Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

[AnathRaema]

It's definitely a Britishism and therefore it's all Shakespeare's fault

Yes, just blame Shakespeare. Always blame Shakespeare. Even if it's not Shakespeare's fault, BLAME HIM ANYWAY! It's more fun that way.

[Kyler Thatch]

The class passes rather uneventfully, with Mutou writing up some simple questions which I finish quickly. Leaving me to stare out the window blankly, my eyelids growing heavier.

Overuse of words that end in -ly, I think. (Also, that second sentence sounds awkwardly phrased.)

Unexplained lack of Miki was kind of unexpected, but it's no big deal.

[Mirage_GSM]

I'm not quite sure why the lack of Miki should be explained^^°
The story is also lacking in Ritsu, Naomi, Ikuno and most others of class 3-3. Why should they all be present for lunch?

[Kyler Thatch]

Quite possibly an inaccurate extrapolation on my part, after he mentioned Taro working at the Beijing. My mistake.

[Feurox]

Unexplained lack of Miki was kind of unexpected, but it's no big deal.

Think Mirage answered that for me so thanks Pahah Though I can see the confusion, Miki x Suzu is pretty much accepted now XD

[Maradar]

I'm excited to see where this goes! It's pretty interesting so far, but Suzu seems a little OOC from her pseudo-route.

[Mirage_GSM]

And that is a good thing!
First of all, her character in Scissorlips's story is not canon, so if any author wants to write a Suzu story how they picture her theat's perfectly fine.
Secondly, let's be honest, Suzu's character in that route had problems, both with the way her narcolepsy was depicted and in that she was excessively mopey and depressed. I'm glad that Feurox is not simply copying that Suzu.