"Prequels"

WetCrate · Post by **WetCrate** » Wed May 06, 2009 4:16 pm

Just wanted to write some stories.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5043751/1/What_Came_Before

Figured I'd post my stories on that site -- better than wasting your space here, and if you don't wanna read it you don't has to click.

I'm writing little, I dunno, prequels (for lack of a better term) for characters in the game. Probably just the five love interest characters, but who knows what will happen.

I only have Rin's up right now, but more should follow.

Edit: Hanako, Shizune are up

Envy · Post by **Envy** » Wed May 06, 2009 4:50 pm

[20:27] <!Delta_Kurshiva> I think I'm going to cry if I see a Katawa Shoujo category on fanfiction.net

WetCrate · Post by **WetCrate** » Wed May 06, 2009 4:52 pm

*shrug*

Thistledown · Post by **Thistledown** » Sat May 09, 2009 2:19 am

That sounds like the inside of Rin's head, alright. I enjoyed it.

WetCrate · Post by **WetCrate** » Sun May 10, 2009 2:09 am

Bump

Hanako's is up.

The Chemist · Post by **The Chemist** » Sun May 10, 2009 12:50 pm

Loving Hanako's story.

Moar?

Ozymil · Post by **Ozymil** » Sun May 10, 2009 1:40 pm

Hanako seems very... jolly near the end. Ah, but I understand, haha. It was just a bit unusual for me when all I've seen is a shy, blushing Burn-tan.

Please do keep up the writing! (Pssst! Get Shizune next!)

PCJedi · Post by **PCJedi** » Sun May 10, 2009 9:07 pm

Wow, someone actually went and made an actual KS category on Fanfiction.net. My condolences to Delta.

WetCrate · Post by **WetCrate** » Tue May 12, 2009 3:55 pm

Bump

Shizune is up. I don't know how I feel about this one. Comments/criticisms are appreciated.

Kari · Post by **Kari** » Tue May 12, 2009 4:16 pm

I really liked Shizune's chapter, maybe because it stretched further back into her childhood, or maybe because I felt there was more...feeling to it. I felt sorry for her throughout the whole thing. Very well done, in my opinion.

ChaosEngine · Post by **ChaosEngine** » Wed May 13, 2009 4:21 pm

Just read the Shizune one. I really quite liked it, it gives a good amount of potential insight into her current character. Her emotions seemed spot on. Only one complaint:

At college, perhaps, she will meet a hard-working, smart young man working towards a law degree. Or a young doctor, fresh out of residency, will take a fancy to her and make her feel warm inside.

What? No love for the Physicists and Engineers? I'm wounded.

This encourages me to start fleshing out the ideas I've been playing around with. Well done!

GMKGoat · Post by **GMKGoat** » Wed May 13, 2009 5:36 pm

I quite liked Shizune and Rin's. Felt like Hanako's lacked the sense of urgency that usually permeates her scenes, though. Like she was very content and at ease, even when recalling her time at the hospital post-accident.

trekki859 · Post by **trekki859** » Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:47 pm

intresting i realy like the shizune chapter and i think the hanako matches her perfectly her personality seems to come out in it

Azuell · Post by **Azuell** » Fri Oct 09, 2009 11:09 pm

Those were awesome!!

Fronzel · Post by **Fronzel** » Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:47 pm

Commenting on six-month old posts, lol. But it's only halfway down the first page of the sub-forum, so I think I'm entitled.

Someone said that thought Hanako sounded too jolly; I think Shizune isn't jolly enough. Looking at the game, she's confidant and persistant in engaging with Hisao and seamlessly moves from trying to recruit him into the council to cultivating a friendship. The Shizune in this piece seems damaged and frosty: quite incapable of taking the iniative with Hisao as she does.

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