Agoraphobia [Mutou]

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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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While I'm really enjoying the life you're giving Mutou, I can't help but feel that the plotline is getting somewhat unfocused. I want to believe there's a reason for these diversions, but I'm not sure about that anymore.
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Personally I feel like things are just getting started. :)
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BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Nealry 2 o'colck in teh mornign and I've had an epipahny. Yoh left the adventure giude on purpose. THen, when Mutou tried to return it, she told him to keep it .both with the hope he would read it, find out what was goign on, and hepl her ((Because when she tried to do somethign about it herself she coped a hit in the eye.). Brilliant, Doomsh. Absolutly brilliant. Amazign waht a bit of insonmia and alcohool will do for you're ability to think things.
Cheers, BlackWalzt.
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Doomish wrote:Act Two

Next chapter soon.



UM this is awkward
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advicefrog wrote: UM this is awkward
That was really worthy of a post and a bump. It's not like I say that after every chapter or anything. :|
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Thank me later
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advicefrog wrote:Thank me later
Assuming you're not banned.

He'll get to it when he gets to it. Until then find some other way to amuse yourself.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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advicefrog wrote:Thank me later
Had you made a post worth its salt, I'd actually have reason to thank you for something.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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Because it's not like Doomish has about half a dozen other works running at once.

Because it's not like Doomish is one of (if not the) most active writers.

Because it's not like Doomish may need to focus more on one project than the others.

Ridiculous. Doomish is the man/woman. Give 'em time.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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My god, this story. Take ALL of my money, and FUND THE CREATION OF IT. IT WILL BE GOOD. IT WILL BE BRILLIANT. IT. WILL. BE. FUCKING AWESOME.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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We don't censor words around here, and Doomish himself disagrees with you.
5:09 PM - Doomish: i just don't
5:09 PM - Doomish: like
5:10 PM - Doomish: Agoraphobia? Really? Of all of the stories you could have chosen to write that about, Ryan von Steiner
5:10 PM - Doomish: you chose Agoraphobia?
But he DID turn it into some crazy shit centered around a pedophile doing pedophile things instead of a nice story involving Mutou and his wife parallel to Hisao and Hana, and I'm sure he knows it, and possibly hates himself for it.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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Two-Face I still can't tell if you're intentionally the worst poster or if you just do it without trying. This story isn't about Hanako and Hisao anymore so... y'know, get over it.

Also, I'm still working on this for the most part. Progress on it is slow, especially due to unforseen circumstances and other stories feasting on my eternal soul and whatnot, but it'll resume soon enough probably maybe.

edit: whoops, I said Two-Face instead of Brogurt. Oh well.
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*sigh*

Trolls these days.

Again, this is awesome. Let me give you all my money.
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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Doomish wrote:Two-Face I still can't tell if you're intentionally the worst poster or if you just do it without trying. This story isn't about Hanako and Hisao anymore so... y'know, get over it.
For some reason, I get the impression that this isn't going to happen. It's nice to see that you guys get along so well, though. Okay, maybe I'm trying to fail at being ironic.

At any rate, I am looking forward to the next installment. Objectively speaking, all of my favorite projects have been on pause, so you're not the only one. Conspiracy?
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Re: Agoraphobia [Mutou] [Updated 4/12]

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Just as good reading through it the second time round, I'm liking the direction that you are taking this too looking forward to whenever the next instalment is.
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