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Short scene I wrote today while running on minimal sleep, planning on a longer one for tomorrow. Leave The Lights On "H-Hisao?" I wake up to a start to a quivering voice beside me. The comfort of my dreams has been put on hiatus for a bit, as I reach my hand out and turn on my bedside lam...

Another collection read. -Wipes the sleep out of his eyes- 1: The Counterattack. I don't think I've ever laughed as much as I did reading this, especially in that climax. You really handled the characters respectfully and how you handled Kenji was spot on . 2: Yamaku's Class Commencement Speech. I ...

For one, it needed lyrics that Aiko could start singing. Granted, she could probably pick up the melody and hum, whistle or da-dah with that tune, perhaps with some air guitar for flavor, but the point was the brief lyrical interlude. 'Sides, it needed to be reasonably sappy/nerdy to fit with Hisao...

Man, why couldn't the song have been more badass? Something like this.

I'm fully aware of that. That's not the reason why I'm rewriting it though. Look at Chap 10 and then Chap 11. You'll see that in the former, it was focused mainly on Yaso making progress with his life at Yamaku. The latter, however, was focused on setting the stage for what's to come in Chap 12. I ...

Oh hey, you posted it here so I don't have to seek you out or anything. Forget what I said on /vg/ then. http://pastebin.com/wGukfnmP Bam. Enjoy. Heh, I see what you're saying with a couple of those things. The negatives of writing on three or so hours of sleep after work. Anyways, I'll fix what I ...

This story is intentionally as adorable as possible. Please enjoy some delicious vanilla. Nuvole Bianche Dull light creeps in through our open blinds, creating a blinding sensation as my eyes peel open for the first time this morning. I peer over to the window and notice that it has most definitely...

Quite an interesting story. I sort of called the whole Midori being the daughter of the two, or at least her and Hisao being related , but it was still nice to have it come out. The last chapter, even though a solid length, does seem a bit rushed and uneven at some points with the pacing, but forget...

I'd suggest reading 'Color The Sky' before this one, although it's not necessary. Oh yeah, and this has a lot of sex in it, so read at your own discretion. Affirmation We don't even make it through the door before she begins unleashing a flurry of kisses onto my body. I pick her up, her legs envelo...

Fitting Aiko into the world, rather than the other way around, has been one of the key points in making this work, I think. This is exactly what the problem is with most of the stories, though. People put these characters in with no real telling of how they eased in. It's kind of blunt and annoying...

You're making me blush. I'm glad I've been able to keep you entertained without focusing on the VN characters. Honestly, a lot of this is me lacing my own fiction into the KS world, so getting praise for it from someone who doesn't usually like OCs is extremely satisfying. As for 'well written', I'...

Banda wrote: This... Stupid ass bet.

I see what you did there.

This chapter was quite interesting. I'll agree with what Mirage said a bit earlier with just him falling and busting his head being the cause of death, yet... at the same time, it's possible. If the guy fell flat forward into concrete, it's completely possible. I figured it would have been something...

This is honestly the only OC story I can say I enjoy in terms of KS fanfics. The most well written, anyways. Ready for the next chapter, as usual. The last one did a good job of tying up loose ends and bringing up some new issues, so I'm intrigued to see where this goes.