Antiphony (Hanako)
Re: Antiphony (Hanako)
Hmmm, I think some people here don't like "OOC" characters, or alternative character interpretations. I think they're interesting because they allow interesting stories that would be harder to do with the pure canon characters. My Hanako's Honeymoon was also in a way an alternate character interpretation. All in all, I think authors are free to write whatever story they like, as long as the style and technique are fluent, and the inner consistency is convincing. I did like the 1.1 version of Mendacium better since it made more sense internally.
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Feeling like your heart is broken? Need to get it off your chest? Tell your story here.
Take a look at Eruta my jRPG under development. New web site since december 2012.
Play Ature, my free and open source indie Atari 2600 action adventure game.
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Re: Antiphony (Hanako)
I LOVE it when Mom and Dad fight.
But seriously, Bro... uh, -gurt, this is a good piece of fiction, and fairly believable. Both Hanako and and AND Hisao are pretty emotionally battered folks and this makes sense. Insecurities are a bitch, and often run both ways. Good job!
But seriously, Bro... uh, -gurt, this is a good piece of fiction, and fairly believable. Both Hanako and and AND Hisao are pretty emotionally battered folks and this makes sense. Insecurities are a bitch, and often run both ways. Good job!
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Re: Antiphony (Hanako)
Mendacium should be required reading for all Hanako fans, along with That Guy/Mehkanik(sp?) Hanako Epilogue (up to part 2 or 3)
You got to take the chocolatey fluff as well as the emotional sledgehammer
You got to take the chocolatey fluff as well as the emotional sledgehammer