exstended story beta op 1.0

[carlos21]

this is the beta op 4 katawa shoujo past effect extended story resion i call it extended story is cuz i just got the stuff i need to tell everyone about my life being disabiled and how i over come things so i hope you guys like it as it might change when im on honekos route cuz the ops not finished if ud like to help mesge me privetly ok

[Xanatos]

...What.

[yummines]

derivative works are not allowed under the license Katawa Shoujo is under

especially ones that use official artwork from the game.

[ShinigamiKenji]

Just a few points:

- Put some grammar into your posts, please. And being dyslexic isn't an excuse, I've seen many dyslexic people write somewhat well, and we've always got some Word or similar to correct grammar.
- Yea, there's this license thing too. Best thing is to come up with original work, and I believe there are a few people in this forum that could help in the Fan Works section.

I liked the music, and your experience may put good realism into the story. Keep it up!

[Pyramid Head]

You know before you make extensions on the Katawa Shoujo storyline, i think there are a few things you should learn.
Like English. Learning English would be a good start.

[Brisingr]

...What.

That just made my night.

[crushinator]

I'm pretty sure this violates the creative commons licence that Katawa Shoujo has. Mainly because you've used sprites from the game and the logo of the game. I don't think calling it "Katawa Shoujo" in any way would help your case either.

[carlos21]

all it is is a lets play of the game

[dwarduk]

all it is is a lets play of the game

Then why is it called "exstended story beta" [sic]? I couldn't work that out from what you've written in your post; if you could manage a sentence structure, it would help!

[carlos21]

all it is is a lets play of the game

Then why is it called "exstended story beta" [sic]? I couldn't work that out from what you've written in your post; if you could manage a sentence structure, it would help!

wow ill only post this on facebook then.

[dwarduk]

all it is is a lets play of the game

Then why is it called "exstended story beta" [sic]? I couldn't work that out from what you've written in your post; if you could manage a sentence structure, it would help!

wow ill only post this on facebook then.

I was being serious. I just want to know why you're calling it an extended story if all it is is an LP. No offense intended in any way, shape or form.

[carlos21]

i know i just have a hard time with some sentence structure and i know my grammers not that good but i try to improve on it the best i can. Oh about the lp the idea come to me when i was watching other disabiled youtube users tell there story i was thinking why not tell my story while also doing an lp of katawa shoujo.

[dwarduk]

i know i just have a hard time with some sentence structure and i know my grammers not that good but i try to improve on it the best i can. Oh about the lp the idea come to me when i was watching other disabiled youtube users tell there story i was thinking why not tell my story while also doing an lp of katawa shoujo.

Ah, ok, I see. Makes sense now Thanks for repeating yourself so I could understand you, and good luck with your lp!

[carlos21]

thank you ur a vary kind paersion my still not used to talking on forumes im just naervuse well i hope everythings going well for you. By the way my name is carlos nice to meet you

[Xanatos]

In my experience, visual novels make for poor LPs unless you can be exceptionally entertaining or do voices.