Considering we have several authors working together on their respective stories and collaborating their scripts into producing a consistent collage I am quite sure the keyword variety is guaranteed here. Realistic portrayal does not necessarily mean repetition - a shift of focus does wonders. Who knows, maybe we will experience some erotic scenes from the perspective of our cherished girls?Envy wrote: Yes but the point is you want to read it five times? Because if Hisao is like, 'Oh God, how did this get here? I am not good with condom,' in one virginity losing sex scene there's little reason to believe he won't do the same thing in the rest of them with the other girls.
So yeah, include some embarrassing mistakes that happen during any first time sexual encounter just as long as it's not erectile dysfunction, erectile dysfunction, erectile dysfunction. You know, just mix things up a little bit, make sure you're not all writing the same sex scene and create some variety. That said I would like to see erectile dysfunction come into play at least once as long as it needs to that sorely neglected thing called foreplay and perhaps some mutual masturbation.
I can agree with your second idea - nothing strikes me as weird as the fact that after a blowjob the man is always unaffected in terms of sensory overload in his penis - like some fictional works try to tell us. So, more foreplay (involving the deconstruction of any fear and doubt the two participating parties might have or just showing the mutual affection) would be really appreciated.
