I mean, to be honest, I don't think there should be more. You wrapped it up prefectly, I just wanted more and more of the characters frankly. I do heavily encourag you do something similar to this someday, as it was really great.Guest Poster wrote:Thanks.
And is the ending really that abrupt? All the running plotlines are pretty much wrapped up and the few teasers near the end were just teasers rather than aborted arcs.
Their canon first time wasn't exactly making love...poopooface wrote:What does Hanako mean when she says FIRST time making love at the very end of Chapter 9?
I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?bhtooefr wrote:Their canon first time wasn't exactly making love...poopooface wrote:What does Hanako mean when she says FIRST time making love at the very end of Chapter 9?
If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once.Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
yep, definitely consolation.They had sex that first time. They didn't make love. That was the point behind that remark.I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?
Ohhh. Should have been easy to understand.Guest Poster wrote:They had sex that first time. They didn't make love. That was the point behind that remark.I understand that in the canon, intentions were misguided, it wasn't out of mutual love, and all that, but a dick did go into a vagina, did it not?
im an idiot. Forgot the difference.
"Would" was used three times...poopooface wrote:If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once.Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
Sore wa himitsu desu.griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
Like it really made a difference if I included it'd and I'd. He already said if enough.Mirage_GSM wrote:"Would" was used three times...poopooface wrote:If was used twice, would is used once, probably used once.Guest Poster wrote:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
Sry for missing that.Look at the second comment on this page:If it's a consolation: IF I'd write something else, it'd probably be an expansion to this story that would pretty much pick up where things were left off here.
Well,that answers my questionI'm afraid not. Sorry.
