought. It's really well written.
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...

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ok I just had a vision of a mostly-deaf person banging on the ceiling using morse code {keep it down up there!}

..... yeah I can be as odd as Rin at times
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Shades of gray wrote: ok I just had a vision of a mostly-deaf person banging on the ceiling using morse code {keep it down up there!}
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"hey you two up there keep it down"

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This thread is too awesome for words. Signs will do just fine though.

Seriously, this is all I could have ever wanted when I asked for these fics. Thanks guys. If you don't mind (and I ever get around to finishing Katawa Haha), could I translate these fics into comic script form?
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Goldilurks wrote:If you don't mind (and I ever get around to finishing Katawa Haha), could I translate these fics into comic script form?
You've got my permission for mine. :)
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kosherbacon wrote:
Goldilurks wrote:If you don't mind (and I ever get around to finishing Katawa Haha), could I translate these fics into comic script form?
You've got my permission for mine. :)

You've got permission for using mine as well.
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I <3 you both. Danke.
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THE CRACK PAIRING! AHHH THE GOGGLES DO NOTHING!
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