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[Doomish]

Euuuuuugh it is with a heavy heart that I say I am removing choices from the route. I was going to keep them but it's just too much effort compared to how expansive it'd end up being. As is, I think I'm going to oust choices altogether and just tell it like a story. Maybe someday when all is said and done I'll go back and write some choice-y things but for now we get to just sit back and watch things unfold.

(Also, I corrected that little quip about misha seeing hisao in class, don't tell anyone~)

[Scissorlips]

That's a shame to hear, but it all really boils down to what you think works best for your story. So I take it this means you only plan on having one ending path?

[badmanslayer04]

I would just like to say Doomish out of all the great profile pictures I have seen yours is by far my favourite

[Blaze117]

I've read the rewrite and current versions and I am very excited for reading more of this.

[CaptainFalcon]

Absolutely loving the rewrite Doomish, so happy that everything is back on track with the Misha route. Kudos to you!

[Ciclo]

Really liking the re-write, can't wait for it to be finished!

[Po1ntBlank]

Please keep this going!

[Doomish]

Forget it.

[Po1ntBlank]

I don't think I'll ver fully understand Kenji,

I've never really attempted to proofread, but why not. Noticed a little typo there

She gives me a wink. "Shicchan says I'd be more aero-dy-namic if my hair were in a ponytail, so now it is~!" She pronounces 'aerodynamic' like the word has never left her lips before. I wonder if she knows what it means.

This is what I LOVE about your writing. The little nitty-gritty things that you do that really make you feel like this text is directly pulled from the game. It's as if you read and reread every single line about Misha in the game there is, and incorporated it into your story. I applaud you!

I'm not that far through the chapter yet, so I'll edit this if I find anything interesting

3:01 PM - Doomish: Misha skips along beside me, humming a cheery tune to herself. At least she's staying optimistic about the weather. She doesn't look like she even cares that she gets the occasional odd glance, but I guess with the pink hair she's used to it by now.

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

[Helbereth]

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)

[Po1ntBlank]

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)

I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.

[YOTC]

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)

I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.

I'd assume IRC.

[BlackWaltzTheThird]

Maybe Kenji was right

OH SHI-

3:01 PM - Doomish: Misha skips along beside me, humming a cheery tune to herself. At least she's staying optimistic about the weather. She doesn't look like she even cares that she gets the occasional odd glance, but I guess with the pink hair she's used to it by now.

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

I was wondering that as well.

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!

Wait... is that a Wizard of Oz reference? Are you trying to tell me that Doomish is not a wizard after all? He can't actually send me home to Kansas? My entire life has been a lie. ;_;

[YourFavAnon]

Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?

That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)

I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.

He wrote the story live in the steam group some of us chill in, as he almost always does.

[Hoitash]

He wrote the story live in the steam group some of us chill in, as he almost always does.

The internet continues to amaze me (makes notes for ebook marketing campaign.)

Nice work as usual, by the way. Your Misha is adorable