Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Nicely done, sex in fiction is okay as long as you are mature about it, this works.
Congratulations on 1000 posts! (YaY!)
Reading this made me picture it something like this:
Congratulations on 1000 posts! (YaY!)
Reading this made me picture it something like this:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1} (erotic content ahea
Well Umber kind of got co-opted when I asked if she felt like proofreading/editing the fic.YZQ wrote:Yeap. Sex toys and whatever you and Stein have in mind.Umber wrote:By tools, you mean sexual objects?YZQ wrote:Well, I see that they have not utilised tools yet. That will be fixed, hopefully.
What would a slashfic do without them? Ha, ha.
You got co-opted in after Stein felt that all the credit was going to him. I'm no critic of sex scenes, so I'm ok any way.
And Sex toys? *whistles nonchalantly holding up a sign saying "Not this scene, but later on"*
I'm mature when it comes to writing sex scenes, if it's supposed to be done so. If that makes sense.ArcCain wrote:Nicely done, sex in fiction is okay as long as you are mature about it, this works.
Congratulations on 1000 posts! (YaY!)
Reading this made me picture it something like this:
Also that pic?
Just, damn.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
I also draw, kind of.
KeiichiO wrote:You shall now, and forever be known as, "Steinherz, The Great".
Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Don't forget the groin kick...
"Nothing is beneath man. Everything is permitted."
"...since love and fear can hardly exist together, if we must choose between them, it is far safer to be feared than loved. However, it is important above all to avoid being hated."
"...since love and fear can hardly exist together, if we must choose between them, it is far safer to be feared than loved. However, it is important above all to avoid being hated."
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1} (erotic content ahea
Ha! Just noticed those two are sharing pocky.Steinherz wrote:I'm mature when it comes to writing sex scenes, if it's supposed to be done so. If that makes sense.
Also that pic?
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Just, damn.
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Would any one know if this comes from a series?
A good writer knows his limits. A great writer finds ways around them.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Well I guess I should inform the readers of this:
This fic is currently on a (minimum) 2-week hiatus/break/whateverthefuckyouwannacallit. As the proof-reader/editor (our glorious friend Umber) is on vacation. and as Umber is currently editing the second half of scene 5, yeah.
Just letting you all know.
This fic is currently on a (minimum) 2-week hiatus/break/whateverthefuckyouwannacallit. As the proof-reader/editor (our glorious friend Umber) is on vacation. and as Umber is currently editing the second half of scene 5, yeah.
Just letting you all know.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
I also draw, kind of.
KeiichiO wrote:You shall now, and forever be known as, "Steinherz, The Great".
Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Finally made the time to read the latest chapter;
Goddamn, it had me flustered and blushing the entire read. Very nice. Seriously. Lost for words right now. Perfection? Yeah. Sounds about right.
GAH, It was beautiful!!
You've done it again, Steinherz The Great and Umber The Magnificent. You've created a masterpiece. I absolutely adore your writing style. Please, keep it up. I'll be patiently awaiting the next part of the story. Oh, and enjoy your trip Umber! (I can't say that enough. )
Goddamn, it had me flustered and blushing the entire read. Very nice. Seriously. Lost for words right now. Perfection? Yeah. Sounds about right.
GAH, It was beautiful!!
You've done it again, Steinherz The Great and Umber The Magnificent. You've created a masterpiece. I absolutely adore your writing style. Please, keep it up. I'll be patiently awaiting the next part of the story. Oh, and enjoy your trip Umber! (I can't say that enough. )
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Will we see more of this soon?
The strength of heart to face oneself has been made manifest. The persona Carighan has appeared.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Yes.Carighan wrote:Will we see more of this soon?
Unfortunately, life (education, family, my own fanfiction) has been getting in the way of the next section of Exceeder. It didn't help that I was forced to depart for two weeks without internet a while ago.
While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from nowUmber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
I also draw, kind of.
KeiichiO wrote:You shall now, and forever be known as, "Steinherz, The Great".
Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Steinherz wrote:Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from nowUmber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
I kid, I kid.Umber wrote:http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lp6k1 ... o1_500.gifSteinherz wrote:Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from nowUmber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
I also draw, kind of.
KeiichiO wrote:You shall now, and forever be known as, "Steinherz, The Great".
Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Bonus points for a frustrated Kuroko!
And yay, new episode soon. No worries, I understand life gets in the way. I just figured I'll ask in case it got cancelled or something.
And yay, new episode soon. No worries, I understand life gets in the way. I just figured I'll ask in case it got cancelled or something.
The strength of heart to face oneself has been made manifest. The persona Carighan has appeared.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
I have the worst case of procrastination. XDCarighan wrote:Bonus points for a frustrated Kuroko!
And yay, new episode soon. No worries, I understand life gets in the way. I just figured I'll ask in case it got cancelled or something.
None of my fics will ever be considered "cancelled" unless I specifically say so
Because sometimes I'll pump out several scenes/chapters and then hit a writers block that lasts several weeks to a few months.
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
I also draw, kind of.
KeiichiO wrote:You shall now, and forever be known as, "Steinherz, The Great".
Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.
Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}
Take your time.
"Nothing is beneath man. Everything is permitted."
"...since love and fear can hardly exist together, if we must choose between them, it is far safer to be feared than loved. However, it is important above all to avoid being hated."
"...since love and fear can hardly exist together, if we must choose between them, it is far safer to be feared than loved. However, it is important above all to avoid being hated."