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This is an amazing thread, the only thing I would suggest is something like a 'date compleated' or 'date last updated' line.
Anyway, just wanted to say: Thank you so much for doing this!

First of all, thanks for this Awsome story, I've always wanted to read a good Akira Route!
Second, and most important, don't kill yourself on our behalf, real life should always come first. Like Bagheera said, your real fans will be here. We may be impatianly awaiting story updates but hey, anyone ...

Seems good afer a quick read, I didn't notice any glaring mistakes.
One thing, it would be nice if you updated the title of the thread with the date when you add a section.
Seriously looking forward to more of this.

“Strike three!”

I lol'd at this point! great intro!
Looking forward to the story, no major problems that I noticed.

I love this story. Very well told. And just so you know this:

...Is it possible to contract a fever from severe blushing?

Is going to be used by me in conversation from now on.

Here's hoping that first person from Hanako's perspective isn't overdone:

As long as the quality is good this cannot be overdone, and the quality of your story so far is definitely good.

You do a great Rin, looking forward to your next post.

Really sappy. But then Hanako+sap= myfavoratethingever. Two thumbs up.

That was amazing! thanks for letting us see a little of their life together.

ShinigamiKenji wrote:

kw343 wrote:Welcome to my headcannon!

GAWD, HE SHOOTS HIS BRAINZ!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!

(Lose a friend, but never, absolutely NEVER lose a joke. )

I'm not shooting my head off, i have a cannon ... um for head ... and um i'm welcoming him to it.
(yeah that sounds good, we'll go with that)

Welcome to my headcannon!

All my feels are belong to you!

Just wanted to say I'm really looking forward to this.