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by Razoredge
Fri Nov 20, 2020 1:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 940855

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20201116 LOL Quartet)

I have to say, in my humble opinion, the last one is the worst. Well, we all know it was supposed to work on the shock factory... But, at least, try to do something realistic... It even DOESN'T work like that. I'm ok with the shocking value, but at least, it needs to be kinda realistic....
by Razoredge
Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.
Replies: 15
Views: 10157

Re: A Chiasmus Through the Night – A Late, Late, S9 for Craftyatom.

That's a wonderful thing we have right here. And I have to say, thank you, for writting something like that, and share it with us. I really like this piece, because of your writing style (which is lovely), and because I kinda like to see something about present-days Hisao, which is pretty rare, sadl...
by Razoredge
Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1206
Views: 1176303

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/10)

As I just told you, this is a wonderful update. You got me on some points, and the part with Chisato struck me. You nailed this part, I have to say. Also, it brings some new stuff about Hisao's personality, and I really like it, especially how he tries to handle it without taking sides, as Blackmamb...
by Razoredge
Sun Nov 01, 2020 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)
Replies: 21
Views: 27435

Re: Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Pain (OC Story)

I have to say, I'm in full agreement with Chatty. This is wonderful. Brister, you have one of the best writing style out there. As usual, I don't write too much when I'm commenting a story, because I don't really know what to say, in fact. But, here, we have a wonderful start. We jump immediately in...
by Razoredge
Tue Oct 13, 2020 7:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)
Replies: 96
Views: 49082

Re: To Miss the Mark - An OC Pseudo-Route (Hitomi)

I have to say, that's some really high quality stuff. One of my favorites readings currently. It does has flaws, like everything, but besides that fact, it's a very enjoyable story. I'm really amaze about how you achieve to keep a high quality writing with such a quick pace. This is my first ime com...
by Razoredge
Tue Oct 06, 2020 2:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 66719

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-11 added 10-06-2020

Lotus https://i61.servimg.com/u/f61/17/47/20/86/bweh10.png First at all, I will thank Req for this piece of art. I really like it, and I hope you too. You should subscribe to his patreon, Req deserves it. Since my little stroll with Lilly and Saki last week, I have spent a lot of time with Lilly an...
by Razoredge
Sat Oct 03, 2020 12:45 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Some Emergancy commission goodness
Replies: 4
Views: 10197

Re: Some Emergancy commission goodness

I really like the style of the last piece.
by Razoredge
Tue Sep 29, 2020 9:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/15/21 Update)
Replies: 35
Views: 22853

Re: PsychicSpy's Oneshot Thread (9/29/20 Update)

It was quite a fine read, I have to admit, I really like your writing style. Your idea was good, really, even if I personaly don't see Shizune doing something like that. I would see her with responsabilities, in fact, because of her job in the Student council. But it was up to you, and you did a rea...
by Razoredge
Tue May 26, 2020 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1206
Views: 1176303

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)

That was another great chapter, Euro, as always. I'm stunned by your ability to maintain a great writing in every chapter, that's awesome.

I'm agree with Calcifer, it was a trope, but it fits great with the story.

Once again, that was a very pleasant reading, as always.
by Razoredge
Wed May 06, 2020 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1206
Views: 1176303

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 5/4)

That's a very cute art, to be honest. I love it.
by Razoredge
Tue Apr 21, 2020 10:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Anyone know when Lilly found out?
Replies: 17
Views: 12832

Re: Anyone know when Lilly found out?

Mirage_GSM wrote: Tue Apr 21, 2020 8:34 am AfaIct there is only one line referring to that topic in the LN
What do you mean by LN?

And I'm pretty sure she didn't leave Japan, for me it's a non-sense to leave a country and come back right after.
by Razoredge
Wed Apr 15, 2020 6:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New NSFW Art 2/22)
Replies: 1206
Views: 1176303

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 4/15)

Once again, it was a really pleasant reading. I don't know how you achieve to do it, but mixing sad feelings with happy feelings like that, it's amazing. There's sadness in this story, but also hope, and I try to hold on to that hope. I hope too, as HF, that they will find peace and solace together....
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 11, 2020 6:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 58
Views: 66719

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-10 added 03-11-2020

Green meadows In this school, there are two ways to start a school day – with or without an exam – and we have a history test this morning. I’m self-confident because I know a lot of things in this subject, and I work hard enough to get good grades. The class fills up slowly with a lot of anxious s...
by Razoredge
Mon Mar 02, 2020 6:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sands of Time
Replies: 15
Views: 6503

Re: The Sands of Time

Oddball, your writing is excellent, I have to say. It's always enjoyable to read your writing. Sometimes, I need some time to be able to understand one or two sentences, but overall, it's great. Besides, I really like the fact that you took the titles of the songs of the OST to name every chapter, i...
by Razoredge
Mon Feb 10, 2020 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/24/21--Wet Dreams)
Replies: 81
Views: 141983

Re: Hanako Fancopter One-Shots/Misc. Stuff (2/3/20--Contest Fic "The Last Stand")

WTF did I just read... As a smut thing, it was really good, I have to say. Some shock value there, but a pretty good one. That being said, I wasn't accustomed to this kind of Lilly, to be honest, but I really like the idea. Really good work for this piece, I really liked read this one. Your pairings...