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I got it! Miki is like Rebecca - The one that does all of the tech stuff, Mutou is like Shaun - The guy that seems to know everything, Suzu is like Desmond - A completely oblivious test subject. Aaahh I wonder who will be like Lucy, although all she did was sit at her desk on a computer, and beat u...

I got it! Miki is like Rebecca - The one that does all of the tech stuff, Mutou is like Shaun - The guy that seems to know everything, Suzu is like Desmond - A completely oblivious test subject. Aaahh I wonder who will be like Lucy, although all she did was sit at her desk on a computer, and beat u...

I hope you'll pardon the massive wall of dialogue. These first two chapters were basically intended to be somewhat boring so that I could get basic information out there. Starting next chapter, things will really start to pick up. Chapter Two: Ancestry Miki leads me out of the room, giving me a big...

*shudder* Well, you've achieved your stated purpose. Good to know you can write such varied scenes. It honestly all depends on my mood. I'm generally always in a really good mood, hence why most of my stories are really vanilla. This one I was listening to the song that I used for the title, and I ...

I wanted to write a short, grimdark scene and was asking for suggestions. Garver said I should write what happens the day after Shizune's bad ending, and this is what I came up with. Withdrawl So, this is it then. I can't say I'm ready, but then again, who can? I have no emotion towards the subject...

I added another paragraph and a few extra lines here and there to sort of adjust the pacing a bit. I don't intend on making this first chapter any longer now, as I'm already planning out Chapter Two as we speak. Chapter Two should be out tomorrow.

Reading these killed my afternoon, but I said I would. :D "Belong" and "Really?" were the two biggest standouts. The Emi one, I forget the name, was something I haven't seen much of, if at all, and Drawbro makes a very classy Miki happen quite well. If there's any terrible missp...

I personally hate crossovers, but when this idea popped into my head, I realized that I wanted to write a series pertaining to this. This first chapter will hopefully be the shortest of them all, as I sort of wanted to push through explanations and establish some early play development to get you gu...

That's actually part of the narration, it's a stream of consciousness thing that I usually reserve for Suzu, and I can understand seeing it as an error since I didn't use it much here. Whoops. That's embarrassing. Thanks. Only fair to at least give you a little bit of feedback in terms of grammar, ...

This was long enough to go in its own thread, but I don't want to clutter the page, and also, I don't want to seem like I'm infringing on the whole "Hanako's secretive past encounter" idea that the talented Total Destruction is currently exploring. This is literally an idea that came to m...

Great as always.

Oh hey, Drawbro did some Miki art for me.

128-Up wrote: 01 - "Sure! I'll do the public speaking for you!"

I guess it's a good thing my Grad speech fiction isn't canon, then.

Color The Sky "Hisao, get your ass in gear! We're going to be late!" Typical Miki. She doesn't even know where I'm taking her on our anniversary dinner tonight, yet she's yelling at me to get ready faster. The reservation is for 7:30 this evening, and it's only 6:30 as of now. I toss on m...

Sappy Hanako is best Hanako. Well, insane and psychotic Hanako stories are interesting as well to be honest.

I enjoyed this one a good bit, pretty solid writing and pacing. Good work.