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Shifting Hope

Chapter 1: Introductions

Escaping the classroom is a small win. Now what is there to do? I have no clubs to help and I can’t spend every hour reading. While thinking over my options a voice calls out from behind.

“Hey wait up, Nakai! We want to talk to you.” I turn around and see two girls from class walking up to me. The one in front has golden blonde hair with light brown eyes that are near maroon. Her skin is pale and she’s a little thin. Naomi Inoue I think? A girl with glasses and chocolate colored hair follows behind her. As they near me I see her eyes, her right being an olive color while the other matches her hair. They look quite pretty actually. However, I don’t remember her name.

I haven’t talked much with either of them but they’re together as often as Misha and Shizune are. Inoue is the only one to match the volume of Misha that I’ve heard of, so at least she seems friendly enough.

“Hey there Nakai. Thanks for stopping. I’m Naomi Inoue, and this is Natsume Ooe. But you can call me Naomi, everyone else does.” She beams a bright smile at me while Ooe steps forward and gives a slight bow.

“Please call me Ooe. Nice to meet you.”She might be the first student here to use their last name.

“Nice to meet you too. You can call me either Hisao or Nakai, whichever you prefer.”

“Great! I can tell we’ll get along real well. We’ve been meaning to introduce ourselves but haven’t had a chance yet. We’re from the newspaper club and like to know everything about everyone. A new student would normally make the front page, but fortunately for you the festival this weekend is taking that up.” Must be a boring school if new students are that groundbreaking. Surely a new school with their level of accommodation would be used to drop ins?

“Or perhaps unfortunately for you, a picture on the front page would advertise you quickly to all the ladies around here.” Naomi laughs as I feel my cheeks warm.

“I uh, I think I’m good.”

“Of course you are. Naomi, move on already.” Thank you Ooe.

“Sorry sorry. We wanted to invite you to join us for dinner in the cafeteria! Since you’re new and all I figured we’d extend a welcoming hand.” Dinner? I wasn’t really planning on grabbing it in the cafeteria tonight, but I suppose a meal shared is better than alone.

“Sure, I was probably going to head there soon anyways.”

“Great! We can talk on the way.” Naomi leads us down the stairs, talking the entire time. Ooe walks beside her, a little hidden from my view. It feels familiar but I can’t remember why.

“I hope they have something decent for dinner today. I really don’t feel like eating a piece of bread again.”

“Naomi, you're too picky. You’ve been eating bread for how many days now?” Naomi pouts as she responds.

“It’s not my fault melon is the only good flavor this school knows! I’d rather not eat a mystery meat curry, thank you very much.”

“Oh you know it’s chicken, don't be dramatic.” They both laugh and seemingly forget I’m here for the moment. Ooe reminds me how Mai used to treat me and Takumi. The trouble we would get into before Mai would knock some sense into us, sometimes more literally than figuratively. I hope they’re doing okay.

“Hisao, what do you think of the meals here?” A question from Naomi interrupts my train of thought.

“They aren’t too bad. Gourmet compared to hospital food.”

“Lots of experience with that?” Ah shit. Shouldn’t have let that slip. My face stiffens up at the question.

“Read the room, Naomi.” Ooe hits the back of her head, albeit fairly soft.

“Sorry. I agree though. The food is what I hate most about hospitals.” She shutters. Luckily we are nearing the cafeteria and the conversation trails off as we get in line for food. Looks like dinner today is some noodles and vegetables. Not a terrible selection. Naomi still grabs melon bread.

“I can’t believe you’ll choose bread over noodles.” Ooe scolds Naomi.

“I’m not that hungry anyways. Plus I always know how it will taste!”

“Whatever you say, Naomi.”

“How’s your first few days going, Hisao? I saw you already made an enemy of Shizune. Not good.” I wince.

“I didn’t think anyone saw that.”

“Newspaper club Hisao, we hear everything. I’ve learned to be quiet and blend in when I need to.”

“You hid on the other side of the door. The only reason no one saw you was because Lilly is blind.” I laugh at Ooe’s joke and feel a bit better about the morning.

“Point is, you can’t be making enemies the first week here. You need friends. Like me, I’ll be your friend for the price of one bread.” I raise my eyebrow. “Just kidding. I’ll be your friend for free. You should still get me bread though. Specifically melon.”

“I’ll think about it.” I slurp a big portion of noodles.

“Your introduction could have used a little work. Do you do anything besides soccer and reading?”

“Not really, and I don’t even do the soccer part anymore. Had to give it up.” Naomi looks ready to pry further but thankfully Ooe interrupts her before she can.

“Same thing happened with me and softball. Used to really love it as a kid. Now, not so much.”

“Do you do anything else for exercise, Hisao?” Naomi continues her interview further.

“I tried running this morning, but I didn’t really like it. Hopefully I find something that sticks soon.”

“Oh!” Naomi looks up from her bread with excitement. “Why don’t you try joining Natsume? She goes to the pool in the mornings.” The Nurse did mention a pool. Maybe it wouldn’t hurt to give it a try.

“Hold on Naomi. He can’t really join me, I do my routine in the heated pool built for one at a time.”

“Yeah but you can walk down together. The heated pool and big pool are in the same area aren’t they? It’ll be good for all of us. You guys have morning buddies and I’ll use him as a source if you skip.”

“Hey what do you mean use me as a source? You’re assuming I can even swim.”

“Well can you?”

“Yes but that’s not the point. You can’t just automatically assume I’ll do it.” I'd rather not be a rat for someone I just met.

“C’mon Hisao! It’ll be lots of fun. Right, Natsume?” Ooe looks down at her food.

“I won’t pressure him if he doesn’t want to do it. It might be nice to have someone to go with though.” Her voice lowers to a whisper and I barely hear her last words. I suppose it can’t hurt.

“Alright fine, I will. I’ll need to try and find a swimsuit though. I don’t think I got one with my uniform.”

“Oh don’t worry about that, Nakai. Nurse has a box of unused swimsuits if you ask him. He keeps them around for cases like this.” That’s a little convenient, but I’ll take it. Looks like I have no excuses.

“Great. What time should I meet you, and where?”

“Meet me inside the entrance to the nurses building at 6:30. Nurse’s office is on the way. They have small changing rooms nearby.” It impresses me how much this school has. It’s probably something that has been useful over the years.

“Look at you two, now you’ll be swimming buddies!” For now. There’s a chance swimming doesn’t really suit me and I find something else. I could just go for walks too couldn’t I? Some form of high intensity workout isn’t needed after all.

“Why don’t you swim with her, Naomi?”

“I don’t like exercise. Or getting up early. It’s a hassle.” Fair enough. “I need my sleep so I can stay up and investigate around the school. There's a lot of things that happen at night.”

“Like what?”

“Well I can’t let the details slip, but stay tuned for our article on the storage shed by the girls dormitory. Moans come out from it at night, so it must be haunted.” I choke on my tea as Naomi laughs. Ooe covers her mouth and a small giggle emerges from behind.

“Don’t give our newspaper a bad name, Naomi. We would never cover ghosts.”

“Unless it sold well.”

“We don’t sell, it’s free.”

“But if we did. Ghosts would boost sales. Just don’t go looking for them on your own, Hisao. It’s dangerous work.” I finally recover from my choking and look at Naomi, wondering if she is trying to bait me or not.

“I’ll leave it to the uh, professionals.”

“Should we head out? I have some editing to do tonight.” Ooe looks towards Naomi, holding an empty food tray. Every part of her bowls and plates are completely cleared, not even a single grain of rice is left.

“Sure. Want to walk us out? Or are you going to stay here a little longer, Hisao?”

“I might as well. I should head back to my dorm to study.” We throw our trash away and return our trays. Heading down the quiet hallway conversation picks back up.

“Have you ever been interested in the news, Hisao?” Naomi asks.

“Not much beyond the morning reports. Even then I only listened enough to know if I needed my umbrella or not.”

“What about a school newspaper? Surely you needed to keep track of what was going on?”

“Not really, ours never had anything interesting.”

“That will change once you read ours! Right Natsume?”

“I think so. I spend a lot of time editing your ramblings to be readable.” Naomi laughs as we reach the end of the hallway.

“The newspaper room is this way. Remind us to show you sometime.” Naomi points to the opposite direction from the exit.

“Sure. Thank you for the dinner invite.”

“It’s no problem. Nice meeting you, Hisao!”

“I will see you tomorrow. Goodbye.”

“See you later.” I wave and head off to my dorm. Dinner took longer than I realized. The sun is nearly set and a long shadow is cast across the courtyard. Along the sidewalk I notice Rin’s mural looks much improved compared to yesterday. The amount of work she managed to get done impresses me.

A few minutes later I'm back in my dorm. Four boring walls are there to greet me and the familiar mountain of pills. My afternoons have varied each day here but my evening routine remains the same. Try to study, fail, pick up a book and then ultimately give up on the night and return to my thoughts.

At least tomorrow morning will be new. I always looked forward to swimming in school but at this point I’m hesitant. Running didn’t feel as good as I wanted it to. Swimming might be too tough as well. I guess I’ll find out tomorrow. Hopefully meeting Ooe goes well. We didn’t really talk much tonight, Naomi filled most of the air time. Does she not like me already? If that was the case then why bother agreeing to meet me in the morning? She did save me from Naomi’s prying a couple times. I set my alarm for early tomorrow and try to fall asleep in this impersonal room.

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A nice low-key start to a new route, as is the way!

The only feedback I can really give is about what we've discussed before with adding commas before characters address each other by name at the end of sentences. For example:

“Hey wait up, Nakai! We want to talk to you.”

There's one real grammatical error and a formatting error that you should look at:

As they near I see her eyes, her right being an olive color while the other matches her hair.

Maybe change that to "As they near me" or "As they near, I see her eyes."

“Sorry. I agree though. The food is what I hate most about hospitals.” She
shutters. Luckily we are nearing the cafeteria and the conversation trails off as we get in line for food.

Started a new paragraph in the middle of a sentence there. I think the word "shudders" might be what you were meaning too.

Apart from those, a solid start! Looking forward to what you do!

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This is a nice start! Looking forward for more, thank you!

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I agree: It's off to a good start, and apart from the stuff Sharp-O mentioned it doesn't seem as if you're in dire need of an editor. :-)
Good to see Natsume getting some screen time. I think there was one route about her with an OC but it was unfinished iIrc..

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Chapter 2: Diving In

My hand flails around looking for the alarm as it jolts me awake. Why am I up so early? Do I even need to exercise? Laying in bed I stare at the ceiling, willing myself to get up. I promised. This is good for me. Exercise is good for me. Let’s go.

There’s a chorus of shadows cast onto the school building as I make my way across the campus. Only one figure is visible standing by the nurse’s building. Ooe. Last again I suppose.

“Ah, good morning, Hisao. I’m glad you made it.” Ooe speaks first but promptly turns around and enters the building.

“Yeah I’m glad too.” I follow her into the already familiar hallway.

“Nurse should be in already. I’ll wait outside.”

“Thanks.” I knock on the Nurse's door and enter when I hear a response.

“Mr. Nakai, nice to see you early this morning. What can I do for you?”

“Er, I was told I could get a school swimsuit from you if need be. I plan to try and get some laps in today.”

“Swimming? Was the cute running assistant not enough?” He stares at my blank face for a second before laughing. “As long as you’re moving around I’m happy. I’ll get the suit for you.” He begins to open cabinets and pull out boxes.

“A medium is alright for size.” A thumbs up is his response as he fishes through the last box.

“Got it right here. There’s a locker room by the pool. Do you need someone to show you?” He pulls out a long blue set of swimming shorts.

“No, Ooe is showing me around.” Nurse grins and raises an eyebrow.

“Alright, well just for today take it easy. Swimming is a bit harder than running if you’re not used to it, so please take your time. There will be a lifeguard if you start to drown, but she’s still in training so come get me if there’s an emergency. Of course, have fun,” Nurse smiles.

“Got it. I will keep all of that in mind. Thank you for this,” I raise my hand with the trunks. “I’ll see you after.”

“Stay safe, Nakai.” As I exit I notice Ooe leaning against the opposite wall.

“All ready to go?”

“Yup.” As soon as the word leaves my mouth Ooe turns and begins to walk again. Not one for early morning conversation it seems.

“How long have you been swimming?”

“Only since I started school here.” Ah. That makes sense, she did mention it was physical therapy so it must relate to her reason for being here. Similar to mine.

“Have you been here long?”

“This is my third year.” While we walked further along the corridor the smell of chlorine became more apparent. Must be getting close to the pool.

“Did you meet Naomi when you got here?”

“Our second year.” Still one sentence answers. I didn’t notice before but she’s also walking awkwardly this morning. Slower than usual. Maybe she’s just not having a good morning.

She gestures to two doors on the side of the hallway. “The right one is yours, the left is women’s.” Ooe opens her door and enters without waiting for confirmation. Upon entering the room a familiar sight of tiles, lockers, and benches become visible. The last time I swam was some years ago but the locker room is universal. I also notice a set of showers tucked away in the corner. Unfortunately I did not bring any toiletries with me so I’ll have to keep that in mind if I come back.

While I change I wonder what’s up with Ooe. She seems a lot more business today, but I suppose she was also like that last night. Although nowhere near the same level. Probably just because we don’t know each other that well. If I keep up with swimming perhaps that will change.

I finish changing into the shorts and spare shirt, which give quite a bit of room where they need to while being tight on the waist, and head out through the door opposite the entrance. The shirt will make swimming a bit harder but I don’t really want my scar exposed yet. I’m greeted with a large room, a clear half olympic sized pool in front of me and what appears to be a separate, smaller pool on the other side. That must be the heated pool. My nose is attacked by the chlorine in full force, no longer diluted by walls and distance. There’s not many people here. One lifeguard sitting in a chair on the left, and what looks like a nurse over by the other pool. Similar to the feeling of the track yesterday. Not many are crazy enough to wake up this early for exercise.

“I’ll be going now, Hisao. There’s towels over behind the lifeguard when you’re done.” Ooe comes out from behind me and gives me a scare.

“Okay. I’ll see you later.” She simply nods and moves away. It looks like she was given a school issued swimsuit, a blue one piece that gives plenty of coverage. On the slick tile she seems a little unsteady. I didn’t notice before but her arms seem to have little muscle on them. They’re not thin or large but rather undeveloped. On the other hand her unsteady legs are above average despite their unsteadiness. I turn away and get ready for my swim.

Do I dive right in or use the ladder to get acclimated first? Seeing as Nurse told me to take it easy today, the ladder seems like the best choice. Moving slowly down the rungs my feet touch the water first and I pull back. It’s a bit colder than I expected. Probably hasn’t had time to warm up properly this early in the morning. I push off from the ladder to get it over with.

I enter the water and then bounce back up. I surface shivering and my breath starts to pick up and so does the intensity of my heart beat. I try to slow things down as I adjust to the water. I keep one arm on the wall as the other rests on my chest. Damn. That was not a good idea.

Ba-dum…ba-dum…..ba-dum……ba-dum.

After what feels like an eternity my heart calms down. Okay. I’m okay. This is fine. Letting go of the wall I kick my legs to stay afloat. I stay like that for a minute until I’m sure my heart is steady and begin to use my arms to move slowly around the pool. The entire time I stay a meter from the wall, using it as my safety net. I’ve fully adjusted to the temperature at this point and the water feels good. It slides off of my arms as I slowly glide through.

Every few minutes I stop to check my heart but it stays at a normal pace. I could probably kick it up a bit but I’ll listen to Nurse, just for today. It doesn’t feel as intensive as running but I’m definitely working my body. A look at the clock shows a time of 7:20. I better get out now. I still have to see Nurse and shower before class. While getting out I look towards the other side and notice Ooe has also finished up for the day. Will she see Nurse as well?

My feet plop onto the floor as I enter the locker room with a towel. I dry off quickly before changing back into my dry clothes and head down to see Nurse. Knocking on the door I hear the usual response and enter his room.

“Ah, Nakai. How’d it go?”

“Not too bad. I had a bit of a shock at first with the temperature, but I adjusted after waiting by the wall.” He lowers his smile briefly before bringing it back up.

“Yes the body does react quite strongly to colder water. The regular pool temperature should be high enough for your condition, but if it causes too much of a stress next time I’d suggest the heated pool.” The heated pool? It seems a little restrictive compared to the regular. I’ll have to just get used to the water better. “Other than that, all good on your first day?”

“Yes.”

“Good, good. Let me do a quick check and you can be on your way.” I take off my shirt and feel the cold touch of his stethoscope onto my chest. Although I’m used to it by now the initial feeling still always shocks me. While he listens, the door slams open.

“Nurse! Hisao bail- oh!” Emi bursts into the room and freezes.

“Emi Ibarazaki! How many times do I have to tell you to knock before you enter? I see other patients too!” Nurse takes the same serious tone with Emi that he did with me the other day, and her face turns red as she backs up.

“Sorry, sorry, sorry!” She closes the door shut behind her. I really hope she didn’t get a good look at my scar.

“I swear, that girl never learns.” He sighs. “You can put your shirt back on, although she already got a good look. Your heart is fine, so you should be good to go a little harder tomorrow. Notice that I said a little. Too much of a jump and you’ll just cause more problems, got it?”

“Yes sir.” He smiles in response.

“Good. Please send in Emi as you leave.”

“Alright” I say goodbye and exit the room to a troubled looking Emi. Did she get a look at my chest? How would I determine if she did?

“Did you like what you saw?” She looks at me and her face shows confusion and panic.

“I saw nothing! Sorry!” She squeaks out a response and runs into the office. Great, I said that incredibly embarrassing line and she definitely saw my chest. This is not something I wanted to deal with in my first week here. I shake my head and look around the hallway. There’s no sign of Ooe so I head towards the showers to get ready for class.

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When the bell for lunch finally rings, I think about what to do. Shizune is probably still sore about yesterday, and I only just met Ooe and Naomi. As I pack up my things Emi appears at the door. How is she here that fast? Isn’t her class on the other side of the floor?

“Hisao! I got something for you!” I head over to the door and move out of the classroom with Emi. Hopefully things aren’t too awkward.

“Uh, hey Emi. What’d you need?”

“I’m really sorry about this morning! To make it up to you, how about lunch with two beautiful girls?” Well, that’s something. On one hand, lunch is settled. On the other hand, she seems worried about this morning.

“It really wasn’t that big of a deal, Emi. It’s quite alright.” Her excitement lowers as her face turns into a pout. Uh-oh.

“Please? It’ll make me feel better about the whole thing.” That face is too strong. I can’t ignore it for long.

“Okay okay, I will.” Her face switches in an instant and she begins to hop up and down.

“Really? Yay! Let’s go.” She grabs my hand and begins to pull me along the hallway. Eventually we walk up a set of stairs and push out through a door. The sun blinds me momentarily as gravel crunches under my feet. Lunch on the roof can’t be that bad.

We walk over to where a familiar red haired girl is laying down looking at the sky.

“The clouds are boring today. There’s no fish.” Without missing a beat Emi responds.

“Hmm but there’s a cow. Look!”

“I see those all the time. They just take up space from the better clouds.” Rin replies without looking over and Emi shrugs.

“So you always talk like that, and it wasn’t just me.”

“Talk like what?”

“Ah nevermind.”

“Do you two know each other?” Emi looks at me confused.

“Er, kinda. I met her the other day and helped with mixing paint.”

“She’s always getting people to help her. I don’t know how she does it. Here, Rin, I brought lunch.” At this Rin quickly sits up.

“Mm? A little scrawny for lunch. Not much meat and no rice.” Her eyes aren’t looking towards Emi or her lunches.

“Here. I made bentos. One for each of us. Now eat up.” As she unwraps the boxes I start to smell a savory aroma. Fresh rice, a few pieces of chicken, tamago, some vegetables and a small sweet. This must have taken a while.

“This all looks great. When did you find the time to make it?”

“Oh it didn’t take that long. It’s mostly leftovers from the previous week and the rest I made in about an hour duringthemorningclasstime,” her voice becomes quiet and speeds up at the end. I feel bad that she missed class to make it for me, I’m sure her homeroom teacher will get on her for it.

As I prepare my chopsticks Rin is already eating. It still impresses me how dexterous she is with her feet. The first piece of fried chicken enters my mouth and it tastes as good as it looks.

“Amazing Emi! You really made all this?”

“Of course! I’m rather good at cooking.”

“She rarely makes me anything this good, she must like you.” Emi’s face turns red and I’m sure mine does as well.

“Rin, that’s not true! I make lunch for you all the time, you just don’t eat it fresh.”

“Eh. Fair enough.” Time to pivot.

“Hey Emi, I’m sorry I forgot to tell you about this morning. Running was a little hard for me so I thought I’d try swimming.”

“Ah that’s okay! As long as you’re working out I guess it’s good, no matter what it is. Although now I’m back to lonely runs.” I feel a smidge of guilt in my stomach.

“I might join you again in the future. It wasn’t that bad, I just don’t think I’m ready for it yet.”

“I can understand that. Sometimes running can be more mental than physical! I like that aspect too, though. Like painting, right Rin?” Rin furrows her brow.

“No one can see mental paintings. It’s stuck in your head. That’s why we use canvas. But what if you could look inside someone’s head? Does my skull have little canvases all around it? Hmmm.” I’m not quite sure she knows what Emi was going for but it’s close enough.

“How did swimming go?”

“It wasn’t too bad. The water was a bit of a shock early in the morning but it felt good after a while.”

“Anyone show you the ropes?”

“Ooe was there, but she just showed me the locker rooms and not much else. She was kinda quiet compared to last night, she must not be a morning person.” Emi looks at me curiously.

“Last night?”

“Yeah, she and Naomi invited me to dinner in the cafeteria together. She was a lot more talkative then.”

“Oh? Look at you, Hisao. One week here and you’re eating meals with all the ladies.”

“It’s a good thing there’s nothing wrong in your pants.” Emi bursts out laughing at Rin’s statement and I begin to blush, something that has become more common around Rin.

“Rin! That’s not what’s going on here. They just wanted to meet me is all. Or, well Naomi did.” Emi finishes laughing and starts talking again.

“Don’t take her seriously, Hisao. It’s a losing game. I’m glad you’re getting to meet people around here. What did you think of Natsume?”

“Ooe? Well she seemed friendly last night but this morning something seemed off. She was more quiet and was walking a little weird too.”

“Ah. I wouldn’t worry too much about it. She’s like that sometimes. Well, most of the time really.”

“Do you talk to her much?”

“No, not really. Naomi is always the one interviewing me after track meets, while Natsume stands off to the side taking notes. It’s just her personality. I think.” Well, at least it’s not personally related to me. She must just be shy, which is surprising for a newspaper editor. I keep eating my lunch thinking it over and Emi interrupts my train of thought.

“What do you think of her looks? Isn’t she quite pretty?” This question is most definitely a trap. It doesn’t matter what I think, I cannot answer this question. Although now that I think about it…

The bell rings signaling lunch is over.

“Would you look at the time! Better run, thank you for the lunch Emi. Bye Rin.” I shove the last bit of rice into my mouth and disappear from the rooftop.

“Hey! Running is my thing!”

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The end of the school day comes and I’m left with the same question I had at noon, what to do? Shizune and Misha never came back from lunch, and I don’t feel like helping Lilly with her class project some more.

“He looks just like a lost puppy, doesn’t he?” Naomi’s voice emerges from behind me and I turn to face her. “Oh hey Hisao. Fancy seeing you here.” She is smiling while Ooe stands a little behind her.

“Hey Naomi. Ooe.” I nod my head in her direction.

“Got any plans after class?”

“Not really-”

“Great! Come with us to the newspaper room. I promised to show you some time right?” Well, it’s not like I have anything better to do. I suppose I could go take a look.

“Sure, I’ll follow along. Lead the way.” Naomi and Ooe head out of the classroom and I follow behind.

“Man, class sure was boring today. Nobody was paying attention.” Naomi looks towards Ooe as she speaks.

“Everyone has a lot of work left to do for the festival. Including us if you remember correctly.” Naomi nervously laughs.

“It’s not like you’d let me forget. Are you helping anyone for the festival, Hisao?”

“No. I’ve helped a few people here and there but I haven’t done anything major.”

“Hmm? That’s too bad. Even if you’re new here you should do a little something. Then the festival will be a result of your hard work and dedication! A symbol of grit and ingenuity. Or something.” Ooe looks at her in confusion.

“I had to push you to interview the classes on their stalls for days! And you just barely finished a couple days ago so don’t talk all high and mighty.” I laugh a little to myself watching them. It reminds me of Takumi with Shin. It was fun watching Takumi shut down Shin’s antics from time to time. By now we’ve made it to a door that has a sign on the front. NEWSPAPER ROOM. Must be it.

“Here we are! Home sweet home,” Naomi leads the way in.

I’m not quite sure what I expected a newspaper room to look like. There’s a printer against the left wall surrounded by stacks of paper. In the center of the room is a big table covered in various printings. Old newspapers, written notes, edited manuscripts, ink, pens, markers, drinks and old food boxes are cast all over. On the right side of the wall sits a lone computer on a small desk, with just enough room for a keyboard and mouse. It’s cramped and messy, with a large paper calendar next to the printer that has Saturday marked in a big red circle.

“It’s just you two in here?”

“Yup! Me and Natsume run the whole thing. Excuse the mess, we’ve been a little rushed with tomorrow's deadline.”

“Why tomorrow? Don’t newspapers usually come out on Sundays or Mondays?” This time Ooe answers.

“Yes, but our deadline is the day before. We have to print everything and put them together by hand before putting them out. And this one is a special edition, so it needs to be done right.”

“What makes it a special edition?”

“Well, normally we write about everything around the school. New food items, events, sports, and sometimes a few personal interviews. But this one is all about the festival,” Naomi holds her head up with pride as she explains. “I went and found out about every booth getting set up Sunday and we are making a guide for those attending.”

“It’s one of our biggest undertakings of the year, so it’s been a challenge for the two of us, but we manage.” Ooe sighs and sits at the computer. I can imagine how tired they must be. A newspaper run by two people is most definitely a challenge. With only one computer too I imagine Ooe does most of the editing.

“How does the process normally work? For example, who does what?”

“Well first I do the fieldwork. Either finding something interesting or interviewing. I’ll take my notes back to Natsume and we’ll both split up the stories based on what we would rather do and write them up. I’m not very good with computers so she handles the editing and formatting of the paper.”

“That’s underselling it. Last time you used the computer you deleted hours of work, and we were lucky I kept backups or the paper would have been late.” Ooe responds without looking up from the screen. Naomi rubs her head.

“Yeah… Like I said, not good with computers. But I can get a mean story. Last year's story on the student council meltdown was perfect. We printed extra just in case and there still weren't any papers left.” Student council meltdown? I suppose it has to do with why it’s only Shizune and Misha. I shouldn’t ask.

“That seems like a lot of work for you two to do. How come there’s no one else?”

“Well the newspaper club was kinda dead when we got here. A senior asked us to help her revive it before she graduated but we couldn’t really get any newcomers. Recruitment isn’t our strong suit.” Ooe sighs as she finishes.

“Really? It seems like a newspaper club would attract at least a couple.” Ooe’s eyes dart back to the computer as Naomi speaks.

“It’s a long story. People come and go for a lot of reasons. Usually it’s fine, but sometimes we have a lot of long nights. Like tonight and tomorrow.” Everyone’s been working late this week it seems, the festival must mean a lot. Naomi was messing around earlier, I think, but my classmates are all working hard. Maybe I should too?

“Would you like a hand? Tomorrow I mean.” Naomi’s face lights up and Ooe glances up from the computer.

“You’d be willing to help?”

“Sure. I’d feel bad if everyone else did all this work for the festival and I didn’t. Plus a little bit of thanks for inviting me to dinner last night.”

“Ah Hisao, you don’t have to thank us for that! We can’t write that scathing article on the new kid without meeting you first.” Ooe nudges Naomi with her arm.

“We do not plan on writing that! But really Hisao, are you sure? Like we said earlier, many people don’t take to this club.” Ooe speaks quieter than usual, somehow nervous?

“I mean, what’s the harm in helping for a day? It’s not like I’m agreeing to join the club full time, just giving up my Saturday.”

“But still-”

“Natsume.” Naomi interrupts Ooe with a quick glare and then looks back at me. “We would appreciate any help you can give. I also want to clarify that we can do this on our own, but your help would make it a bit easier.”

“No it’s okay. You seem different from the student council.” Naomi laughs.

“In what way?”

“Well, they definitely did seem like they were trying to recruit me. I suppose I can’t blame them either though. They’ve been doing a lot too.”

“Yeah they’ve been busy too, never have time for comment.” Naomi furrows her brow.

“In that case, you’ll meet us after class tomorrow?” Ooe asks, still in that same intonation.

“Yup. I also see you for swimming in the morning?”

“You definitely will! Which reminds me, how’d it go this morning, Hisao?” Naomi asks.
“I was adjusting to it. First day wasn’t too bad, and Ooe was there this morning.”

“That’s good. Keep up the great work, 007!” Naomi laughs and Ooe just turns back to the computer.

“Well, I’ll leave you to it for tonight. I’m going to go grab some dinner and head back to study. I need to get ahead this weekend.”

“Don’t worry, Hisao! We’ll finish editing tonight and have really easy stuff for you to help with tomorrow!”

“Good luck! I’ll see you in class Naomi. Meet you by the front door again tomorrow, Ooe?” Naomi smiles while Ooe continues to work on the computer.

“Same time as this morning” She responds.

“Sounds good.” With that, I wave to the pair and head out of the room.

After a few minutes of wondering where I was, I finally make it to the cafeteria and grab some bread for dinner and head towards my dorm. I hope I can be of some use tomorrow. Seeing how hard Lilly, Shizune, and all my classmates are working has made me feel a bit inadequate. Sure, I’m new, but how much of that is an excuse to not do anything? I want to do something at the very least. Naomi was grateful but Ooe seemed off. Did I already do something wrong in her eyes? I think about this morning but nothing comes up. Whatever it is, hopefully tomorrow proves a little more fruitful. Emi did say that’s just how she is, but is this a normal way to react to people? I head to my dorm room and attempt to study while overthinking the day. Eventually I fall asleep, my alarm set for way too early.

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Keep up the good work! Loving the story so far and I can’t wait for the next chapter! I’m no grammar expert or even a spelling so the best feedback I can give is to take your time writing there is no rushing perfection :)

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Thank you for the new chapter.
Nothing worth mentioning regarding SpaG, but there's one thing i found strange:

There’s a chorus of shadows

I've never heard that expression before, so I googled it... Seems there is a book called "A Chorus of Ashes and Shadows"... Still in this context it seems strange, since a chorus, to me, implies something acoustical, while there are few things as silent as shadows...

Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

My collected KS-Fan Fictions: Mirage's Myths

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Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.

Sore wa himitsu desu.

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Chapter 3: The Day Before

The alarm goes off and I instantly slam the top to stop it. It’s incredibly useful if I slept late, but there hasn’t been much of that lately. Today will be busy. I’ll have to swim, go to class, and who knows what is involved with helping the newspaper club. My medication goes down rough as I get ready before dragging myself out the door. The morning air is dull and sticky with fog as I walk across the grounds. Nearing the building, I notice Ooe is missing. A quick glance at my watch shows that it’s the same time as yesterday, yet she is nowhere to be found. That’s odd. Maybe she’s just running late today? I wait for a few minutes, distracting myself by running my finger over some crumbly brick.

Ten minutes have passed and she still hasn’t shown. If I wait any longer I won’t have time to swim today, so I go inside without her and head to the locker room. There, I put my extra clothes and head into the pool area. Unlike yesterday, I make a slow entrance into the water which allows my heart to stay calm. While entering I take a look around to see if Ooe has shown up, yet I still don’t see her. Hopefully things are okay with her.

I start my laps, slowly treading water along the wall. It feels more natural than yesterday, with my body easily moving along. Arriving at the opposite end of the pool, I decide to push myself. Hanging myself off the wall with my legs pulled up, I give one large kick and dive beneath the water. I glide through the water like a broken torpedo, and as I slow I pick my head up to gather a breath before returning. Kicking my legs and moving my arms forward and back I try to go the distance. After about 15 meters, I feel a twinge of pain in my chest and stop.

Picking my head up and clinging onto the side, one hand rests on my chest as I make sure the pain was momentary. I stay that way for about a minute and nothing happens, although my heart continues to beat fast. A little too ambitious again today. I slowly move my arms through the water as I head to the exit. It’s only the second day, but progress feels so slow. What is the point of all of this? Get in, nearly die, repeat every day? With my head down, I get out of the pool. I realize Ooe still hasn’t showed up, so she probably skipped for today. Guess I might actually have to report to Naomi on only my second day.

In the locker room I dry off quickly and change before heading to see Nurse. A knock on the door prompts a voice telling me to enter.

“Good morning Hisao, how are we feeling today?”

“Better than yesterday. I didn’t rush in this time.”

“Good to hear. Any problems at all?”

“Well, I tried swimming fast for a few meters and I felt a small pain in my chest. It was only for a split second before I stopped.”

“You’ll have that from time to time. It went away, correct? No lingering pain?”

“Yup.” Nurse gives a small nod of approval.

“Just remember to make slow progress. I know it can be frustrating at times, but you risk setting yourself back if you push too hard, remember that.” I feel like that is easier said than done, but he’s the nurse. “Now, nothing seems out of the ordinary on my end, did you need anything else?” I suppose it can’t hurt to ask.

“Did you see Ooe this morning? She didn’t meet me so I was wondering if she came in earlier.” Nurse looks at me with a sly smile.

“Now, you should know I can’t really answer that question. She is considered one of my patients, after all. Has she caught your attention already?” My face caught a small warmth at his question, but I shook it off.

“No no, it’s just, Naomi wants me to report to her if she comes or not. So I thought that I better check if she came in earlier.”

“Ah Inoue. Her and Miss Ooe are good friends aren’t they? I’m sure she already knows, so go ahead and talk to her if you want to find out. Will you be here tomorrow or are you skipping for the festival?” If Naomi would know already, then why am I her “spy”?

“ I haven’t decided yet. Still don’t know what I have planned.”

“Well at the very least make sure you enjoy it. It is a celebration.”

“I’ll do my best. Thank you.”

“Have a nice day, Nakai.” With that I leave the office and go back to my dorm.

After showering I head to class, distracted by Ooe’s absence. I only just started going with her, maybe she doesn’t go in on Saturdays? I’ll just have to ask her when I see her later. Today I’ll spend a lot of time with the newspaper club. While entering the classroom I realize I’m one of the last people here today. The only ones missing are the teacher, the student council, and the newspaper girls. Misha and Shizune will probably be skipping today to prepare for tomorrow, so I can’t blame them. Everyone’s faces also tell me they’d rather not be here. I move to my seat and sit down.

A minute or two before class starts, Naomi enters. Mutou comes in and starts class. No Ooe to be found. The lesson is lackluster and the class is only partially paying attention. It seems everyone is busy thinking about tomorrow, including Mutou. By the time noon finally comes, he barely has a chance to utter goodbye before everyone leaves. Ooe still never showed up, so I figure I will ask Naomi about it. I wait by my desk so we can head to the club room together.

“Heya Hisao! Ready to get to work?” She leads the way out the door.

“Sure, although I’m not sure what use you’ll have for me.” A laugh.

“Don’t worry, we just need an extra pair of hands!”

“Does that include Ooe? I didn’t see her in class today.” I pause for a second, not sure if I should really continue. “I also didn’t see her at the pool this morning.” Naomi stares blankly at me for a second, possibly confused on why I am telling her this.

“Oh right! You’re my super spy. Don’t worry, Hisao, we just had a late night last night. I got the last minute changes over to her and she was forced to edit for a while. She should be joining us for the printing, though.” She says with a wink. That explains it. I would want to sleep in too if I was working late.

“How much printing do you have to do?”

“Well let’s see. Each guide is roughly 20 pages, and the cover makes 22. We can print two pages per sheet, and on the last sheet the cover is front and back, and then staple together so that’s about 10 pages per guide. And we need maybe 750 or so guides? So 7,500 pages? That sounds about right.”

“The festival will draw that many people in?” I ask.

“Thereabouts. About 200 students and a few hundred visitors.” I nod my head, impressed by the numbers. We arrive at the newspaper room and head inside. To my surprise, Ooe is already there. She’s standing by the printer while it continuously hums and spits out paper. Looking around the room, I notice the main table was cleared off except for stacks of paper that I assume are for the guides. Another new edition is a cane leaning against the computer desk. I don’t remember either of them using a cane before, so I wonder who it belongs to.

“Naomi, Nakai. Good to see you, we have a lot of work to get done today.” Straight to business with her. She seems different, too. More irritated than usual, and stiff. Could just be a result of the work we have to do today. Regardless, not my place to ask.

“Natsume! Don’t just get started. You didn’t go to the pool today, did you?” Naomi closes the distance as Ooe shuffles back, in front of the computer.

“Well, no. But I got a head start on printing!” Naomi glares down at her, her burgundy eyes icing over.

“We’ll talk more later. But you know you should be going every day!”

“I just didn’t feel like it. I overslept and we have a lot of work to do today.” Ooe’s responds flatly and sighs, as if she had repeated this line dozens of times.

“And now you’re feeling the consequences aren’t you? I swear, when will you learn? And you made Hisao worry.” Naomi sighs.

“I - he worried?” Ooe says with a soft, hesitant voice, then blinks and goes back to her serious look. Naomi doesn’t focus on it, and instead turns to me.

“Let’s get started. Hisao, you and I will each work on putting them together and sorting. I”ll show you how to do a few, and then you can start working through your own pile.” I walk over to the table and sit down next to Naomi.

She takes the time to explain the process rather well, and within a few minutes I’m on the opposite side of the table working my own pile. Grab the assortment of pages, make sure they’re in order, staple in the middle, then fold in half. We run like a well oiled machine for about an hour, Ooe refilling our piles just as they are about to run out and the stack of finished guides steadily building.

“Okay, time for a break. I’m starving!” Naomi exclaims while stretching her arms.

“But we’ve only just started, we could-“ Ooe tries to argue before Naomi repeats herself, cutting Ooe off.

“Okay, time for a break. I’m starving!” This time with much more emphasis. “Aren’t you, Hisao?”

I shrug. Food wasn’t something I thought about often lately, but I hadn’t eaten anything so far today. “I guess?”

“Great, the cafeteria should be open. Are you good to make it, Natsume?”

“Yeah, it should be fine.” She grabs the cane that was leaning against the wall and readies herself behind us as we went to the door. Ooe doesn’t seem to be in a talking mood, so Naomi spends the walk talking my ear off about various stories she broke over the years. They aren’t really that interesting, except for the one where she found out the school had been receiving an anonymous donation for the past twenty years. It was a large sum, every year on the same date. Naomi had found an old newspaper article, dated the day after these donations were usually made. It was saved by previous iterations of the club, and detailed the death of a girl named Yuki Sarada. It didn’t explain what she died of, just that one of her last quotes was thanking the school for making her last few years finally feel normal.

Normal. What could that even mean at a school where everyone is anything but?

We arrive at the cafeteria, which is mostly empty with only a few stragglers here and there. Lunch is a sad rendition of soggy fried noodles and bland miso soup. We sit at an empty table and eat for a few silent seconds before Naomi starts up.
“Hisao, what are your plans for tomorrow?” She asks in between mouthfuls of food.

“Nothing. I was maybe going to go for a walk, study.” I shrug.

“Perfect! That means you can join Natsume and I!” Ooe doesn’t show whether she wants me to or not. She simply looks at me, waiting for an answer.

“I’m not sure. Surely you’d have more fun with just the two of you?” Ooe waves me off.

“Boring excuse. Newspaper club is in charge of judging and handing out rewards. That means free food and we need a third to break ties.” Her head looks down at the food as she finishes.

A little bit of free food never hurt anyone. It wasn’t as if I didn’t want to do something, I just didn’t want to intrude. But if both are asking me, I might as well. “Alright. I guess I will go.”

“Yay!” Naomi exclaims, while Ooe simply gives a curt nod and continues to focus on her food. “It’s a great time, you’ll love it I promise!”

“Sure.” I said. I was still unsure, but I really had nothing better to do.

“We made good progress. Please go ahead and leave the rest to us, we should be able to finish it ourselves quite quickly.” Ooe declares.

“But-” Naomi starts.

“But nothing. We can not abuse non newspaper club members, unlike some people around here would.” Her face is dead set. Naomi pouts, but I on the other hand am excited to have the rest of the day to myself.

“Thanks Ooe. I’m glad I could help a little.”

“You helped quite a bit. I thank you, just as long as you come prepared to work and not slack off like Naomi is planning to tomorrow.”

“Hey, that's not fair to say! I always work hard!” Naomi whines.

“Right after you get distracted at the game stalls for an hour, leaving us to miss the last showing of last year’s class 1-3 play.” Naomi giggles, her face turning a little red at the callout. After we finish eating, we say our goodbyes and I go back to my dorm. The rest of the evening passes uneventfully. I study and read with a break for dinner, cup noodles and a bag of chips I had laying around. I stare at the ceiling thinking about tomorrow. I was going to be spending most of it again with these two girls I had just met. Naomi looked eager to make a new friend, possibly even convince me to join the club. Ooe looked as if she didn’t care one way or another what I decided. Part of me wondered if that was just how she was normally, or if part of it was a reaction to me.

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Chapter 4: A New Perspective

My eyes began to flutter open, my body moaning at the miserable night of sleep. A loud thud on the door brought my immediate attention. A quick peek at my clock told me it was far too early for a Sunday. Sluggishly, I threw my blanket to the side. “Coming.” I half yelled at the door. In response, whoever it was knocked faster. Groaning as I reached the door, I pulled it open. To my surprise, a bright-eyed Naomi was standing in front of me, her arm raised ready to knock again.

My eyes went wide at her appearance. A light purple yukata with flowers adorning the design everywhere, a dark purple sash around her waist, and a fully caked up face that is made clear by her hair tied back and adorned with a bright, metallic flower. It’s honestly impressive, and I wondered if Ooe is wearing something similar. It would be nice to see what she looks like dressed up.

“Hisao! You took so long! Why do you look like you just woke up?” She said.

“Because I did.” The question was frustrating. Of course I look like that, it’s 7 in the morning! I should be sleeping until 10 today. Her inquisitive face looked as if she was really thinking about the possibility.

“Hm. Well, are you ready? We have to be out early to hand out pamphlets first.” Ah there it is. I knew there was going to be a catch with accepting the invitation. I let out an involuntary groan. “Don’t worry! It’s not all day. We just have to stack them outside the entrance. They’re smart enough to grab them on their own.” She flashed a smile that was hard to stay annoyed with.

“Okay okay, just let me get dressed.” While I closed the door, I noticed her eyes sweeping behind me, eyeing every detail. Journalists can’t ever turn it off, can they? I really don’t need her finding out little details about me. All I can manage is a sigh as I change into my day clothes and swallow the mess of pills. Slightly easier today, still sucks. When I opened the door again, Naomi was leaning on Kenji’s door, whistling some random tune. For her sake I hope he’s asleep.

“Ready? Let’s go!” She grabbed my hand and tugged me along towards the entrance.

“Hey! I don’t need to be dragged, I can find the door on my own. Is this what happens when Ooe isn’t here to keep you in check?” I struggled to pull my hand free, but she had a strong grip. Naomi doesn’t seem like the girl who willingly takes no for an answer. “Where is she anyways? Weird that you came to find me alone.” Her head barely turned as she replied.

“She didn’t want to know where your room was. Said I found it by unethical means, whatever that means.”

As we walked outside, I was hoping Ooe would be dressed as well as Naomi. Instead of a yukata, however, she was wearing a simple skirt and blouse combo. Essentially an out of school variation of our uniform. I can’t help but feel a little disappointed, I wanted to see her dressed up.

Almost as if she could read my mind, Naomi started in. “I know, how boring, right!” She began to twirl, holding her arms up so the sleeves could hang as well. “Here I am, all dolled up, and she’s dressed like it’s some normal day.” Ooe’s multicolor eyes narrowed as she scowled in her direction.

“You know why I refuse to wear one. It’s not worth the effort.” Her stare seemed to reach Naomi’s core, and honestly made me shiver. Naomi put her hands up and laughed awkwardly.

“You’re right, sorry…” Naomi said, her face looking towards the ground.

“Nakai didn’t dress up either.” Ooe said.

“In my defense, she woke me up about ten minutes ago. I had to throw on the nearest vest.” Ooe sighed and adjusted her glasses.

“Let's get the guides set up before it starts.” Ooe said as she turned towards the school.

Our walk to the newspaper room was quiet. Naomi still seemed to be affected by the penance stare from Ooe, and I’m still not awake yet. I kept bringing my hands up to my eyes, trying to rub the tiredness out of them.

Walking through the school felt odd. Only a few students were scrambling around, trying to finish up some last minute tasks. Other than that, it was empty. Deprived of the usual noise of conversation filled hallways and exhausted teachers making their way through the crowds. Our footsteps echoed through the space as we walked.

When we arrived at the clubroom, we were greeted by the stacks of pamphlets towering on the main table. Looking at them all at once, I’m a little more impressed by the work we accomplished in one day. I suppose even if it was a small part I still contributed to this festival.

“We will set up most of the pamphlets at a table by the main entrance. The remaining third we’ll have to set up towards the back. A few people sneak in that way every year.” Ooe said as she began to stack them in cardboard. Taking the initiative, I moved forward to help, as did Naomi. When they were separated, Ooe pushed the smaller box towards me.

“Hisao, me and Natsume will carry the heavy one to the front! Can you handle that by yourself?” Naomi asked with a smile on her face. I looked at it. Only a few dozen pamphlets in a light box.

“Yeah, should be able to do it pretty easily.”

“When you are finished, meet us at the food stalls. I think we should start our reviews with breakfast.” A light smile crossed her face, as she picked up the box with Naomi. I did the same, the box being as light as I imagined. Both groups headed out of the school, and once in the open air I went towards the back as they went forward.

The sun had already started to cut through the morning haze, and as I walked sweat was starting to slowly form. Even though the box wasn’t heavy, by the time I reached the table it was starting to strain in my arms. It was a farther distance than I realized. Setting the box down, I took my time to separate everything into piles. A few pamphlets splayed open, one or two made to look like they’ve been grabbed from a stack, and the rest front and center. Easy enough.

It was early enough that no one had started to come in yet. A quick glance at my watch showed 8:33. The event didn’t open until 9:30. As I stretched my arms, I looked around. Most of the stalls were set up completely, but there were a few groups that were running around rapidly to get things finished.

As I walked towards the front to meet the girls, I noticed Shizune and Misha talking to a group. Oddly enough, for once I didn’t hear Misha first. But as I neared the stall, I realized it was because everyone was signing with each other. Shizune quite angrily, a student from 1-1 looking like she might cry, and another that was desperately trying to get Shizune to leave them alone. Even for Misha, this was hard to follow. Her head turned back and forth until eventually she sighed and started looking around. Her eyes found mine and she gave a great big smile, then tapped on Shizune’s shoulder and pointed. She simply nodded and turned back away, while Misha waived. I waved back and kept walking, wondering why my presence warranted Shizune’s attention.

I found Naomi and Ooe a minute later. Naomi was standing quite elegantly as I walked up, but when she heard me she turned around quickly and dispelled any notion of the previous form.

“Hisao! Finally, I’m so hungry, but Ooe says we can’t get food unless all three of us are there so we can try ‘everything’. Let’s go! I saw an onigiri place that was mostly finished over here.” *Naomi grabbed my arm and quickly began pulling me along. Ooe followed, stepping a little behind us as we neared the stall.

A small girl, with dyed red highlights in her black hair and a short bob was running the stall. I wondered if she was a first year, but a sign on the stall said 3-3’s Onigiri Explosion. My class, but the girl running it didn’t look familiar. Have I really been that poor at meeting other classmates? The stall also included a row of onigiri on top, displaying the different options.

“Oh! Newspaper club, right?” The girl asked.

“Yup! I remember you, you’re Mio, right? We did an interview about youth fashion.” Naomi responded.

“Yup! That’s me!” She bowed forward, lifting the sides of her black skirt as she did. With her movement, I noticed the previously hidden prosthetic. Although, unlike Emi, it was her right leg and went beyond the knee. “Only one at this school with any sense. No one puts any effort. Except for you, Naomi. You look wonderful today.”

Naomi smiled and did a little twirl with her hands angled, lifting the sleeves away from her body. “You really think so? I had to wake up even earlier to get it done right!”

“Hi Mio. Sorry to interrupt, but this is the 3-3 stall, correct? Why are you running it?” Ooe asked.

“Oh! Well, my class had plenty of volunteers, and to be honest I didn’t want to be around fried food all day. And! 3-3 was practically begging for volunteers. That big guy in glasses, Taro? He knocked on our door all sweaty, asking if we could fill the morning slot. To make the onigiri for today, they had to wake up early to make them fresh. I’m just helping until they start to wake up from their naps.”

I felt a twinge in my gut at her explanation. I wasn’t expected to help of course, but choosing to help the newspaper club instead of the class project probably wasn’t the best course of action. Even Ooe and Naomi seemed to acknowledge this fact, as a slight shade of red appeared on their faces.

“That is very kind of you, Mio. Could we get one tuna mayo, one salmon, and one pickled plum? We want a variety to rank the stalls later. We will have three rankings! One, all food based stalls. Two, all entertainment, whether a haunted room or a cafe. And finally, we will release the money rankings to see who profited the most.” Ooe said.

“All to be released in our final festival special addition, tomorrow morning! Make sure to tell your friends!” Naomi added in. Mio nodded.

“On it!” She reached below the counter to grab the three we requested. Upon closer examination, the oinigiri on top were display only. Makes sense given the heat.

A moment later she reemerged with the three of them, then handed them to Ooe. With a wink she added “Make sure you give 3-3 and 3-4 high scores!”

“If they are worth it.” Ooe said, but then Naomi cut in front of her.

“It’s tough competition, Mio! The first years were talking about bribes to buy our praise. You’ll have to up your corruption game!” The two girls shared a laugh as we walked away to start our meal. “I like her, if only she joined our club instead of the board game club.”

Ooe handed an onigiri to each of us. “Give it a baseline score now, and I will keep track of everything in this notebook.” She pulled a small pad and pencil from her pocket, opening it to the first page. “At the end we will compare.”

I took off the plastic wrap then bit into mine. Salmon. Not the worst flavor in the world, but of the three it was the most boring. But it wasn’t dry as they tended to be, and the seaweed offered a good texture as my teeth tore through the rice.

“I’d say pretty good. Eight?” I give my ranking first.

“Eight.” “Seven.” Naomi said, followed by Ooe. Ooe recorded the scores then put the notebook away.

“There are six classes that have food in one shape or another. I would like to visit one every hour so that we space it out, otherwise we will become full much too quickly.” Said Ooe. Naomi nodded in agreement.

“Sounds good to me! As long as we get to visit the fun classes in between!” She responded. I simply nodded. There was no reason for me to contest her plan, I was just a guest.

“Naomi, earlier in the morning I think we should go towards the game stalls, don’t you think?” Naomi’s eyes lit up with a twinkle.

“Yes! I think 2-3 is the closest. Let’s go to that one!” She immediately began to turn and run off. I shoved the rest of my onigiri into my mouth and followed after her, with Ooe keeping up.

“That girl.” She said with an exasperated sigh, though a small smile appeared on her lips.

We finally caught up to her at a booth run by two girls I hadn’t met before. One was quite short with brown eyes, dark, neck length hair, and a flatter chest. The other was a taller girl, tanned, and with blonde back length hair. As I neared, I could hear bickering between the two.

“Three tries per 100 yen is the standard!” The shorter one yelled.

“Two tries per 100 yen is more money in the long run, do you want our class to get first in money or not? Besides, a lot of the parents coming today have money to burn.” Said the taller one, her face looking down at the angry girl, a smile playing on her face. Naomi, for her part, was seemingly standing a bit to the side, taking notes as she watched. Ooe came up behind her, closing her notebook abruptly.

“We are here to try the booths, not get next week’s scoop.” Naomi responded with pulled back eyes and held the notebook to her chest.

“But think about the headlines! Class 2-3 bullies poor girl into scamming the festival goers.” The taller one turns towards Naomi, now hearing her voice.

“We are not scamming! Just changing for our audience. Newspaper club gets to try until you win one.” She winked, and I looked at the stall they had set up. It was a classic version of Yo-Yo Balloon. A large container of water filled with firm water balloons. Each water balloon had a rubber band that formed a small loop at the end of it. To play the game, you were given a very thin paper string with a hook at the end. Fish out the balloon and you could keep it, simple enough. But it was still difficult. The paper would get wet and constantly break when you pulled it up. Two tries per 100 yen is a little ridiculous.

“Two tries only for 100 yen? That is a little much, don’t you think? Not everyone wins, and it's very cheap for you to make those balloons and hooks” Ooe says as she looks over the stall, her eyes scanning them. The short one nods.

“See! Even she agrees.”

“Tch.” The taller one doesn’t seem happy about the backup against her idea, but Naomi cuts in.

“It makes sense, don’t you think? I mean, a lot of the donors who come to the festival earn quite a bit. A little upcharge never hurts anyone.” This prompts the tall one to cross her arms under her chest, gloating.

“Exactly! More money from those that can afford it. We should go for it.” But then both pairs of girls look at me, their motives spoken clearly without words. Picking a side sounds like too much trouble, so I racked my brain until I came up with a solution.

“What if the three of us play the game? If we get it in three, then you should move it to two tries per payment. Since it's too easy. But if we can’t, then I think it's fair.” The two girls behind the booth seemed to take their time thinking it over. But then they both nod in unison.

“Fair enough” “Okay!” They spoke at the same time. So then the three of us ended up squatting next to the big pool. Naomi’s eyes glistened with bright fire, and Ooe had a calmer but extremely focused look . Naomi went first and plunged her hook into the water. She pulled up triumphantly, but it broke when she went too fast. Ooe giggled.

“Naomi. You have to take your time with it. Watch.” Her hook dangled a bit on the surface, then went just below when she neared the rubber loop. But she took too long. When she slowly pulled the hook up, the paper was soggy and snapped. Naomi responded eagerly.

“Oh? I watched very closely. Looks like you broke it.” She laughed as Ooe’s giggle turned to a frown. It was my turn, and all the girls were once again looking at me. Trying my best to learn from their mistakes, I kept my hook out of the water until the last possible moment. I saw the loop float to the top perfectly and dipped my hook. It was in the water for just a moment before I pulled straight back up. My pressure was consistent, not an abrupt pull, and I held my breath as the balloon was pulled. Then, I had it. Fully out of the water, unbroken.

My chest felt a surge of happiness as I smiled and laughed. I looked up at the two girls, Naomi was cheering loudly and Ooe had the faintest smile on her lips. My own face had a smile, perhaps the first one in a while. The tall one cheered while the smaller one behind the booth pouted a bit.

“2 tries per 100 it is.” She huffed. Right, the bet. I looked towards Ooe and Naomi again, and I saw Ooe glance. Her eyes were patient but they flickered back to the balloon as I held it in my hands. For a few seconds I thought it over, then held it out to her.

“Here. Since you lost your argument, you know. I figured you could have this as a way to make up for it. I don’t want to carry it around all day.” I said with indifference. But even as Ooe fought to control herself, I saw the way her eyes lit up with glee as she reached out for it. Before she spoke, she cleared her throat.

“Well, thank you, Nakai. I appreciate it.” Her hand reached out slowly and she took it with a small smile. But the minute she had it, her wrist gently began to flex up and down to bounce it.

“Eight, because the game was fun but I didn’t win.” Naomi said with a laugh.

“Eight from me as well. You guys really shouldn’t be arguing all day if you want customers.” I said.

“Ten” Ooe said, pausing the bouncing just long enough to record our scores in the notebook. Afterwards, we said goodbye to the two behind the stall and made our way around the rest of the festival. It officially opened which caused our speed to slow down dramatically as the lines for some stalls were becoming very long. In particular, 1-1 had an ice cream stall that we waited in for ten minutes, but it was simply store bought ice cream that earned a measly 5/10 from us. Naomi suggested they could have done shaved ice instead, and I agreed. Effort means a lot in a festival like that, though I suppose I shouldn’t judge others effort.

In the early afternoon after we visited most of classes, we ended up in the place I least expected. Members of 3-1 walked around us as we sat at a small table with frilly decorations covering the sides. A small vase of red plastic flowers sat in the middle, and girls in classic maid costumes moved around us. It was an interesting sight. The maid costumes were old fashioned, covering everything and making them look like the real deal. But a few girls wore hearring aids and some had advance looking cochlear implants attached to their heads. It was a unique contrast between the historical look and the modern tools. I could hear distant yelling from the classroom next door, probably from the ones preparing the orders.

For once, Naomi was quiet, her face a bit red as she slowly sipped at her tea. On the other hand, Ooe was observant. Her eyes watched every detail, notes being recorded at frightening speed.

“Their uniforms are nice, but you can tell from the way the fabric bunches they haven’t been tailored. I wouldn’t expect a school festival to do that much, but it must count against them nonetheless. They seated us well enough, but the way they deliver the food will be a true test. Not the food quality itself, mind you. That is never important. Only the delivery.” Her voice was consistent, professional. It scared me a little.

“Ooe? Do you possibly do this type of thing often?” Her eyes flashed to me for a second before going back to observe the way the maids moved around the room.

“Often enough. Part of why I was asked to join the newspaper club was my previous blog work. I wrote about a new cafe once a month for a couple of years. As I learn more, my criteria grow stricter. Though, I give leeway to amateur events like this. Part of me is impressed with the way their uniforms blend into their aids. Most maids remove anything not strictly related to the costume, even piercings. So, this is a unique change.”

“I still feel uncomfortable. Don’t you think it’s weird how cute they try to act? And the whole welcome home master part gives me the shivers.” Naomi responds, looking at me with pleading eyes.

“I have never actually been to one. It’s alright, so far. Uniforms look cute.” I remember when Shin wanted to go, and I had agreed at the time. But Mai threatened to beat us if we went, calling us perverts. So, our trip to Akihabara was cut short. Ooe’s eyes flashed with respect as she nodded.

“They are cute uniforms today. I will give them that. Whoever designed the costumes did their job well.” Ooe said, just as our orders started to come through. Naomi had ordered a parfait, Ooe a piece of spongecake, and I chose the omelette rice. They placed the spongecake in front of her, and to Naomi’s horror they did a magical spell to increase the flavor. It was quite amusing to see the different reactions. Naomi, normally the excited one, held shocked eyes and could only stare. Ooe had a weird smile on her face as she watched the spell.

When my omelette was placed in front of me though, my breath caught momentarily in surprise. Drawn on top was a heart with ketchup. While normal, it was a reminder of my problems when I had gone most of the day so far without thinking about it. Naomi noticed my annoyance and looked towards me with a small bit of worry.

“Did they get it wrong, Hisao?” She asked. I shook my head, steeling my face.

“No no, just didn’t expect the heart is all. But it looks better than I expected.” I dug into it with my spoon and took a bite. The flavor wasn’t anything special, but for a school project better than nothing. Ooe started to eat her cake with a focused intensity while Naomi dug into her parfait with relish. We stayed quiet as we ate except for the noises of pleasure coming from Naomi every so often. At the end Ooe continued her rapid scribbling of notes.

“Ten,” I said. The omelette wasn’t terrible and they nailed the aesthetic, so they earned a high score from me.

“Six” Naomi said. “I still don’t like it, but the parfait was amazing!” Ooe seemed to be in deep thought as her eyes stared at the notepad. With a flurry, she wrote her score and spoke.

“Nine. They did well for an amateur event, though their service at times left something to be desired.” With the scores finished, we stood and left together. This was the last one on the list, so Ooe started to lead us to the newspaper room.

“Hisao, if you could help us with the rankings. We don’t have to write a lot, we usually just give a short blurb about each stall and then publish it in the morning. But me and Naomi always disagree on placings, so we would appreciate it if you could vote in ties.” I nodded.

“Happy to help, I was able to enjoy the festival all day thanks to you guys.” And so we set to work. Ooe was typing like a machine, and gave every stall a short description. Within two hours we had a list compiled for the two categories, though the majority of that time was Naomi and Ooe arguing where to place everything.

There was a good amount of stalls for each category, and it came down to the wire for the final rankings but we finally had the lists.

Food:
2-2 Karaage
3-3 Onigiri
3-2 Noodles
3-4 Takoyaki
1-1 Icecream
Entertainment:
Maid Cafe
1-4 Pet Cafe
2-1 Concert
2-3 Game Stall
1-3 Play
2-4 Haunted Room
1-2 Game Stall

The maid cafe ranking took the longest. Ooe was adamant it deserved the number one spot, but Naomi refused to allow something so weird to be that high. In the end I broke it up by saying I liked it that high too, and told Naomi we can put the pet cafe second instead of third as a compromise. Which we agreed at first was too high, seeing as it was just the student’s own pets running around a classroom, but she loved it since a dog licked her face. It also had the unintended effect of knocking down the concert which was extremely well done. Another student from 3-3 was involved in that though, which explained why our class was scrambling for volunteers from elsewhere even more.

Naomi stretched across the table while Ooe was at the computer writing up the section for the earnings section. We had reports throughout the day, so we knew who would end up where, but we had to wait for the final numbers before printing.

“Naomi, you know we will have to come after the fireworks to get this printed, right?” Naomi groaned from the table.

“I knoooow.” Her voice dragged. “But it’s worth it for all the yummy food I got to eat today.”

“There’s fireworks too?” My old school held festivals occasionally, but we never warranted fireworks at the end of them. Part of my voice held a level of excitement. Naomi smiled.

“Yup! Natsume and I found this spot in the woods last year. It’s close to the fireworks, so you have to look nearly straight up. It’s great.”

“We should actually get going now. It takes a few minutes to get out there.” Ooe said. Naomi jumped off of the table.

“Let’s go!” She said as I followed them outside, a small smile on my face. Watching fireworks with them sounded nice, like something friends would do. I guess, at this point we are? I’ve been spending a lot of time around them, but it’s been just as a helper. I wonder what they think. Naomi seems overly friendly to everyone, so maybe Ooe is the bigger test.

As we walked across the school grounds, we neared the forest path. Tall thin trees that created the forest. There was plenty of room around them which allowed moonlight to fly through the green leaves that hummed softly in the wind. I could see deep within the trees the local shrine. Naomi stopped at the edge. She whispered something to Ooe, then took off in the opposite direction.

“Hm? Where is she going?” I asked Ooe. She continued onto the path, barely turning to me.

“She will join us when she can. Has something last minute she forgot about. Don’t worry, she is fast.” It was quiet now with the two of us. As we walked further into the forest, the distant crowd was steadily forgotten and only the sound of cicadas could be heard in the quiet night. It was the first time outside of the morning swim that me and her were alone. Quiet was expected.

“Ooe. Thank you for inviting me today. I enjoyed it, even if I had to help carry pamphlets around.” Her ear twitched when she heard me speak.

“No worries, Nakai. We appreciate your help.” Short and to the point. I kicked at a random pebble as we walked. Her mouth opened before closing again. She squeezed the water balloon in her hands. I hadn’t noticed she still had it. After a few seconds she spoke. “Naomi - well - we were wondering if you would like to join the newspaper club officially?” Her face kept straight ahead while she spoke, but I still noticed the tips of her ears glowing red.

“Really?” I said surprised. “I don’t have much experience writing articles, or reporting. I just like to read, really.”

“That’s no problem. You can help edit and with printing days. That would be more than enough.” I took a minute to think it over. I have enjoyed the time spent with them this week, and I guess the work isn’t that hard. It’s not like the school has a literature club, so I don’t have many other options. Sports are out of the question and I can’t paint to save my life. Could be worse than hanging out with two cute girls after school.

“Sure, I can do that.” She nodded her head a little stiffer than usual.

“Good. Good.” We stopped as we entered the clearing behind the shrine, a nice open spot in the trees in the direction of the school grounds was visible. I turned around as I heard the clop of wooden sandals quickly approaching.

“Oh good! I didn’t miss them. The line for the bathroom was so long, I had to run here.” Naomi was bent over, her breathing ragged as sweat dripped from her forehead. Ooe turned to say something, but then a loud boom interrupted us. I looked up at the sky which was starting to light up with an explosion of colors. Blue, red, green, purple, fireworks of all different colors darted the sky with the occasional golden shower mixed in. We all became mesmerized by the sight. This spot was close enough that I could hear the explosions as they came, feeling the shockwave just moments before.

Each explosion lit up the three of us, and I looked down just enough to notice Natsume’s eyes. They seemed to shine brighter than the bursts of color did. The details on her face were fully magnified in the contrast of darkness and explosions. It was the first time I ever truly looked and studied her face. The way her glasses framed her face, the gentle curve of her cheeks. I was going to be spending a lot of time with her in the coming weeks, between the morning swims and the club meetings. The bass from a particularly large firework reverberated in my chest, and I felt a smile tug at my lips as I turned back to the fireworks. For the first time in months, I looked forward to tomorrow.

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Always a joy to see new Nasume and Naomi content. I don't think I've read a single version of these two that I didn't love.

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