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It has been weeks since last time I showed any signs of being alive. This being still a fairly new fan fiction, I don't have a fanbase to worry.

But truth is, I want to finish this fan fiction but I can not. I have drafts for another chapter or three lying around, but I get no-where with them. I ...

“So you don't want me to go home with you?” She asked me. Rin could be very confusing, at least to me, I wanted to be sure what she meant. So I asked.
“It's this or that.”
“Excuse me?”
“Either I go home with you Hisao or I stay here, what do you think I'd prefer?”
Who is saying What here?

Also ...

What is so hard about simply closing the door?

The fact that I don't feel like the door should be closed. :?

Consider it this way: Letting people know about Hisao's condition, I actually have a chance for some character development into the way Hisao thinks about his condition beyond what ...

Chapter 6

How Rin and I could fall asleep, I can not yet understand. Myself? Perhaps it was the culmination of a very busy day, for Rin? She had been sleeping for hours already, and I had pegged it unlikely that she could fall asleep again. But we fell asleep alright.

In the morning we found ...

Alright, revised the existing chapter 1 and split it up in short chapters.

People who have finished 'existing' chapter 1 may want to skip to chapter 4.

Chapter 5

No one can sleep forever, not even Rin. But I had to congratulate her on her efforts. She really slept heavily and it wasn't until sunset that she seemed to wake up again.

Of course, one thing is that people look so peaceful when they sleep. Another? What comes out of their mouth when ...

Chapter 4

The hardest thing, about falling asleep next to another person, is your breathing. Lying so close to another person that you can her them breath, makes you subconsciously attempt to match your own breath to theirs. Rin's breathing in, is only just a bit shorter than my own, yet her ...

Chapter 3

Kenji and I are sitting in an apartment, sparsely furnished, we are drinking beers and talking, sometimes smoking.
Talking about women, life, politics, the pointlessness of everything. Kenji is not the usual Kenji I know. While he does have some weird input in our conversation, like ...

Chapter 2

Everyone's attention is turned to the nurse, my own eyes affixed upon his hands placing a stethoscope on her chest.

Suddenly the nurse stands up and looks around.

“Nothing wrong, she is just overtired and needs a few days to relax. I understand she had a special excuse to perform an ...

Don't worry, I'm trying to sort out the wordiness, might take a while to perfect it. The shorter chapters are merely a biproduct of it. :)

but that might also be because I never played Rin's route.

Proceed with caution then, I won't spoiler all references to things that happens in Rin's route ...

Alright, I've been gone from the Katawa Shoujo forums for a few days, I don't suspect anyone has missed me since I am still fairly new. :lol:

I wrote some reasoning and analysing for what I've done since the last post, but let's face it: It's irrellevant. :wink:

I replayed Rin's storyline from ...

Thanks for your input once again.

Yes, I know Hisao most likely wouldn't have been able to carry Rin, he does have some issues - as should be appearent from the text itself - but the alternative was either a lot of breaks, which I felt would take up a lot of space in the text, or Hisao dropping ...

Considering no moderator/admin ripped my head off for posting seven consecutive posts, I'll take my chances again. :)

I've written a new 1st chapter and I'll focus on the post-Katawa Shoujo story line for now. The new story begins shortly before the end of Rin's storyline. :)

Everything else ...

Yeah, I guess I come off as pretentious far too often. :lol:

Taking that to heart, I'll reconsider their necessity. :)
Nice to see you've got a bit of humility and sense of humor about yourself. :D

You might just be an alright guy after all. :wink:

I'm a new guy, and you are an old guy ...

Yeah, I guess I come off as pretentious far too often.

Taking that to heart, I'll reconsider their necessity.