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by TheHivemind
Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unsocratic Dialogue
Replies: 20
Views: 14586

Re: Unsocratic Dialogue

This is one of the best descriptions of the creative process I've ever seen. I don't think any other girl would work in this sort of a situation though; mostly because Rin's the only sort who'd even begin to think of this sort of thing. Pretty cool.
by TheHivemind
Sat Dec 15, 2007 9:30 am
Forum: Join the Dev Team
Topic: Artist: silentkyon
Replies: 31
Views: 21529

Re: Artist: silentkyon

Holy shit, that looks excellent to me.

Maybe a little work on the eyes to make them look less flat, but that's all I could think of. Marvelous.
by TheHivemind
Mon Dec 10, 2007 6:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Possibility for the Future
Replies: 6
Views: 5274

Re: A Possibility for the Future

A confident Hanako?

ADORABLE.
by TheHivemind
Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: On Understandings
Replies: 8
Views: 6319

Re: On Understandings

I'm starting to wonder why we even bothered creating a Main Character...

Because while it's fun and all to write about Emi and Rin knocking boots, the traditionalist in me wants to write some straight romance as well?

Like I said, this story was a break for me. Hisao will get his, so to speak ...
by TheHivemind
Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: On Understandings
Replies: 8
Views: 6319

Re: On Understandings

Cute, it had some nices ideas in it but I had bit of a problem with the sentence length.

Lack of fullstops, clear starts and finishes, threw me off a little bit. So do so many bracketed diversions of thought.

That's just the way I write this sort of stream-of-consciousness stuff, to be honest ...
by TheHivemind
Wed Dec 05, 2007 2:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: On Understandings
Replies: 8
Views: 6319

On Understandings

I promise I'll get back to work writing the actual game eventually.

Really! I promise! Just had to get this out of my system first.

Understandings

It's not something we tend to talk about a lot. We simply don't feel the need to, I guess. It's not like I've ever been especially talented at ...
by TheHivemind
Fri Nov 30, 2007 12:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Colourless Spaces
Replies: 9
Views: 6540

Re: Colourless Spaces

Here's something interesting. Maybe she's synesthetic . Blind people can be synesthetic according to the wiki article. So, in essence she would know colour (quite vividly as you have used in your story), and it would be very related to her music and touch.

Holy crap, a perfectly legitimate ...
by TheHivemind
Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Side-walk
Replies: 5
Views: 4467

Side-walk

Inspired by Aura's foray into Emi's head, I thought I'd make a sally into Rin's head.

I wonder if anyone else sees the world like I do sometimes. I'm walking down the street, not going anywhere in particular, just going for the sake of going, and the sun's high in the air and the wind kicks up ...
by TheHivemind
Sat Nov 24, 2007 12:30 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Act titles
Replies: 30
Views: 17990

Re: Act titles

Act 1: Unforeseen Consequences.
by TheHivemind
Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:01 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Crippled/Heart
Replies: 18
Views: 12757

Re: Crippled/Heart

I would totally be down for writing up highly implausible biographies for the characters of the ol' Crippled/Heart--but alas!

I fear we don't have any animators to make the dream a reality.

As for another visual novel, I suspect that sort of decision will be made after I see whether or not my ...
by TheHivemind
Mon Nov 05, 2007 11:06 pm
Forum: Join the Dev Team
Topic: I'd Like to Join
Replies: 15
Views: 11260

Re: I'd Like to Join

...Well, with all respect, what do I do now?

Am I part of the team? And if so, what is my job to help out?

It's not too difficult--read through any scene that wasn't already edited by me (see, I started out just editing, then stepped in to write Emi), and look for grammatical errors, clunky ...