What would you have done if you made the game?

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SpecimenSix wrote:If I'm being honest, going by the descriptions I'd probably go with the deaf girl, because she's the one where it pointed out she's got big boobs. :lol: Seeing as how I've never written anything romantic before and really wouldn't have a clue where to begin, I'd probably choose instead to focus on drama or tragedy. It would probably be very far from romance and would probably read more like a Noir, with the deaf beauty acting as a femme fatale of sorts.
Actually, I could see the Shizune we ended up with as a femme fatale. Certainly more so than any of the other girls.
Anyway, If I were to attempt such a thing... Hmm...
My version of Alt-Rin probably would have been a very quiet girl. Not shy, just quiet and introverted. (Basically going off the description of her as "The most difficult one to get.") I probably would have done a scene similar to the one in the atelier where Hisao feeds her oranges, but it would have been more of a proper meal. (And I probably would have gotten rid of the thalidomide thing, since otherwise this game would have to be set in the late 70's.)
I might actually still have made Alt-Lilly and Alt-Hanako friends, because of the whole "girl who's self-conscious about her looks and girl who can't see said looks" thing. And if I was going to make one of the girls a cloudcuckoolander, it probably would have been Alt-Lilly. She just looks a little spacey in that image. To me, at least.
As for Alt-Emi, the accident probably wouldn't have been a fatal one. I might even say that she'd been hit by a car while walking, rather than while riding in another car. I also might have made her and Shizune friends, since they both come across as go-getters in the original descriptions.
I probably would have allowed the player to attempt "gigolo play," but like the description says, it would end badly.
Assuming I gave the protagonist a medical condition, it might or might not have been a heart condition. I might have gone with hemophilia, severe asthma, or something else that, like a heart condition, is potentially life-threatening but relatively invisible.
Side note: I would probably have a character with cystic fibrosis, as a nod to a friend of mine with that condition.
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Munchenhausen wrote:
Aura wrote:Hey, even I wrote a footjob scene because it was expected of me to write one. I just never wanted to put it in the actual story.
as much as I find feet strangely un-boner-tastic, I'd read it for shits and giggles.
Do you have it saved somewhere, or was it scrapped?
It's probably somewhere, but I'm not going to show it.
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Aura wrote:
Munchenhausen wrote:
Aura wrote:Hey, even I wrote a footjob scene because it was expected of me to write one. I just never wanted to put it in the actual story.
as much as I find feet strangely un-boner-tastic, I'd read it for shits and giggles.
Do you have it saved somewhere, or was it scrapped?
It's probably somewhere, but I'm not going to show it.
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Yet you do post fic of Hisao fellating Mutou, and fic of Hisao putting a roofie in Hanako's tea and licking every inch of her naked body.

Now I'm kinda scared by the idea of the footjob fic, if even you won't post it.
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bhtooefr wrote:Yet you do fic of Hisao putting a roofie in Hanako's tea and licking every inch of her naked body.
...Now I kinda wanna read this. Link?
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Numb wrote:...Now I kinda wanna read this. Link?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 670#p41670

A kinda weird Rin fic, a kinda weird Emi fic, Shizune BDSM, that fucked up Hanako thing, and a one-liner that goes well beyond BDSM with Lilly.
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bhtooefr wrote:
Numb wrote:...Now I kinda wanna read this. Link?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 670#p41670

A kinda weird Rin fic, a kinda weird Emi fic, Shizune BDSM, that fucked up Hanako thing, and a one-liner that goes well beyond BDSM with Lilly.
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Aura wrote:
Munchenhausen wrote:
Aura wrote:Hey, even I wrote a footjob scene because it was expected of me to write one. I just never wanted to put it in the actual story.
as much as I find feet strangely un-boner-tastic, I'd read it for shits and giggles.
Do you have it saved somewhere, or was it scrapped?
It's probably somewhere, but I'm not going to show it.
Hey, I remember that scene. Good times...
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Yeah, and the Emi blowjob too... :mrgreen:
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Waaaaaaaaait a minute...

Since most people describe KS as 'plot with porn...'


Was it originally a 'porn with plot' ala Games of Thrones...?
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Silentcook wrote:Yeah, and the Emi blowjob too... :mrgreen:
WHAAAAAAAAAAAT?!?!? .fdsdnjfjsadhbvxjdlscxvhbjjasdfhcjx bhsnxcvfhsaadscxjn k EXCUSE ME?! :shock:
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Silentcook wrote:Yeah, and the Emi blowjob too... :mrgreen:
you tantalize us with tidbits of win that shall never be :'(
Like stupid, silly doodles with no point? You've come to the right place, friend :^)
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Okay, rerailing this, right here, right now. I can't take the teasing anymore.

I'd have made Rin an interpretive dancer, most likely. You don't need arms to dance, and that stuff can be tough to understand sometimes. So she'd be an artist, just a different kind.
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Munchenhausen wrote:
Silentcook wrote:Yeah, and the Emi blowjob too... :mrgreen:
you tantalize us with tidbits of win that shall never be :'(
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