V. day (Hanako)

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The first half was cute, though I'm not sure how I feel about the second half yet
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I enjoyed your work well. The concept doesn't sound to far of from something that I could see happening, but highly unlikely that the teachers and staff would be in on it since several of the students might have problems dealing with being gassed. :? Not the smartest thing to do in a school full of students with health and physical disabilities. :roll:
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Re: V. day (Hanako)

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Honestly, I loved it.
There needs to be more fanfiction like this, instead of scenes that feel like they could have been ripped straight from the original work, putting the characters in more interesting... "School Rumble" situations, you might say.

Looking forward to lelouch and shizune's showdown.
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